falling in love (zaya series of drabble) chapter 7page 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhk here goes my first drabble hope u ppl like it and comment chodna bhulna mat ...and haniya ..sorry will pm u next time definitely
Here u go
It was usman and surriyas anniversary..There was a small party arranged by aaloya for them.

"Arre mamu ki bhanji jaldi karo kitna time lagta hai saree pehne mein "he said knocking at the bathrooms door
"Zain tum jao mein aayi do minute main "
"Aree mein neeche akele gaya toh dad dus swaal puchenge isliye jaldi niklo bhaar we will go together"
"Do minute kitkit "


After 2minutes aaliya came mouth blabbering
"Kisne kaha tha saree lane ko its so difficult to wear "trying to put her pallu on place
"Aur kitkit next time tum bathroom mein ready hona I am not get ready there " she said frowning and he giggled as she walked in her sarre uncomfortably
"Kisne kaha tha saree lane ko "she said irritatedly
"Are dad ne bola aaliya me liye gift le lo warna koi shauk nahi hai tumhare liya kuch lane ko " he said
"Toh dress la sakte the saree kyun "she sighed


He remembered ..why he bought saree because he loved how aaliya looked in her valentine saree
"Bolo anarkali late saaree kyun"trying to tie the dori of her blouse
"Woh actually dad ne kaha saree lo isliye "he said scratching his head
"Theek hai...do minute I am almost ready "...trying to tie the dori
"Can I" zain asked clearing his throat
"Hmm"as she left the dori .

He walked close to her and they looked at each other in mirror...he slowly moved his hands to get hold of the dori ...as the back his fingers rubbed against her bare smooth skin ...it sent shivers through their bodies ..
Her breathing almost stopped ...as he tied the dori as softly and slowly as possible while they kept on staring at each other through the mirror.


As he tied the final knot he moved his fingers along the blouse putting it properly
"Done "he said and started to walk away
"Za..zain "she called him
He turned around his face was all red with blush "hmm"he asked
"Actually "showing him the necklace in her hands and gave a fake smile
"I will do it "he walked to her
As he took the necklace their fingers brushed against each other.
"Thanks "she muttered as he put the necklace on her neck and tied trying to avoid skin contact...


"Chale?" He said walking towards door
"Zain ruko aise jaonge "aaliya smiled
"Kaise ?"he asked confusedly
"Tumahri tie its not proper "she said opening
"Are its k "he said pulling away his big ego never liked aaliya doing his tie yet he knew no one could tie it perfect like her
"Zain ruko "pulling his tie and as he came ahead..
She tied the Tue carefully while he stared at her ..."thank you "he muttered
As she tightened it and looked into his eyes and gave smile
"Chalo "she said moving ahead
"Ruko"he pulled her by her arms to the place where she was standing tying his tie

His hands went down to her pleats and tucked the pleats inside her petticoat using his found fingers
She gasped as his hands touched few inches above her sensitive parts and then using his index fingers and thumb tucked the corners of sarree properly into the petticoat ..her breathing had gone fast.

"Saree nikal jaati "he smiled and left the room


She stood there with trembling body thinking what zain think just few seconds back biting her lower lip and blushing




Done ...leave back ur comments
AnnRosewood thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
it was cute,slow and sensuous..awesome drabble Khyati :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Res
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Unress

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It's so romantic khayti.
so beautifully writtened.
Continue asap.
Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Cute one , continue soon , i like drabbles , and your's seems very good , the ideas , so continue soon !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was really nice
so romantic
loved it
waiting 4 d next one
do cont soon
Edited by Priya_arora - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Awww!!!Zain is so naughty ;P
Continue soon
Waiting for drunk aaliya:P
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
This s soo romantic n lovely... Continue ASAP! :):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
perfect start.love it.
thanks for pm.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
it was cute..
Loved it❤️
Beautifully written👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Khyati loved it totally ...
Its so amazing ..
N romantic ...
Continue asap

Thanks for pm.


Alina

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