zaya ff: Teri meri love story chapter 33 page 140, 26 th december..! - Page 63

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Wow madhu kuch bhi I love your update pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Thank u my pink baby😳
Minnie is stubborn bechara zain😆
Next part almost done, thoda tadka baaki hai adding it😆
Thank u for lovely comment


update jaldi jaldi. waiting😃
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Chapter 27 A

I'm back with today's dose, today BI is ending, we ll be depressed and I dnt want to make u all disturbed again... so I tried something... hope u all will smile reading it, remaining half part, I ll update tomorrow... ignore typo's


Since incident on his birthday Zain insisted no more on her attention, they just had their casual talks... he saw ebbing resistance and control over him, in Aliya... But she was not ready to cross diminishing barriers... he decided to give space, assuming it would allow her to take proper decisions...


he spent majority of time away from home, stayed late at work and extra time with his child hood friends... Zain was the only one married among his childhood friends, they met Aliya couple of times, they liked her...

he expected some changes in their relationship with the space he provided, but It was still indifferent , he was getting scared with every passing day...


Parties he was invited were mostly at his friends places, , their friends invited both of them, he didn't insist her and she didn't want to attend too...

he always visited them alone attracting extra attention of girls, his friends protected his 'innocence' informing every interested In him, that he was happily married and " unavailable "

He was missing her badly, he reproached for his foolish decision, he felt distance between them was multiplying, his ignorance didn't affect her... he realised she has no intentions to fill gaps between them...


On the other hand Aliya who was never alone , Always used to pampering was feeling lonely zain's complete attention use to be for Aliya, she was missing him, but a part of her felt happy seeing Zain's diversions...

" ur phone is ringing" Kartar pointed at zain's phone, it was Aliya...he looked at vibrating phone in surprise... he looked at time, It was 12.00 am, he didn't heed to answer the call..

" have u quarreled with her?" Kartar questioned, Zain shrugged his shoulders in indifference, he wished she or they had a topic to quarrel, they had not , coming home he usually found her avoiding him, making herself busy with office work or other activities.. having No desire to disturb her, he went to living room to sleep on couch..., she never minded that..

" why don't u lift call and talk to her?"

" there is nothing to talk kartar, believe me"

" what if she is in need of ur help" ,

" help?" he was thoughtful for a while and dialed her number...

" Zain, I'm in my home, I ll stay here for few days". Zain eyes popped out hearing this " Aww now only this is left" he murmured,

"Okay,but how many days" he asked getting scared...

"3 or 4 days zain" , he disconnected call without listening further...

His Marriage seemed to be collapsing with Aliya's obvious behaviour, he use to watch her when she was asleep and now she left to her home...he finally realised, what he was doing, is not going to help him...

He bid bye to kartar and his friends... he slammed car door and raised ignition and sped of to Aliya's house, he stopped car near her house from where he can see Aliya's room, there she was sitting in balcony, he couldn't resist simple pleasure to look at her, as always , she was talking with her mom, she was looking happy, chirpy, it reminded him of his old minnie, days he spent with her in Island, An unconquerable desire to irritate her arised in him, he felt jealous of shabhana too..

" she talks to everyone nicely, except to me, she will freeze like an ice berg" he gritted his teeth furiously... He took out his phone, dialed her number... but disconnected immediately... He texted a msg... Aliya's phone beeped disturbing her conversation with shabahana...

Gem: "when are u coming? " , Aliya looked at msg, but she didn't heed to reply... Zain saw her reading msg, but he didn't get reply...

" Aww every time I thought she was busy, when I didn't get reply immediately, she is IGNORING me". He again msgd her... shabahana was forcing Aliya to drink milk, she was denying it.. she again received a msg, she saw, it was zain again... she shook her head in irritation... she was looking at phone furiously clinching her fist... Zain was observing her...


Gem: 😡

She texted msg,

Minnie:" 3 to 4 days, I said na Zain 😊 " Aww look at her she was irritated, shook her head, clinched her fist but still she msgd me with a smiling smiley... hmmm"

Gem: " I cannot allow u to stay there for 3- 4 days" she looked at phone more furiously...

Minnie: "what do u mean?😔"

Gem: " I mean u should return tomorrow" " how can he demand me?" she walked from one to other with growing anger... holding phone... Shabahana was standing in middle irritating her to drink milk, she took glass and completed milk in one gulp... Zain was enjoying her antiques, she looked at msg again She was bubbling with anger...


she threw empty glass, glass hitted zain's parking car.. Zain who was looking her bent down in horror, empty glass exactly hitted driving seat car door " God, she is mad..." he took a relieving breath it didn't hurt him... He peeped up...she was looking more horrified, and hiding behind a flower pot bending down... he laughed looking at her... Aliya could not see whose car it was, it was dark...

" I should be careful with her, what if she throw something, when I'm infront of her" He immediately typed a msg...

Gem: " it's okay take another day, but come fast"...

Zain could see her murmuring something on seeing msg

Minnie:" thank u Zain"

Gem: " and one more thing, we are shifting to Barkat villa, dnt ask me questions, bye"

she jumped in happiness reading msg and again bent down getting scared...

Minnie: " okay, bye😳"

she escaped from balcony , crawling fastly like a mouse...

"Minnie mouse" he laughed out loudly and rode back to his flat...

Remaining.part tomorrow I ll update, drop. Moments and hit like button... tomatoes and sandals are welcome...
Edited by madhufx9... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was nice.
update soon.
Edited by Sobtian... - 11 years ago
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aww cute after a heart wrenching last episode 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunakshafan26

aww cute after a heart wrenching last episode 😃

That's y I dint update complete part, dnt want make all cry again
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: katmaan

Wow madhu kuch bhi I love your update pls update soon

Thank u Kyati
I updated
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

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it was nice.
update soon.

Thank u Aanya
Pakka tomorrow I ll update balance
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u maneesha😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part !!
Aww minnie and her antiques ...
Felt rele very bad for zain :(
Continue next part jaldi madhu !!

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