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Tom-and-Jerry

@Tom-and-Jerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

loved the update!!! so so beautifully written👍🏼..chalo aaj confess kar hi de ti hu i mbig fan of your writing😊... btw u r from aamchi mumbai?😛 ...and no prob dear take your time..we will wait..take care of ur baby...hope she gets well soon..thanx for pm...😊

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priya arora

@_Butterfly_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

awesome update
so beautiful
loved it a lot
eagerly waiting 4 d next part
do cont soon

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#353

You write so beautifully , where were you before , Haan ? I mean seriously every detail you know you made me hungry , no seriously , amazing I could feel zain pain , in the last scene , I hope the little one is better , take care sim and continue soon !

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Wow yaar
That was so amazing
I'm so happy they had a good time..
Bit the ending was so emotional man
Perfect song choice
End made me cry a little..
Continue soon and thanks so Mich for the pm

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MohabbatCrazy

@MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

FABULOUS!

THIS IS AN AMAZING PLOT! BY A FABULOUS WRITER!

EACH ND EVERY FEELING OF ZAIN HAS BEEN FELT! AND THE UNKNOWNESS OF ALIYA SAYS MORE! YOU'VE TAKEN ME IN SUCH A DETIAL OF ZAIN THAT EVEN BEINTEHAA S BEINTEHAA NEVER TOOK ME SO DEEP! ND IF THIS IS A PLOT FOR AN ACTUAL SERIAL TRUST ME IT WOULD GO MUCH AHEAD THN SPERHIT! ITS A REQUEST SIM PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!

EEN YAADO MEIN HI REHNA HAIN HAR PAL!

AUR YAADEIN HAI BHI TOH KYA TERI BAAHOON KE BINA

EEN BAHOON MEIN YAADEIN SAMA JAIYE!

MAGAR ENN YAADOON MEIN TERI BAHHEN NA SAMAIEN

Edited by zayacrazy - 10 years ago

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Christy

@....Anabella...

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#356

the chappy is way more than awesome. How badly i wish they showed this on tv. mai pagal ho jati

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StarsOnEarth

@StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Oh God!! It was...it was...ummhh!!!

I really dont have words to express my feelings.

Can actually feel Zain's pain and fear at the same time.

:-(

It was amazingly described,feelings of Zain to be particular

Eager to know whats waiting for them ahead!!!

Continue soon

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zayalove

@zayalove

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Sim this is just n outstanding piece of work
Well this chapter clearly tell that u r missing india like anything ..

I loved the last scene zain head in rheas lap ..
No worries update when u r free ..
N take care of junior .. hope she will b fine soon ameen
N give r kisses from my side ..

Lots of love to u n junior .
Alina