Can You Trust Me? - A ZaYa SS Chap 10 and 11, Page 27, 17th June - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
tanu it was awesome..
loved it..
continue soon..
and pls pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Amazing start
Continue soon
Looking forward to next part
I'm guessing that its aliya who writes the blog that Zain is obsessed with lol
Please pm me when u next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Namaste! Happy to see me? Me too. Itne dino baad update kr rhi hu na? I know ya. So mere college keh rha hai ki SOON Harshad Arora and Preetika Rao are gonna come to our school. WHAT? That can't be true! They are not sitting vella that they will come to Delhi and that too to our school.

But what if the DO? I will surely post pictures. I CAN'T be absent on that day.
First here you go with my update...:

~Happy Reading~

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Sanjeevani Hospital
Locker Room
Same Day
7:30 p.m.
Aaliya's POV

"Hey Aaliya, I'm off to my house with Abhay. He is dropping me off. Do you wanna join in?" Piya asked. Abhay was standing right next to her. I can't say yes! I mean she's my friend, its gonna be like a date for them. Isn't it?

"Oh no Piya. Thanks for the offer though, but I have some work to do so I have to ask Sister Lovely for that. Thanks for the offer Abhay!" I said putting my coat in the locker. I fixed my dupatta. I looked down at my royal blue suit. Its the first time I looked good.

"Oh its okay Aaliya. Shall we go, Abhay?" Piya said as she walked off from the locker room. She turned her head around and mouthed a 'thank you' to me. I smiled. Now.. How Do I Get Home?


8:30 p.m.
Narrator's POV

"Sister Lovely, kal jo meine aapko reports dene ko kaha tha, are they ready?" Zain asked sister lovely standing at the counter. Aaliya came from behind, but Zain didn't notice it.

"Yeh lijiye Dr. Zain. Thank you ji. Aap jaa rhe hai?" Sister Lovely replied.

"Ji Sister Lovely." Zain replied. He was about to leave when he turned back as if he remembered something "Accha Sister Lovely.."

"Ji?"

"Woh Dr. Aaliya jaa chuki hai? I mean, I had some work so-"

"Nahi Dr. Zain. Woh abhi yahi hai." She replied. Zain smiled and turned around. As if a clash had hit him, he fall to the ground. A girl lying over him. It took him an instant to understand that it's Aaliya.

"I- I am sorry Dr. Zain. Mei- Mei papers theek kr deti hu." Aaliya said standing up. Zain got shocked. The sudden turn of events. He recalled the way she fall over him. They feeling he had. He smiled. Then realizing what he was doing, he smacked that smile off his face.

"Oh its ok Dr. Aaliya. Aap rehne de!" Zain said trying to stop her.

"Nahi. It's my fault. Mei dekh ke nhi chal rhi thi. Umm.. I am sorry!" Aaliya said as she ran off to the lift. Zain smiled. He picked up his papers and gathered them in the file. Suddenly something caught his eye. He bent over and took it in his hand. It was a blue earring. Maybe it was Aaliya's. May have fallen down when she fell, he thought. Thinking for a while whether to return it to her or not, he kept it in his pocket. Then looked around and started walking towards the lift.


Lift
Aaliya's POV

Fine! It was a normal thing. Its not like I get effected by Zain Abdullah. No! Its not at all like that. I... He's my colleage. I can talk to him once in a while. Or.. um.. fall on him too!

"Hello Dr. Aaliya!" Crap! Zain! Why does he sound so chirpy?

"Hello!" I replied in a low voice.

"You know.. Dr. Aaliya, you can talk to me once in a while. Or.. umm.. fall on me too!" EXCUSE ME? DOES HE READ MINDS?

"Well.. I am sorry." I replied. What else can I say?"

"Aapko hindi aati hai na?" He asked.

"Haan. Kyun?" I asked confused.

"Aap english mei kyun baat kr rhi hai. Aap hindi-" He was cut off. Suddenly the lights went off. The lift jerked. And within a blink of an eye, I was in his arms. Woah!

He seemed to have not hugged me back because of shock. Shock that I had HUGGED HIM. To be honest, I am scared of lifts. What? Its completely normal.

"Tum theek ho?" He asked in the world's most concerned voice. Amazing! Zain Abdullah can be sweet and concerned about things other than his gadgets too. I thought he was like all the others.. you know.. Those rich spoilt brats!

"Haan I am just scared of lifts!" I said hugging him tighter. His colonge had got me crazy. That musk smell. I can hug him forever.

It took one more jerk. The lift jerked again and I screamed. He hugged me this time. Wow! His embrace really feels nice. I hugged him again.

"Shh its okay Dr. Aaliya." He sat down and I sat beside him slightly hugging him. He slowly unwrapped my tight arms around him and kept a hand around my waist. I hugged his waist. "Sh.. We are going to be out soon."

"I.. I am scared of lifts!" I hugged him tighter.

"I know. I am with you Dr.-"

"Call me Aaliya please!" I said.

"Yes.. Aaliya. I am with you. I have called for help."

"I.. I am clasutrophobic! I am scared of closed rooms!"

"Sh.. I am with you Aaliya. I'll not let anything happen to you." He hugged me tighter. I don't wanna let go off him. I started crying into his t-shirt.



Out Of Hospital
Parking Lot
Aaliya's POV

"How are you going home?" He asked standing next to his bike.

"Oh mei auto le lungi." I said smiling. He gave me a 'are you serious' look.

"Itni raat ko? Aaliya, its not safe for kids. Akele nahi jaate!"

"Shut up. Mei bacchi nahi hu!" He started laughing.

"Accha I am sorry. Aa jao, I'll drop you to your house!"

"Well.." Okay Posibility 1, Abbu sees him and bombards me with his unnumerable questions. Posibility 2, Abbu doesn't see him. Posibility 3, Abbu doesn't react. Posibitily 4-

"Oh hello.. Stop counting the posibilities and chad jao upar!" He said getting onto his bike. HE SERIOUSLY READS MINDS! Reminds me of Edward Cullen from Twilight. Wooow! Robert Patinson! "Stop thinking about Robert Patinson now! Jaldi chado upar." He seriously reads minds!

"Haan haan ok!" I sat behind him. Woah! His cologne again. Can I borrow his cologne one day? I will spray it on myself so that I can feel his presence around me all the time.

Ek second..

Aaliya Ghulam Haider...

.
.
.
Uski presence chahiye tujhe?
.
.
.
Have you? Fallen? Innn--- looove?


"Aaliya kya soch rhi ho?" He shook me out of my thoughts.

"Kuch nahi!"

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Do comment and like!
Long enough?
Okay bye.

Yours fav,
-Tanu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Amazing start
Continue soon
Looking forward to next part
I'm guessing that its aliya who writes the blog that Zain is obsessed with lol
Please pm me when u next update

Thank u so much dear!
Well for that dear, u will hv to like the third post.
The PM list! So that I can send u pm's.
Thank u so so much! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

tanu it was awesome..
loved it..
continue soon..
and pls pm me

Thank u so much!
Like the PM list to recieve pm's.
Sorry can't send it this way.
Thanks a lot! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome update di!!!
Lovely
Fabulous!!
Just Amazing??
Does Zain really read minds??
Thanks for d pm
It is long enough
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Awesome update di!!!

Lovely
Fabulous!!
Just Amazing??
Does Zain really read minds??
Thanks for d pm
It is long enough
Continue soon

Thank u so much dear!
First one to comment.
Congratz on that! :)
Thank you fr the long.
Tried my best in it.
Will surely.
And ur welcum!

Oh Zain doesn't, but he can tell by Aaliya's expressions! 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
This was again an awesome chapter tanu...
Loved it ...
Last part aliya is realising her feelings...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

This was again an awesome chapter tanu...
Loved it ...
Last part aliya is realising her feelings...
Continue soon..

Thanks Priya!
Yes.
Soon Zain will realize 'em too.
Wait for that dear...!
Sure. Thanks a lot!

P.S.- Like the PM list to recieve PM's! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Thanks Priya!
Yes.
Soon Zain will realize 'em too.
Wait for that dear...!
Sure. Thanks a lot!

P.S.- Like the PM list to recieve PM's! :)

I am using my mobile so sometimes it gets liked or sometimes not..
Well will try

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