ZaYa SS : Tuition Classes[Epilogue - Page 50] - Page 4

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

That was amazing totally awesome

Loved it 2 d core

Zain Aaliya 's tuition teacher

Thanx for d pm dear

Continue soon

Originally posted by: preeharsharora

i'm excited fr dis story .well written first part

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

prologue is interesting.can't wait for ZaYa tetion classes start.update next part soon.

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

So Interesting yaar

Awesome

Please continue soon

Originally posted by: neenzz

A very interesting start... looking forward to reading the next chapter... Oh and give Maham a face too, please 😊

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Nice loved it...

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Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Nice loved it...

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: -Mera-Hi-Jalwa-

Now that's a new concept I have come over on zaya,would like to read further.
Hope U update fast!!! 🥱

Thanku all for ur precious commentz!!

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

awesome chapter..
continue soon

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing part !!
Ksg as aliya's bro :)
Its quite intresting !!
Continue jaldi !

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

Nice concept 😉
Pls update soon 😊 😳

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

wow ! Its really intresting...superb ya...loved it 😃 pls cont asap :)

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

awesome update!!
Waiting 4 d next part :)

Thanku all 😃

Originally posted by: zayalove

Interesting concept update soon. ... Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

<font color="#009966">awesome concept!!!!😳...superb start👏 ..very well written👍🏼...loved it❤️...waiting for d next part😛...thanks for pm...
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Originally posted by: simran422

Awesome update

cont soon if possible

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

Interesting start...

Please continue soon...

Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa

Wow dii

I totally luvd this chap..

It was amazing

Tution teacher wow!!! Cool

Waiting fr nxt chap!!!

And thank u so damn much to make KSG as aliyas bro

I just luv luv luv him!!!!

Thanku all guyz 😃

Originally posted by: aman1605

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Hey Sumaiya🤗

OMG this was amazing😉

Interesting😳

N u choose my love my akdu my KSG as Aaliya's bro😃

Aww i love u 4 this🤗🤗

Can't wait 4 the next part

Tnx 4 pm😉

Love always Aman❤️

Thanku Aman.. I'm glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Aww Sumaiya!
Hudaifa is.. KSG? Thanks a lot for that.
Well, Zain gnna teach Aaliya? A whole new concept.
Pls do continue ASAP! I can't wait.
Its amazing concept. Thanks a lot!:-)

Thanx Tannu..
I'm glad ki u all lyk KSG as Hudaifa 😆 😃

Originally posted by: craziness05

New concept wow😃

Zain Aliya's tution teacher😳

But why they hate each other😕

No problem baad mein they will fall for each other😛

Aliya's bro is KSG I like him

But he will have problem with their relationship na

Continue soon

Ps :I love 3 mistakes of my life

Awwiee.. Thanku aastha..
Wait a read..
There's more to come!
Ps: i luv it too 😛

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

Sumi 🤗
Kaha gaya ho gai thi? 😆
i always like plots where it is completely different from the show.
i absolutely loved it 😳
chalo update this jaldi jaldi ❤️
-Sanika 😆 😛

Mei yahin thi..
Didnt feel lyk writing 😆
I'm glad u lyked it!
Thanx! 😃

Thanku soo Muc Guyz..
Ur comments r soo encouraging ..
Aise readers ho to writer ki balle balle hojaayegi..
Thanku all..
I'm glad that u all lyked KSG as hudaifa..
I was scared ki u wont lyk it lol 😆
Thanku again everybody..
Part 2 will be in my next post..
Luv u all*grp hug*

PART 2

Zain : hudaifa bhi nuh.. Kis musibat mei daal diya mujhe?? Na hi main haan kehsakta hoon aur na hi naa.. Karun to kya karun mei?
Rizwan : bhaag ja dude.. Ek ladki ko dhoondh aur uske saath ek lambi holiday par chale jaa.. Hudaifa samaj jaayega..*winks*
Zain : shut up dude.. Mei Hudaifa ko dhoka nahi desakta.. Par mei us jungli billi ko bhi nahi padhaa sakta..*makes a disgusting face*
Rizwan : bro.. Tujhe usse problem kya hai?? I mean aakhir huwa kya hai jo tu usse itni nafrat karta hai??i mean she is beautiful.. Modern hai.. Behnji types toh bilkul nahi hai.. Aur allah kasam hudaifa ki behn toh kisi angle se nahi lagti.. Agar hudaifa ki behn nahi hoti toh shayad mei usse apni Gf bana leta* laughs*
Zain : shut up Riz.. Hudaifa ki behn hai woh.. Agar usne suna toh woh maar daalega.. Lekin usse pehle us jungli billi ko mei maar daalunga*angry*

FLASHBACK

Zain : hudaifa.. Dude mujhe bhook lagi hai.. Kuch khaane ko dede yaar*makes himself comfortable on Aaliya's fav beam bag*
Hudaifa : haan ruk.. Kuch order karleta hoon* goes inside his room to get his phne*
Aaliya : bhai jaan .. Bhai jaan*comes back from colg n searches for hudaifa*
Zain : hey aaliya..*grins*
Aaliya : hey.. *glares at him*
Bhai jaan kahaan hai??
Zain : woh khaana order kar rahaa hai..*busy playing games on his phne*
Aaliy : kya tum us beam bag pe se hat sakte ho plz??meri fav jagah hai woh.. Mei uspar vhai ko bhi nahi baithne deti.. Aur tum toh jootoun ke saath*makes a disgusting face*
Zain : ohhh?? Toh yeh tumhari fav jagah hai???really now?? Joote utaar ke baithoun??*raises his eyebrow*
Aaliya : jee nahi.. Wahaan se uth jao.. Aur jaake wahaan baith jao..*irritated*
Zain : Nahi baithunga.. Kya karlogi??
Aaliya : zain dont..*screams as he rubs his dirty shoes onto the beam bag*
Zain : dont?? Yeh lo.. *keeps rubbing*
Aaliya : zain mei aakhri baar keh rahi hoon.. Dont*super angry*
Zain : kya ?? Kya karlogi tum??*keepa rubbing*
Aaliya : main.. Main .. Isse maarungi tumhe.. *picks up a flower vase.. Zain laughs*
Aaliya : dont u dare Abdullah.. Dont laugh.. Sach mei phekdungi*super angry*
Zain : haan toh pheko nuh.. Mei darta hoon kya??*intensifies his rubbing*
Ouccch... Pagal ho tum??*holds his forhead n sits down .. The vase hit his head n it was bleeding*
Aaliya : kahan tha maine.. Dont mess with me next tym.. Samjhe tum??*hands on her waist*
Zain : tumhe abhi bhi apne "dont mess with me" ki padi hai pagal ladki.. I'm bleeding.. Ambulance ko bulvaao.. Mei marne waala hoon*acts as if he's fainting*
Aaliya : oye nautanki band karo..itni se maar pe koi behosh nahi hota.. First aid lekar aati hoon*
Zain : itni si maar?? Yeh tumhe itni se lagti hai??mujhe kuch hojaata toh?? Aise kuch bhi uthaake phekdogi??*angry*
Aaliya : maine warn kiya tha tumhe..
Hudaifa : yeh kya hora... Shi* zain.. Yeh kAise huw??*checks his head*
Zain : apni behn se poocho*angry*
Hudaifa : aalu.. Yeh sab kya horahaa hai??*confused*
Aaliya : kuch nahi bhai.. Maine isse kahaan ki joote utaar ke kahin au lr baith jaaye lekin isne apne gande jootoun se mere beam bag ka yeh haal bana diya*shows him the dirty beam bag*
Hudaifa : toh uthaake vase phekdogi??*shocked*
Aaliya : bhai maine usse warn bhi kiya.. Usne nai suni..*shrugs off her shoulders*
Hudaifa : tune kyun nahi maani uski baat zain??
Zain : tu mujhe bol rahaa hai?? Samjha apni jungli behn ko... Aisa karegi toh koi shaadi nahi karega*angry*
Aaliya : ohh plzzz.. Bahut hai jo mujhse shaadi karne ke liye mar rahe hai..
Zain : really?? Kaun hai woh badnaseem?? Hoga koi auto waala ya phir roadside romeo
Aaliya : zain shut up..
Zain : i wont.. Koi bewakoof aur ahmak(mad) aadmi hi tumse shaadi karne ko tayyar hoga...
Aaliya : zain..*goes towards him n starts hitting him..*
Hudaifa : aalu ruk jaa.. Aalu kya kar rahi hai?? Aaluzz*picks her up by her waist to stop her from hitting*
Aaliya : chodo mujhe bhai.. Aaj toh mei isko maarke hi saans lungi*tries to hit him.. Hudaifa pulls her back*
Zain : junglee hai puri junglee..
Hudaifa : bhai tu plzz jaa yahaan se..*holding aaliya*
Aaliya : i'll kill u u moron..
Hudaifa : aalu stop*zain walks out of their house*


FLASHBACK ENDS

Rizwan : bro?? Bro?! Kya huwa?? Kahaan khogayye??*shakes zain as he was lost*
Zain : uhmm kuch nahi.. *remembers his fights with aaliya*
Ya allah.. Mujhe himmat dena uski maar khaane ke liye..*luks up n talks to Allah n goes to aaliya's house*

Hudaifa : agaya tu?! Thanx bhai.. I knew it.. Tu meri Zarur help karega.. Dont worry maine aalu ko samjhaa diya.. Woh koi badtameezi nahi karegi.. Mujhe kuch kaam hai.. Mei bahar jaa rahaan hoon.. Aalu apne room mei hai.. Wahin chale jao*goes*
Zain : *sighs*
Ohh sh**... *sees aaliya in a black loose t shirt and pink shorts ..*

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nice chapter
zain's drama was awesome
continue soon