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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi



Waise English is no problem NA...or should I use Hindi words here...

I am fine with english
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing start
love it
continue soon
pls pm me when u do
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Chapter 2

ALIYA in her room just then her sis BAKBAK comes in...wow di, I heard you hit a century today...
ALIYA : century??...BAKBAK : ya...the 100 idiot to have proposed you and you bashed him...
ALIYA : you know about that?? BAKBAK : you know we have an all india radio which gives your info up to date...šŸ˜†
ALIYA : I swear if moms not gonna throw her I myself will do it...BAKBAK : chill di...she is just appointed till college after that you will get your freedom...

USMAN comes in to give his surprise to his two daughters...but he hides and listens their conversation...
BAKBAK : why do you bash them so much?? ALIYA : bash them...get a chance I will kill them...they keep on giving lame reasons just coz I am rich...I hate that...
BAKBAK : O so you are waiting for a prince to propose you?? ALIYA : prince...who does not care about money but me and only me...I do not mind if he is rich or poor...all I want is...
BAKBAK : A PRINCE CHARMING??... ALIYA : yup...handsome yet totally loveable...ok now please don't inform dad about this...😳

USMAN enters : inform me about what?? Both go and hug him...
ALIYA : nothing dad, just studies you know...got to focus a lot now...
USMAN : really you were studying about what...I see no books around...
ALIYA gulps : fff...from my mind...revising some points which I memorised...
USMAN : I see...so you were revising about Prince Charming and love...BAKBAK laughs...šŸ˜†

ALIYA : you were hearing our talks...very bad dad...she turns her head in anger..
USMAN : sorry...Actually I never wanted to hear your talks but I came to give you girls a surprise...
ALIYA : you are going to throw that PA out...USMAN : no..that's your moms job...I brought you girls two laptops for assistance in your studies...you girls wanted that from a long time right???
ALIYA and BAKBAK : thanks so much dad...you are the best...they share a hug..😳.
USMAN smiles and leaves...BAKBAK starts teasing "admit it di, you can never tell a lie"...ALIYA "I so can"...BAKBAK " nope,never the only one who can tell a lie and handle that is ZAIN BHAIYUšŸ˜Ž...I think you need his training..."ALIYA gets angry..."you"..she escapes and ALIYA follows her

Later night 11pm at HAIDERBAGH (zain's home) GHULAM is fastly pacing around in anger wondering why ZAIN has not returned...ZAIN comes home and notices his dad waiting for him..."oh no dad, great now he will start giving me classes...do something bro"...he enters his neighbours home and from there enters the back of his home climbs to his room window and reaches his room...his mom SHABANA passes by and notices ZAIN entering by his room...she says ZAIN...ZAIN indicates to her to keep quiet by keeping his finger on his lips and asks her to help him and gives a flying kiss to his mom to show his love...SHABANA smiles and says I will handle him...šŸ˜†

GHULAM : 5 more mins more if that idiot does not come back he will have to spend the night out...
SHABANA : what happened??
GHULAM : it's 11:30 and still there is no sign of your beloved son...it's all your love that has spoilt him..
ZAIN in his room changes his clothes quickly, makes his her shabby and comes out of his room.."what are you still yelling about so late dad" he pretends as if he was disturbed of his sleep.
GHULAM : ZAIN when did you come back and how...I was waiting here since past an hour...
ZAIN indicates his mom to help him...SHABANA : he...he came way back...it was my fault I did not inform you about that...
GHULAM : what?? ZAIN : ya dad, I came back at 10 itself...I was tired and hence went to sleep early...
GHULAM : you both are UPTO something...I will soon find that out...he leaves in anger..
SHABANA watches him go...ZAIN how will you save yourself later...
ZAIN : chill mom, dad forgets very quickly...call it partial memory loss..tomorrow he will be calm.šŸ˜†

SHABANA : really??ok where were you so late??
ZAIN : last day of torture mom...so a hangout with friends...
Sultan enters again limping..."bro you left your phone at the restaurant itself"
SHABANA : sultan, why are you limping?? ZAIN hints to shut up and lie about something...
Sultan : aunty, nothing serious a car went on my foot...ZAIN winks and shows a thumbs up...
SHABANA : a car??? Shouldn't you be in hospital for that???
Sultan starts coughing and says aunty I need water and leaves...ZAIN : thank god!!!šŸ˜†

Aayat comes in laughing: mom check this out!! ALIYA appi slapped bhaiyu's friend, SULTAN, her friend uploaded that on FB...she shows a pic titled "VICTIM NO 100" with 1000 likes...šŸ˜†
ZAIN hits his forehead with his palm, *at least now you became famous bro* he thinks...
SHABANA laughs seeing the pic and says so that's why he is limping ZAIN???
ZAIN : ya your idiotic niece did that...you know how arrogant she is...she could have handled him nicely NA but no public humiliation everytime...šŸ˜†
SHABANA : come on ZAIN...she is not that bad...you know SURAIYA BHABHI calls her ANGEL...
ZAIN : exactly...ANGEL...ANGEL FROM HELL...the way she is sugar coated outside she is 10000 worse in reality...that's the reason we don't get along well..he leaves in anger...šŸ˜•
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So that's the end of part 2...now the characters will be even clear...

Hope you liked it...I know its not good...šŸ˜•

Do comment your view...

Edited by 786ahf_bi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

amazing start

love it
continue soon
pls pm me when u do


Thanks...hope you like the rest...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
again i am first yeh...šŸ˜‰
really loved this chapter habeeba..
that was great..
barkat and aliya shares a great bond...loved that...
osman is a evedropper...uncle apne bachoon ki bate nahi sunte bad manners..mammi ne nahi sikhaya..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
sultan limping..lol..
he was the 100th victim..hehehe
zain is so intelligent..kya entry thi...
shabana loves aliya that's why she took her side..
aayat please be the cupid...😊😊
reallly funny..and last part was totally hilarious...
continue soon..
thanks for the pm
Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
second ...
amazing amazing di
awesome update
aww mamu listening to thier convo šŸ˜†
lol sultan limping
love my aaliya century maar di
zain is so smart šŸ˜Ž
angel from hell šŸ˜†
thanx for d pm
continue soon
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
amazing start
and its too funny
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Awesome
Wonderful
ZaYa think opposite about each other,waiting to see how they will fall in love with each other
Continue soon plzzz
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
It was really a great update...
Loved it...
But i can guess zain hates aaliya very much...
Ufff... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Amazing part !!
ghulam and zain make a gud father n son pair :)
Continue next part soon :)

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