zaya drabble:teaching them a lesson* updated on pg.5*

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

see the above post that i replied to anagha..

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

hello guys..
really sorry for the late update..
was busy in preparation of my paper..
really glad with the responses and lykes..
this update is for my chudails..
"alina, madhu, kiran and one and only anagha"
...
sitting by the pool hand in hand both zain and aliya were sipping coffee..
they heard a sound which made them to spit their yummy and delicious cofee..
the sound was of small children calling and yelling ammi..
aliya:aagayi pagalon ki family(sigh)
zain:haan aliya kuch toh karna padega...
aliya:sahi khaha jaanu..warna they will not let us live happily..
zain:i have a plan(*says with smirk)
he tells it to aliya and both smiles evily..

kabir and zara came and backhugged aliya...aliya wanted to just break both of their hands...
zara:ammi we both want to eat cake...aliya knew it and everything was going according to their plan..aliya smirked..

aliya went to kitchen and made a cake for them...zain too went to help her with all the things she will require..
after 1 hour cake was made and was served to zara and kabir..as they took a bite of the cake they puked it..
zara(with difficulty):ammi yeh kya hai
zain(contolling his laughter):cake
kabir:par yeh cake itna tasteless
aliya :woh isliye kunki isme meine 10 days purane rotten eggs,cowdung (fresh),some rats and yes lizards use kiya hai..
zain:haan buchoo ammi me kitne pyaar se banaya hai..instead of oil she used gutter water..
heating this zara and kabir became shocked and both fell down and soon were admitted in the hospital that too of animals because they were behaving like them..

zain:aliya dear inka toh kaam tamam abb papa mahaan ki baari..
aliya(hugging his elbow)haan jaanu lets start

aliya and zain went to grumpy's house with a gift..
zain:grumpy we brought a gift for u...
grumpy became happy adn hugged zain
zain made his face like he wanted to puke making aliya laugh..
aliya:grumpy this is a special oil that we ordered from america that will make your hairs grom faster..
hearing this grumpy became happy and started dancing shaking his bumps
[secret of oil
:actually brought from slum area
:it's not a oil but actually a mixture of hydrocholric acid and sulphuric acid]
zain:app jayie and apply the oil..
grumpy went inside and applied the oil on his bald head to only find his remaining hairs gone and blisters on his head..
he became mad and was admitted to mental asylum in agra...

both aliya and zain were happy that they removed the last stone in their lives and left a note for rehan:
dear mahaan
now donot take any panga from us or we will make u andha...
yours
zaya..
...
no offence to anyone..
so guys how was it?
bad or good?
i know it was not at all funny but still tolerate it...
-priya

Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago

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Kiran

@neenzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

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***unressing***

Awww... thank you so so soooi much for dedicating it to me as well 😊 I simply loved it... the mahaans are being tortured... what could have been better... amazingly written, I couldn't stop laughing 🤣

My almost reactions:

Rotten eggs 😲

Cow dung 🤣

Rats *cheee*

Lizard *yikes*

Gutter water 🤢

Mixture of hydrochloric acid and sulfuric acid 🤣🤣

Perfect place for grumpy... the asylum 😉

What are u talking about it was hilarious... thanks once again for mentioning me ❤️

Edited by neenzz - 10 years ago

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

OMG...PRIYA...TORTURE KI HEIGHTS...😆

Loved it...The first part was cute ZAYA and coffee but the rest was 🤣

I see you guys are not going to leave his KHANDAN live in peace😆...

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

it was hilarious🤣🤣 ..super awesome👍🏼😆..loved it..❤️

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi
OMG...PRIYA...TORTURE KI HEIGHTS...😆
Loved it...The first part was cute ZAYA and coffee but the rest was 🤣

I see you guys are not going to leave his KHANDAN live in peace😆...

thanks habbeba..
glad u lyked it dear...
yes we vowed it for not leaving them till death😆