~Subhanallah~ (FF)(Chapter6OnPg9) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
it was amazingg!!!
loved it..
please continue soon..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Wow awesome
I loved it
COnt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Ya Allah awesome
Omg outfit superb
Sandals fabulous
Hair style just lovely
Update Beyond amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Wow...
I m loving it...
Please update soon...

And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome story!!
Fabulous
I loved it...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
It was awesome 👏
thinking what will happen in the prom night prty

Update the nxtt one sooon
Waiting 4 it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
WOOOWWW
Amazing Amazing Amazing start
please continue very soon
i love this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Read all the chapters...
They are awesome.
Thanks for the PM.
Sorry for the late reply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Chapter 4:

Zain:Aaliya tum itni khoobsurat kaise lag sakti hoo...dekho mujhe kitni problem ho rahi hai...sab tumhe ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahe hai ...
Appi:Tum bhi na...dekhne do...hum ek doosre ke partner wo apne partner ke saath aaye hain...
Zain:kk...let's dance?
Appi:ok...chalo
Zain lifted her hand placed it on his shoulder and slid his arm around her waist.
Ek din kabhi jo
Khud ko taraashe
Meri nazar se tu zara
Haay re

Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaoon main zara
Haay re
Ek ankahi si daastaan daastaan

Kehne lagega aaina
Subhanallah
Aaliya allowed him to do so cause she was feeling safe in his arm.They both swayed with music,while aaliya thought that the song was made for her only.
Zain spinned her around and took her in his arms.
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafha hai
Wallah aisa hua

Meri khaamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se taarife bhun lena
Haan meri khaamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se taareefe bun lena
Kal nahi the jo aaj lagti hoon
Taareef meri hai khaama khaan
Tohfa hai tera meri adah
Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare
Meri zubaan se tu zara
Haay re

These were the words going on in both of their minds.Don't know why but they were like too much affected to each other.He agained spinned her and she landed in his arms and the music stopped.Both Zain and aaliya didn't knew where and how they were looking but they both just couldn't broke the eye lock.They were just inches apart from each other.
Their chemistry...their intense grace...don't know why but i thought today that Zain would surely take my appi his home.They both came out from their position when they heard loud claps from the BG.
ME:AApppi...you both were fabulous...mana na toh padega Zain tumhe ki mere appi duniya ki second best hai!!
Zain:Second best?
Me:Haan 1st best toh main hoon...hahahhahahhahhaahaaa
Zain:hahahahhhahaaa huh?
Appi:tum dono yeh sab band karoge hume ghar bhi jaana hai...
Me:Haan chalo appi...late hogaya ammi bahut datengi...
Appi:Bye zain...
Zain:Main drop kardu..
Appi:Jee nhi main appi khud jaa sakte hai...aur waise thanks JIJU i whispered in his ears.
Zain was on cloud nine and so was my appi...aww just look at her she's blushing.
ME:Chaleee..agar aapka yeh eye lock khatam hogaya ho?
Appi:Huh...chal badmaash tujhe toh main ghar par bataoungi...bye Zain..
Zain:Bye...
Nobody knew that it was his and my appi's last meeting infact god also didn't.
That night when we reached home we saw are father wholly drunk, beating my mum.
Appi couldn't stand it she just took her away from the grip of beast.She asked my father him to stay here or either they will.He beated her also...he shouted at her...and i couldn't do anything.The next moment was that we both decided to go to my maasi's house in london.After the prom night Zain and appi never met again.But my appi used to cry every day and night for him.But she'd accepted the reality and so did Zain...He didn't even tried to call her or me.
And now we are here in london living with my maasi...shalija maasi...she's the best maasi in the world anybody can evr get.She was the one who took care of me,my mum and my sis when we needed someone to support.She had a son named Zubair who was my appi's and mine's fav we used to fight,take care,love and adore each other.
Also he was the only one who knew about Zain and appi after me and appi herself,mum ko bhi nhi pata hai.That incident changed appi alot...now she didn't trusted love after seeing what happened to my mum.
As usual appi cameback from college and everyone was waiting for her.
Maasi:Aww meri bachi aa gayi...aaj kya kiya?
Aaliya:Kuch nhi bas whi ghise pite...din
MAasi:Chal koi baat nhi haat muh dhokar aa aur khana kha le...sheeer khorma banaya hai!!
Appi:Sachi...wooowwooowooowww!!!!
NARRATOR"S POV:
While here aaliya was living with her maasi in london here Zain in India was with his dad in his office yaa he qualified and aliya didn't coz she missed out a year in london.
Zain tried very hard to forget her but he couldn't and it could not be hidden from his dad Mr.Osman Abdullah.
Osmaan:Zain...mujhe pata hai tum usse bhula nhi paye ho par tumhe...aage barna padega..
Zain:Main bhad chuka hoon...aap ko koi kaam tha na dad?
Osman:Are haan yeh hain 50 lakhs...isse tumhe apne do phoopi ke ghar deke ana hai london mein...
Zain:Dad post it...
Osman:No u gonna go...it's important.
Zain:k
Osman:You gonna leave tomorrow only.
Zain:What??
Osman gave him a look
Zain:k
BABA BI :Na jaan kar bhi hoga in dono ka saamna...par kya ho payega inhe ek aur baar pyaar? Mujhe kya pata...agla part aayega tab khud dekhlena...
Now what will happen when Zain will come to face Aaliya again?
Will her phoopi come know about his love for aaliya?
What will happen next?
To know more stay tuned...
#BEINTEHAA
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"Main dil mein aati hoon...
samajh mein nahi..."

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Amazing part !!
Zaya seperated :(
Next part is intresting !!
Continue fast

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