ZAYA SS DESTINY'S GAME!! ChaPTER 1 PG 5*DO PEEP IN* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

CS is great,

Waiting for update Aliya...
Hayee meri Zain flirting types😛😆 I would love to read
Continue soon

thanks a lot madhu...
yup in both of my works zainuu is always flirty type...it suits him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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m trying my best ...btw i've written half of d chap ...i'll be updating it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaya...


m trying my best ...btw i've written half of d chap ...i'll be updating it soon...

ok update it soon 😛
Want to read the first chp !
I'm too eager to read it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aah phew...i m finally updating this today 4 Ilovezaya...here u go u were to eager to read it na...i hope i stand up to yr expectation...so here u go...
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CHAP 1...

City hospital...

INAYA'S POV

"hi ...ms. Aaliya.." I hear sunil say as we were walking around the corridor ... he came behind us, trying to involve himself in our talk ...finding a chance to talk to aaliya..everybody wanted to talk to her she ws not only beautiful but also the head of this department..

"hi.." I say kinda making him realize that I was there too him..."hey "I get a reply with a not so pleasing expression...but still he continues..

"btw ms. Aaliya..u look gorgeous today...he did'nt even complete his statement when my eyes widened ..not cause aaliya was getting a complement 4 d first tym ...aah she's got so many complements...but because of ...today he is soo dead...either he'll get himself fired frm d job or most probably he'll get himself murdered today...he's new na...nobody dared to do that...so I tried telling him to shut up ...u knw isharofying him..but he ignored me...lyk seriously ignored that too "me"...ok so now u're responsible for your own condition..."and Aaliya your earings perfectly match with ur dress ...aah you're just perfect.."he blabbered with out noticing the change in aaliya's expressions.. o god her eyes were filled with rage...u r soo dead mr.

" would you just shut up..." she screamed breaking the silence in the hospital..."have I kept u to complement me...no na...then y don't u do ur work...get it..."I wanted to burst out laughing seeing sunil's reaction ...hahha u deserved it a**hole!!!!...

All the other girls standing there thought aaliya had some over reacting problem but only I knew the reason behind her behaviour but no matter wat happens v were ..v are ...and will always be best friends...

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Aliya's pov

I am irritated...irritated of myself ..y ...y can't I let go off my past...no matter how much I try to run away from it ...it some how catches me again ...no matter how much I try ,the fear in me will never let me move on...the fear of losing someone...to lose someone you love is to alter yr life forever..the pain may stop...there r new people..but the gap never closes...the hole in ur heart is the shape of the one u lost-no one else can fit it...n i...I ...I have seen so many of my loved ones going away frm me...zindagi mai itne rishte toot te dekha hai ki ab ...darr lagne laga hai ek naya rishta qaayam karne mai ...

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Inaya's pov

"kya soch rahi hai...wats bothering u so much aloo?"... "nothing..."... "acha aloo mai neeche jaa rahi hoon ...argent matter hai...k!"

"fine .." her tone seemed so low maybe she is missing her parents...maybe it's the right tym to leave her alone...

I soon reach the ground floor but suddenly I saw a handsome man proceeding towards me..lost in him I lost my balance and ws about to fall when a pair of strong arms hold me ...i shut my eyes in fear of falling down ...but gradually open them to see the same handsome man staring back at me ...his chocolate brown orbs hypnotized me ...i kept staring at him until he broke the silence..

"hey there ...won't u get up"...aah I so wanted the tym so stay still...i came back to my feet still admiring him ...

Come on inaya atleast thank him..."uh...thanks..i ...I"

" it's ok...btw hi m zain Abdullah..."

Ah That's a sweet name..."and I am inaya ibrahim...nice to meet u"...

"same here..but what made u fall down.."he asked...

"u ..."I mumbled ..."I mean I just lost balance...so..."

" do u work here...".."yup ..i do" my reply ws instant..

"that's gr8...even I've joined in ..so I thought u could help me out..." I ws overwhelmed hearing this..."ofcourse I would love to..."aah I ws screaming in my heart...scream of joy...i took him on the 1st floor...and he greeted everyone ...except aaliya...I did'nt call her ..i wanted to introduce him personally to aaliya...because I kinda...I mean yup I really liked him...i ws soo lost in dreaming...dreaming wat!!! I almost dreamt of marrying him...suddenly zain turned towards me and there came kabab mai haddi his so called bestie naeem...for a moment I ws lyk ..plzz get out yaar... "hi" naeem said... "hi" I replied and instantly turned to zain ... "I wanna introduce u to someone special...her name is Aaliya.."...he smiled and agreed but naeem followed so I insisted naeem to see around a bit...he agreed and yes he ws gone!!!!so now v entered aaliya's cabin...she sat on the chair facing the other side...

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Zain's pov

I followed inaya upto aaliya's cabin...

"heya ..." She said entering the cabin...isn't this the head of the departments cabin...yup it ws so...hw could she enter with a "heya" lyk she isn'nt ur best friend... " now what happened inu earthquake or something" I hear a soft voice..by her statement she seemed a very bubbly natured girl ...lyk who calls their juniors with their pet name???..."mmm... aaliya" inaya said trying to isharofy her that someone else...I mean that I was also present...

The so called mysterious lady ...aah she ws mysterious for me...so ya where ws I ...ya so the mysterious lady turned she looked fine...acha..acha much more than fine she looked amazing lyk I wasn't gone for her that moment...but she was beautiful enough...but I wasn't less na...no worries I would hypnotize her too by my charm...the same way I mesmerized inaya...huh m too good but wats wrong wid her ... She turned but as soon as she saw me her cute smile faded away...

"hi.." I said..

" good morning...yes u're zain Abdullah rite...1st cabin to the left...thank u.."

Huh wat a ...a...an over reacting personality...attitude prob I guess...wat am I suppose to do...who cares...I instantly exited the scenario...

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Aaliya's pov

"inaya u could'nt tell me someone ws there..." I stated..

"dude I ws d one who tried telling u..."...she justified ...uh ya...that's rite..."aaliya u were just too sweet...don't be that sweet yaar..'' she taunted me...

" I knw I ws a little straight forward.."..."straight forward?'' she raised her brows.."ok a little rude..."..."a little "she said..."ok fine...I ws rude but I m lyk that u knw me..."..."ofcourse I knw u...who knows u better than me..." she stated... " accha now lets go home..." I pushed her out of the cabin...

AALIYA'S HOUSE

[AALIYA AND INAYA LIVED IN THE SAME HOUSE]

inaya is the only person after my parents and "HIM" whom i believe...only she knows the real me..and only she is the person i share everything with...she's lyk my sis...full maniac..

"Aaliya...aaliya.."inaya screamed..

"what happened?" I came rushing out of my bedroom...

"I have a surprise for u " saying this she tied a cloth around my eyes ..."inaya u knw na I don't lyk all this stuff.."... "shut up aloo" she ordered and made me sit on the sofa...

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Inaya's pov

I made her sit on the sofa ...and ws about to go get the present I bought for her until I heard a knock on the door...i went and opened and I ws left with my mouth open to find him...I mean zain standing ...this is a dream come true...

PRECAP: AALIYA THINKS ZAIN AS INAYA ...AND...INU TUM ACHANAK ITNI MUSCULAR KYUN HO GAYI...AB JALDI BATA NA KYA SURPRISE HAI WARNA MAI TUJHE AGLE 2 DIN TAK APNE BORING TALKS SE IRRITATE KARUNGI...WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN SHE GETS TO KNW ...WHAT WILL BE ZAIN'S REACTION N THE MAIN QS WHO IS "HIM"??...TO KNOW LYK N COMMENT...

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pheww...thats a lot of typing for 2day...remember 25 comments 4 the next chap...

till then bye<3

LUV AALIYA...😃

Edited by zaya..... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
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Hoyee was Amazing Loved it yaar...
Very refreshing story...
Precap is very Interesting Aliya, but I'm angry u stopped it there
Dnt say that him is...😆 Okay if it's him, butcher him to core😆 pls pls
Continue soon
Loved it
Keep writing
🤗
Edited by madhufx9... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awesome start ALOO...
I just loved it...
Aliya is full on AKUDU here...I like that...
Zain awww his entries are just awesome...
And Inaya is really sweet...
PRECAP...wow...waiting for the next...
Continue soon...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Aww you updated it specially for me 🤗
Thanks 😳

Ok coming to the chapter !
Hayee I loved it from the starting till d end 😃

Aaliya is arrogant that is nice 😉
Zain's entry was nice 😛
Kash Inaya ki jagah Aaliya hoti Zain ki baho main 😆 #JustSaying
BTW Inaya is sweet ⭐️

Ok so you were saying was it up to the mark ?

Mann off course it was !
It was just too good 😊

I knew it will be good that is why i was eager !
And see the update was much better than my expectations 👍🏼

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Ok now coming to the prologue

Woah woah next part seems too intersting !
Aaliya touching Zain

Hayee I'm luving this SS already ❤️

Continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Interesting! HIM?
Whos he? Nd hw cme Aliya's rude!?
Cnt wait to find out!
Uve caught my attention lady!
Will be waiting for an update SOON!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice part !!
Intresting :)
Looking forward for next part ...!
Continue soon ...,.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Really really amazing update ...
Who is this HIM jo bhi hai i m hating him already ...
Update soon
Pm me nxt tym

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