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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan
amazing prologue
waiting 4 d 1st part :)

Thanks dear 😳 Will update soon 😊

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#22

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
interesting starting.want to read more continue soon.

Thankyou dear 😊
Will update 1st part soon 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
please update soon..great start..and the story line seems interesting !

Thankyou 😊
will update soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA
awesome prologue!!!
waiting for d update...

Thankyou 😊
will update soon 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Zain Abdullah:
A charming handsome young man.
Age 24
He manages his father's small business.
He belongs to middle class family.
But from his looks and personality he looks rich😲😲😲😲

Aliya Gulam Haider:
London return.
A spoil brat.
Age: 20
She is a daughter of business tycoon.
She is beautiful.
She is a party person.🤣🤣🤣 total opposite frm show🤣🥳

Suraiya Abdullah:
Love Cooking.
At times can turn comedian with his silly ethics.
Sees dream of becoming rich some day.
She is a greedy woman.😕😕😕😕😲😲😲 yeh comedian hai😕😕😕

charming young handsome boy was driving car smoothly..
Suddenly 2 girls came infront if his car..
He was stunned and managed to stop car on time.

Lagtha hai masked gals r frnds

Nd kuch plan karke aaye hai

intresting

kahi yeh ladki aliya tho nahi

brown eyes wali

nd zain ready to be shot😲😲😲😲

Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

Zain Abdullah:
A charming handsome young man.
Age 24
He manages his father's small business.
He belongs to middle class family.
But from his looks and personality he looks rich😲

Aliya Gulam Haider:
London return.
A spoil brat.
Age: 20
She is a daughter of business tycoon.
She is beautiful.
She is a party person.🤣🤣🤣total opposite frm show🤣🥳

Suraiya Abdullah:
Love Cooking.
At times can turn comedian with his silly ethics.
Sees dream of becoming rich some day.
She is a greedy woman.😲yeh comedian hai😕😕😕

charming young handsome boy was driving car smoothly..
Suddenly 2 girls came infront if his car..
He was stunned and managed to stop car on time.

Lagtha hai masked gals r frnds

Nd kuch plan karke aaye hai 

intresting

kahi yeh ladki aliya tho nahi

brown eyes wali

nd zain ready to be shot😲

bilkul sahi guess kiya hai tune 🤣

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Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hellos all 😎
Thanks alot to those who liked and commented before 😊😳
And Finally I am here with my 1st crappy update 😛

I have not proof read this 😊
Kindly ignore typo mistakes 😊

Happy Reading 🤓

-Chapter 1-
~3 hours before~

Outside Airport:
*I am barbie girl in the Barbie world*
"Heeellloos... Yaa dad ... Direct ghar aaungi bilkul masti nai karungi.." Said Aliya *cuts the call*

Shazia: Arey wah meri Aaloo meri kachalu tu toh badi agyakari hogyi hai hmm 😃
Aliya: Agyakari what? 😳
Shazia: I mean Tu toh badi obedient ho gayi hai.. Apne dad ki baat maan rahi hai after all 😉
Aliya: Oh please Aliya sunti sabki hai par baat sirf apni maanti hai 😉
Shazia: Voi main sochu tu India mein kadam rakhte hi itna Kaise badal gayi 😛
Aliya: Tu bas sochti raha kar.. Kabhi Kuch kaam bhi kar liya kar 😳
Aliya goes towards driver.. Takes key and sends him away
Shazia: Ye Kya kiya tune?
Ab hum ghar Kaise jayenge?
Aliya: Relax Shazu 😳
When Aliya is here no need to fear 😎
Shazia: Par tune driving kab seekhi? 😲
Aliya: Vo Kya hai na Aliya ko Kuch seekhne ki jarurat nai... Aliya bina seekhe Kuch bhi kar sakti hai 😉
Shazia: Ya allah.. mazaak mat kar Aaliya.. Abhi mera nikah bhi nahi hua aur ye ladki mujhe maarne pe tuli hai
Aliya: Relax babes.. Vo Kya hai na mera 15th boyfriend driver tha.. Usne mujhe thodi driving toh seekha hi di thi aur baki ki main khud manage kar lungi 😉 Ye Allah kitna cute aur kind tha
Shazia: accha Vo itnna hi cute aur kind tha toh tune use break up kyun kiya? 😕
Aliya: ye toh problem thi Vo Kuch jyda hi cute tha.. 😛
Shazia: Tera Kuch nai ho sakta 😳

Let's go.. Aliya starts driving...
Shazia prays.. Ya Allah bacha lena please..

Aliya driving roughly... and finally bangs car with tree..

Both the girls are save..
Shazia yells at Aliya and helds her responsible for this situation as they are now stuck in highway..

Shazia: Dekha ho gyi na gadbad.. Ab hum ghar Kaise jayenge.. Vo toh Allah ne Hume bacha liya warna ghar pauchne ki jagh direct upar pahuch jate .. 😡😵
Aliya side hugs Shazia
Aliya: Relax babes.. Mujhe toh bahut mazaa aa raha hai.. Ye jo pal hai na aage jake hum isi pal ko yaad karke bahut khush honge 😉
Shazia: Ab toh hume lift hi leni paregi 🤔
Aliya: Aliya Gulam Haider ko lift lena bilkul pasand nai 😳
Shazia: Lift nai lenge toh ghar kaise jayenge waise bhi ab Tu apne dad ko toh call karegi nahi warna unhe pata chal jayega tune driver ko bhaga diya 😳
Aliya: mere pass ek plan hai *smirks*
Aliya says something to Shazia..
Shazia: no no no no hum aisa nai kar sakte 😲
Aliya: hum aisa kar rahe hai and thats final 😈
Shazia: OK fine tujhse toh koi kabhi jeet hi nai sakta

A charming young handsome boy was driving car smoothly..
Suddenly 2 girls came infront if his car..
He was stunned and managed to stop cae on time.

A masked girl came forward and asked him to come out of his car..

As he came out he noticed
Masked girl was pointing gun on pregnant girl's head.
Pregnant girl looked teary and screamed for help.

Pregnant Girl: Please save me.
Please give her your car keys or else she will shoot you.

'Give me your car keys' masked girl ordered him.
Boy: Do you think I am fool?

Mask Girl: I don't have time to test whether you are fool or not!
Just give me car keys or else I will shoot both of you.

Boy steps forward to her..
Mask Girl steps back as he comes close to her.

Boy pulled her towards him making her uncomfortable.

He looked into her brown eyes..
She too was lost in his eyes..
Suddenly he took out her mask..
And took out pencil from her tied hairs which made way for her shiny brownish hairs to fall smoothly.

'Shoot Me' She heard him say..

Without wasting a sec she pressed trigger.

Boy's face get wet due to water..
Boy: What the hell? This is water?

Meanwhile girl manages to run after grabbing car keys..
Masked Girl: kyun tumne Kya blood expect kiya tha? Lagta hai marne ka Kuch jyda hi shauk hai tumhe..
Pregnant Lady: Sorry bhaijan Vo Kya hai na meri dost thodi crazy hai..
Boy: Dost?
Ye sab ho Kya raha hai?
Oh toh ye sab ek plan tha .. He gets furious..
Hey you Miss Water gun I am not gonna leave you..

Masked girls is none other then our very own Aliya.. 😛

Aliya: lekin main toh tumhe leave kar rahi hoon ta da bubyee... See you never..

As boy was about to catch them... They drove off..

Boy: Zain Abdullah se panga liya hai iss ladki ne isse toh main sabak seekha k hi rahunga..
Wait pehle mujhe kaam se phursat toh miley phir hi na ise sabak seekha paunga.. Ye allah main meeting k liye late nai ho sakta ..
Calls Rizwan..
Hello Rizwan...

-HA Royle Mansion-
Beautiful house...of no. 1 business tycoon Gulam Haider. ... It won't be wrong if you call it a castle of modern culture...
White marbles compliments its beauty more..
Haiders and Abdullahs both lives here together under one roof..
Its been 6years that both the families are living together..

Gulam roaming here and there in hall..

" Kya hua Gulam sahab aap itne ghabraye hue kyun lag rahe hai? Sab theek toh hai na? Aur Aliya beti Ab tak ayi nahi? " Usman asked

Gulam: Isi baat ka toh darr hai ki Aliya Ab tak ayi nahi.. Pata nai ab Kya naya kaarnama kiya hoga iss ladki ne..
Usman: Aap chinta mat kijiye Aliya aati hi hogi..

"Kisi ne mujhe yaad kiya?.. Lo main aagyi.." Aliya screamed..

Gulam was expecting Aliya to come and hug him..but Aliya hugs Usman..

Asalam walekum Mamu.. walekeum Asalam Aliya bete..
Kaisi hai aap? Kaisa raha hai apka safar?
Main theek hoon Mamu..
Oh sorry dad aap bhi yahaan? Maine apko notice hi nai kiya .. Hugs Gulam..

Gulam: Kaisi hai Tu? Aur ye Kya haal bana rakha hai? Ye Kaise kapde pehne hai tune?
Aliya ignores his questions and changes the topic..
Aliya: Dad yahaan Kuch jyda garmi nai hai ..
She excitedly asks.. Dad mom Kaha hai? Aaj toh main mom ka haatho ka bana khana khaungi..
Gulam: beta Vo mom..
Aliya becomes upset..
Rehne dijiye dad main samjh gyi..
Nai aisi baat nai Shabana begum 2 dino mein wapas aa Jayengi tab aap...
He looks here and there but Aliya already already left..
"Vo chali gyi" said Usman..

Aliya in room.. Unpacking her stuff..she is upset..
"I am barbie girl in the barbie world"
Her phone rings..
A: Haan Bol Shazu
S: Toh kaisi chal rahi hai khatirdari?
A: Matlb?
S: Tu hi toh keh rahi thi ghar jaate hi Teri mom tujhe thus thus k apne haatho ka bana khanaa khilayegi? so kaisa raha hmm?
A: Gets furious.. Flashback of her dad's words that her mom will come after 2 days' she is mute..
S: Hello Hello ... Alloo kachalu.. Tu sun rahi hai na?
A: she changes topic.. Shaizu aaj ka Kya plan hai?
S: Plan kaisa plan?
A: offo lagta hai tu toh India aa gyi par teri teri memory London mein hi chut gyi..
S: Tu saaf saaf Bol
A: arey aaj Saturday hai 😃
S: Saturday toh hai par isme new Kya hai?
A: Saturday night parties 😃
S: Oh yaa parties 😃
Par ye toh India hai.. Humare parents Hume allow karenge Kya?
A: unse permission lene ki Kya zarurat hai?
S: kyun nai?
A: Hum jab London mein parties karate the toh unse permission lete the Kya?
S: nai
A: so?
S: OK done 😉
A: ye hui na baat.. So madam ready rehna main 11:30 PM tak tujhe pickup krne aaungi 😉
S: OK
A: see ya..

Aliya opens cupboard and sees its already full with clothes..
Aliya: Arey ye cubboard toh already full hai?
Allah... Double mehnat karni paregi.. Ye toh kisi ladke k clothes lagte hai.. Anyways who cares ..She starts taking out clothes from cupboard and throws it one by one on floor..

"Meeting aaj hi hogi..wrna Abdullah music company ko ek aur loss ho sakta hai.. Raat hai toh Kya hua.. Work comes first.. Zain talking in phone with someone.. and enters his room..
He is shocked to see messiness all around..
Finally he sees Aliya.. *Flashback of their first meet.. Aliya splashing water on his face from water gun*
'Miss Water Gun Tum' 😲
Aliya too sees him..
Zain eyes turned red due to anger..
Aliya standing still..
Zain coming towards her..
And due to clothes Zain's leg slips and before she could say anything..He bumps on her both falls on bed..

Zain lost in Aliya's eyes..
Aliya felt electric current inside her body..

BG: I'm a Barbie girl, in the Barbie world
Life in plastic, it's fantastic!
Zain coming more close to her..
You can brush my hair, undress me
everywhere
Imagination, life is your creation
I'm a Barbie girl, in the Barbie world
Aliya cheeks turned pink.. Which made her look more beautiful..
Life in plastic, it's fantastic!
You can brush my hair, undress me
everywhere
Imagination, life is your creation
Zain admiring her beauty..
Come on Barbie, let's go party!
(Ah-ah-ah-yeah)
Come on Barbie, let's go party!
Zain came too close to her.. Few inches between their lips..

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Precap: Aliya throws the food made by Suraiya..
Zain becomes furious..

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So How was it? 😛
OK Fine Tomatoes , Chappals all are Welcome 😛

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago