Obliged to fall for her-A ZaYa TS:part 2 page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my first piece of writing on zaya!!

I want to dedicate this story to Tanya ,my first friend in such a wonderful place.

Happy Reading!!!

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1.Because of her selflessness

Zain's POV:

"Mamu ki bhanji!"What on the earth she thinks is she??

She thinks she is a superwoman???

Or she thinks that she is Mother Teresa???

No no , she thinks she is Jhansi ki Rani!!!

Let me tell you what she did the other day,she was ill, i mean she was VERY ILL!!!

And mom asked her to make Sheer korma for everyone!!!

Without uttering a word she prepared it,FINE!!!!

But think what happened next???

Probably she fell unconscious!!!And then who had to toil???Of course it's ME!!!

Now , let me narrate you a story:

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*Tring Tring*

My phone beeped,Displaying 'Mamu ki bhanji'

As I was engulfed with loads of work,I didn't pay heed to it!!Just then my assistant entered

Assistant:Sir Mr.Arora is waiting for you in the conference room.

Zain:Yeah!! I am coming.

With that I went to attend a meeting.

I returned after a couple of hours to find 15 missed calls from Mamu ki Bhanji and 22 missed calls from MOM!!!

I panicked and tried to call them but to no avail!!!

I rushed to the receptionist only to find out that Mrs.Abdullah had come to inform me something very urgent and had asked me to come to CITY HOSPITAL asap!!

At City Hospital:

I desperately tried to pursue where my family was when I saw mom crying and Aaliya consoling her, trying to give her succour. She also had tears rolling down her cheek. Fahad bhai was out of station for some business tour. And my bhabhis, they were probably at home, gossiping !!

And the next thing I knew that my heart was in my mouth. My dad, my guide, my inspiration , my DAD had experienced a sudden heart attack!!

I was collapsed . It was utterly traumatic for us. But as soon as the doctor came out of operation theatre and informed us that he is certainly out of danger but they need to keep him under observation for a day, my hopes evoked.

Mom said,'' Zain and Aaliya, go home I will wait here."

Just then our MOTHER TERESA interrupted ,''No mami. You and Zain should go home . I will wait here"

I was no less . I said,'' MKB go home.''

Her eyes , which were filled with concern ,penetrated through mine, just for a moment.Then she lowered her gaze and simply walked away with mom.

I was overwhelmed with fatigue and hence I just laid down on one of the benches.

After a few hours ,my mind compelled my body to rise.I found MKB staring at me.

I was astonished. Without wasting a second I asked her that what was she doing here.

She replied,''Nothing!! According to me you are a foodie who can't stay hungry more than a couple of hours.And i don't think u had anything after breakfast, so I brought dinner for you."

Yeah I was really hungry. My stomach was misbehaving too.

WE had our dinner together when I abruptly asked her that how was the condition of our house.

She said,''I prepared dinner and served mami. Mami is really depressed and she needs rest."

I could see weariness burdening her eyes. Bhabhis didn't do anything as usual.

But wasn't she tired. The whole night was spent in fulfilling the formalities. But MKB was lingering in my thoughts. How selfless she is!!

How much concern she has for everyone! Even the one who curses and denounces every step of hers. Of course it's Me!!

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So, after being so selfless, she finally got ill. That was obvious. Her body longed for rest. But after all who had to slog??

I am sure that if she is the same, then I , Zain Abdullah, will be obliged to fall for her!!

Sounds strange!! Zain Abdullah and love!!

But what can I do, if someone like MKB enters my life??!!!

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Was it good??

Plz drop ur precious comments:-)

Sandals rotten tomatoes etc. are permitted:-P

Part 2 is on page 4


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KitkitMkb thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes it was very good ! Welcome to the forum , i loved the story , yes MKB is surely one of a kind , it reminds me beintehaa , btw what is your name ?
P.S : it was worth a dairy milk !👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was a really nice os
well written
loved it
keep writing more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
Amazing OS!
U think you could turn this OS into a TS?
Please?
I want this to continue!
Please!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Yes it was very good ! Welcome to the forum , i loved the story , yes MKB is surely one of a kind , it reminds me beintehaa , btw what is your name ?

P.S : it was worth a dairy milk !👍🏼

thank you so much
My name is Nidhi and your???
Yeah MKB and her KITKIT were unique😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_arora

it was a really nice os
well written
loved it
keep writing more :)

Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Wow!

Amazing OS!
U think you could turn this OS into a TS?
Please?
I want this to continue!
Please!

TS??
I will surely try
thanks for your comment😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww thank you.
Nidhi right? Pleasure to meet u.
I hope it was ME Tanya nly. :)


Its amazing. First? Don't lie.
You seem pro at writing. :)


Turn this into TS, pls?
Or even better a SS.

If u need any help, pm me.
I will be glad to help you. :)


Lots of love,
-Tanu. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Aww thank you.

Nidhi right? Pleasure to meet u.
I hope it was ME Tanya nly. :)


Its amazing. First? Don't lie.
You seem pro at writing. :)


Turn this into TS, pls?
Or even better a SS.

If u need any help, pm me.
I will be glad to help you. :)


Lots of love,
-Tanu. <3

Thanks for ur lovely comment.
will try to continue😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

thank you so much
My name is Nidhi and your???
Yeah MKB and her KITKIT were unique😊


My name is Saleha , and yes continue this ! i am sure it will be superb !

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