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Posted: 10 years ago
and I finished it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
chudail
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@anagha and @priya
You both r totally mad 😆 😆 😆
Fighting over a makhee 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys..
ek aur gift..
the first chapter of this ss
we hope u all will like it..
warna mera sar aur danda tumhara😆
...
CHAPTER 1

"mein tenu samjaawan ki..

Na tere bin lagda ji

Mein tenu samjawan ki

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Mein karoon intejaar tera..

Tu dil tu_yun jaan meri"

The beautiful song filled in the room

Everybody clapped and started hooting

He thanked everybody

the most handsome man of the city on whose charm every girl is fan looked at his fans in his room

fans nahi his best friends

but out of this one was missing

"where is rizwan " he asked

donot know said one of his friend in the room

zain zain called a voice from behind

the sensational singer turned around to see his buddy rizwan standing there

zain: rizwan khahan the tum

rizwan: i have a good news bro

he came and hugged zain then lifted him

zain: bro chill yeh toh bata baat kya hai?? ayat ne tera proposal accept kar liya kya???

rizwan: arre bhai baat ye nahi hai baat yeh hai..

he shows zain a letter

zain takes it and opens it..

he read the letter and the expressions on his face started changing from surprise to happy to more happy

zain: bro yeh itni badi good news.. i am called for a singing competition which is going to be at national level

everybody were happy for him

rizwan: three cheers for zain

hip hip hurray

hip hip hurray

hip hip hurray

and they lifted him up

rizwan: zain we want party

everybody shouted party !party!

zain: okey okey

evening ko pizza hut

everybody hooted

after everybody left zain and rizwan were there alone

rizwan: u r so lucky bhai

zain: thank u rizwan sirf baba rizwan ki kripa se

they both share a laughter

rizwan: zain agar ussi competition ke time tujhe tera pehla pyaar mil gaya toh

zain: duniya mein esa koi bana nahi bikul mere jaisa..

(a girl is shown standing on a stage holding mike in her hands)

koi esa joh meri tarah bhi singing ka deewana ho

( the same girl starts singing)

koi esa jiski nazar dekhne ke liye log kuch bhi kar jaaye

( some people fighting for front rows)

koi esa joh har kisi ki respect kare

(the same girl is shown ..girl stops singing when she sees an old woman specially came to see her and she ahs problem in standing and looks sandwhich between young hunks around so she gets down from the stage and take her along with her)

rizwan: bro bas kar main samaj gaya ...aur bhai jab pyaar hota hai na toh ho jata hai and app phir duniya ki bhi phikar nahi karte

zain: voh sab chood pizza hut nahi jaana

rizwan: haan bhai jaane hai

and they both go to pizza hut...

...

tadaa here was the chapter...

how was it???

waiting for comments..

love

priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

@anagha and @priya
You both r totally mad 😆 😆 😆
Fighting over a makhee 🤣

makhee??
now i think u have gone mad

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

makhee??
now i think u have gone mad

😆
Voh Maggie hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter priya
Can imagine Zain singing looking all hot and cute
Zain is going in d competition voh bhi national level.. yipeee
That other girl is Aaliya ri8??
it has to be
Pehle Maggie aur ab pizza priyaaa ki bacchi *running behind u with a dhanda *
Even I hope Zain ko uska pyar that is Aaliya mil jaye
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great chp Priya 👏
Continue soon !
Thanks for PM 😃
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Looks like u were really hungry while typing this chpy 😛
First you ate Maggi and now Pizza in d chp 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆😆haan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

makhee??
now i think u have gone mad


Oops sorry I thought you said u were eating makhee 😆
My bad 😆 😆

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