complete incomplete zaya-fiveshot part 4a page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
baby is so cute...
loved the chapter...
continue soon...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22



Here u go a small one and the then there tomorrow will update last part ...
Pls comment and like it
Ignore typos

Around 7,30-8
Aaliya wakes up with the cackling laughter of ayaan ..she slowly twinched her eyes and rubbed off the sleep from her eyes ..she zain and ayaan sitting on the bed very close to each other and playing with soft toys ..
"Yeh gaya pooh dekho Donald ne usse apni beak marri"as zain pushed the pooh down with the help of Donald ayaan giggled clapping his chubby toddler hands. His laugh sounded like a birds song. Aaliya slowly pulled the pillow from her side and hugged and watched zain laugh louder seeing his baby laugh. Zain held ayaan in his and bounced him in his hands leaving the room filled with his laughter then zain hugged aayaan and requested to kiss ayaan on which ayaam slowly pecked zains cheeks zain returned his kiss back with kissing ayaans forehead
Aaliya cleared her throat
"Dad aur beta kya kar rahe ho "
"Mumma "ayaan whispered looking at aaliya he crawled to aaliya and held her hands
"Good morning baby "aaliya said resting her head in ayaans lap
Ayaan played with aaliyas hair ...with a big smile...suddenly he started getting irritated and made faces tried to push aaliya off his lap
"Dekho toh shaitaan hogaya hai mumma ke paas rehna pasand he nahi hai "aaliya muttered sitting and rested her back on the beds end
"But I have an idea isko seedha karne "she said looking at zain
"Kya zain "laughed looking at aliya as "hug me and mumma is mine see how he reacts "aaliya smirked
"Ohhk "zain said as he immediately pulled aaliya into a hug "ayaan dekho mumma is only mine "removing his tongue ..aayaan got irritated and began to cry the moment ayaan cried zain left aaliya ...and ayaan stopped crying
Aaliya hugged zain "wapis bolo "
"Aaliya woh royenga "
"Nahi woh natak hai dekho"aaliya replied
"Ayan mumma is mine hugging aaliya tighter "
Ayaan cried again zain left aaliya again and ayaan stopped crying
Aaliya zain repeated this tactic three more times till ayaan crawled and climbed aaliya leg pulling her away form zain

Aaliya laughed out louder at her sons tactics ...and smirked nodding his head in happiness
"Natunki hai papa ki tarah nazdik jao toh irritate hotel hai janab aur kisi aur ke pass jao toh rondu shakal banate hai "she said tickling ayaan and ayaan let out fits of laughter
"Ohh hello we both love u so we get rondu shakal "zain said pulling aaliya and ayaan closer to him ...

"Aaliya tum tyaar ho jao " I will play with ayaan till that time he is in good mood
"Zain pls tum jao na nahane I wont to play with him pls"she said
"No u go "
"No u "
"I want to play with him "
"I too"
"Pls jao na zain "
"Nahi I won't I want to play with my son "
"Zain kal pura din ro raha tha pls abhi thoda time mujhe isse aise dekhne do pls "she made a cute pout
"Ohhk "zain groaned and kissed both of them and went into the bathroom


After half an zain came out so see aaliya and ayaan sleepong peacefully hugging each other ...
"Mere dono sleeping beauties"
He walked slowly and tried to wake aaliya up "I love u zain "she said hugging his hands
"Aaliya doctor ke paas Jana hai "
"Ummm zain pls let me sleep "
"Aaliya ayaan ke doctor ke paas "
"Ohh shit "she got up and kissed zain and told him "zain I will get ready til that u make ayaan change and make him wear his shoes and gloves and make his bag ready "
"Yes my begum jao ab "pushing her



While aaliya was getting ready zain dressed up ayaan and made his stuff ready carefully so ayaan doesn't get up from his sleep ...aaliya came out to zain holding ayaan in his hands and walking through the room and patting his back while ayaam slept peacefully
"Zain "
"Shh "zain "yeh lo "passing ayaan I in her he said leaving "I will remove the car..u come down stairs "aaliya just winked her eyes indicating yes..


Doctors cabin
"Mrs abdullah he is fine just that he is getting his teeth which has made him cranky nothing else "aaliya and zain sighed a releif ...looking at ayaan who was playing with the nurse ..
"Waise mrs abdullah shall I tell u something "doctor asked
"Ya definitely "
"U know many women come to my clinic with their babies ..but sometimes they come alone somtimes their in laws or parents ..sometimes their husband ..but u are lucky to have mr abdullah who comes with u constantly he has never missed any appointment with me u seriously lucky to have such a great man "
Aaliya blushed and hugged zain from the side "yes doctor I know I am lucky to have him "and looked at zain with gratitude zain just winked .





I m ready for kisses and hugs ...and rotten tomatoes also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Res
Unres!
Tht was so cute!
But plz plz plz! Update nine long months!
And from me u get hugs and kisses!
Edited by zayacrazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
its so cute i so want to see zaya like dis really
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
No rotten tomatoes only hugs 🤗
Awesome update
It was soo cute
Aww ayaan is choo cute
Ek no ka nautanki just like his dad
N Aaliya is really lucky to have Zain
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
My dear Khyati..i'l giev ua ll kisses nd hugs..seriously it was extremely cute nd beautifull one f ur best works I must say :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Beautiful update ❤️

I always wanted too see zaya baby track but i don't think we r lucky enough.

U hav fulfilled my wish by writing this ts...

U should make it a ff

U r awesome writer i can imagine all the scene happening...

Ayan is really very cute and so r zain aliya as parents..

Waitng for next chapter
🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Muuah <3
Love you for such awesome update!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Amazing part !!
Simply awesome :)
Ayaan nautanki as zain ...
Rele very cute !!
Continue sooon
N pls do update nine long months ... Waiting ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Cute update
Aww Ayaan is so adorable 😳
waiting for the next part

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