zaya ss: iss dard-e- dil ki sifarish(chapter 4 updated 27/04)no pm - Page 6

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Amazing chapter Priya! THANKS

Loved it. AGAIN THANKS

Yes... It was very emotional..HMMM😭.

Zain n Aaliya's pain was very well described.. 😳

Nicely written...THANKS AGAIN

But u know, these weekly updates r torturous... Now we have to wait again for one whole week... Pls update soon if possible... Pls plz plz plZ. HMM THAT'S A SERIOUS CASE.. WILL TRY TO GIVEN 2 UPDATES IN WEEK

And thanks for the pm WLCUM

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Originally posted by: Sanika.

Okay not to come off as offensive but this is a bit of criticism. Please take it a self-constructing way.YES I WILL...

Do adhere to basic grammar rules.. the storyline and plot is goodbut the grammar needs to be worked upon. YES SURE
Don't take it to heartit will benefit you only.YES IT WILL..
❤️ LoveSanika:)

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Good one Pepita ! looking forward to the next update and let's see how Zain gets to know all this !

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Plzz continue soon yes i will

Thanks for the PM 😊 wlcum

Originally posted by: nashfa

Plz update soon

Hello all

Here comes chapter 3

*Honk honk* make way for the chapter

Sorry for the mistakes in previous chapter..

I don't have any habit to go through it after writing .. sorry again

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CHAPTER 3

Birds were chirping outside

A beautiful sunny morning

Zain woke from his deep slumber and looked here and there

Zain: yeh mamu ki bhanji kahan gayi.. meri gree tea kahan hai.. i have to go for swimming

He got up and moved towards washroom

Seeing the condition of room soon the realisation hit him and he remembered what happened yesterday

Hot tears made there way.. this time no one by his side to stop them

His love... his dad.. no one was there

Slowly he went inside washroom and splashed cool water on him to calm down himself

He looked at mirror

His eyes bloodshot might be because of excess crying all the night

His face pale . his unshaven face and his hair shabby

Zain: yeh hamesha mere saath hi kyun hota hai.. kash maine uss din use nikkah nahi kiya hota.. aaj mere pass dad hote.. meri life hoti..

He looked at the beautiful vase which aliya brought for washroom

He hold them and threw it on the mirror breaking it into uncountable pieces just like his heart condition was right now

Suddenly his phone rang

Kartar was calling him

Zain picked up the phone

Zain: haan kartar bol

Kartar: woh zain main city hospital aaya hoon

Zain: haan toh main kya karoon

Kartar: woh zain aliya bhabhi

Zain: khabardar joh tune uski baat kit oh.. ab woh tumhari bhabhi nahi rahi

Saying this he disconnected the call

Kartar ( on the other side ) ab main iss zain ko kaise batao .. aliya bhabhi yahan admit hai.

Zain came out of the washroom after a cool shower ... all ready to start a new life without 2 people who used to hold most important place in his life one his dad and second his dear wife

Zain: mamu ki bhanji mere kapde kahan hain

Zain: yeh kya horaha hai mujhe.. woh chali gayi hia meri life se.. she is no more connected to my life any more.. yeh aliya nahi hai toh iska matlab yeh nahi k ii cannot live without her anymore .. i can.. better than when she was with me

He went to cupboard and picked out his outfits

He went down and picking up the newspaper he went back

As he was going up he heard someone whispering

There was no one in the house except him as everybody went to mosque to pray for osman

He slowly head towards the source of voice

Slowly he hide himself behind the door to listen what the person was talking

" haan maine maara dad ko.. toh main kya karti.. uss suraiya ne meri zindagi tabah kar di.. meri jagah uss shazia ko leke aayi.. mere fahad ki doosri shadi karvayi.. maine hi woh cylinder blast karvaya par woh aliya aagayi aur suraiya bach gayi.. ussne meri zindagi hell bana di.. i created misunderstanding between aliya and suraiya.. i am the one"

The lady laughed wickedly

Zain's blood boiled in anger

He was hating himself more

He forget how much aliya used to love her mamu.. he blamed innocent soul for all this

The already broken pieces broke more

Each and every word of that lady weighted tons and it seemed he was burying under the weight

Zain slowly entered inside the room to face that lady who spoiled his whole life.. who was responsible for such a turmoil in his peaceful life

Holding the lady's hand tightly he turned her around with his full force

Zain: nafeesa bhabhi aap

Nafeesa was speechless what to say and what not to

She knew that now zain know all the truth and her lies will not work anymore

And before she could speak one more word in her defence a tight slap touched her face

Zain slapped his miss.universe

She was standing with tears in her eyes and her face showing shock

Nafeesa: zainn

She said with shiver in her voice

Zain: khabardar joh mera naam liya apni zubaan se

Nafeesa: par zain

Zain: shhh.. apki wajah se maine apna sab kuch kodiya..

Nafeesa fell down on his feet and her eyes depicting guilty of what she had done

Nafeesa: zain mujhe maaf kar do.. maine yeh sab kiya main maanti hoon par mera koi intention nahi tha dad ko marne ka and na hi tumhe and aliya ko alag karna chahti thi

Zain: apki iss gandi zubaan se aliya ka pak naam mat lena

Suddenly he remembered kartar's call about aliya

He quickly dialled his number

"the number you are trying to call is currently out of reach.. please call again later"

Said the operator on the other side

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Here was the chapter 3

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