Junoon- An ZaYa SS(Chap 9 up) - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Awesome yaar

Really fabulous
Sooo cute
"junoon" unique name yaar
Loved it
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

amazing update
really loved it
pls cont ASAP

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

it was so cute
awesome update
i loved it
plz cont soon

@All: Thank you ..!!😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashis

Gr8 update so zain recognize she is his daughter its getting interesting aliya definately try to hide it want to knw whtz gonna happen next will aliya herself tell zain the truth or nt...or zain will make her say the truth..

Thank you ..!!
Well she may or she may not .. i don't know about that you have to wait to know that ..!!😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Renu this is Super cute😊 loved it dear

I'm a fool, being depressed I didn't read this part early, now this update made my day
Junoon I very cute, zain realised junu is his daughter😉
Waiting for next part
Thank u so much for pm

Thank you ..!!😳
Glad that my update made your mood..😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you ..!!😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE:
Guys.. muje aajkal bohat weakness feel ho raha hai ..*in zain's Istyle* so i thought to change my schedule so i will update once in two weeks from now..hope that fine with you guys..sorry for this change i know you guys were waiting for update but i was not able to complete it up ..solly ..*khan pakadke*
Love'
Renu
Edited by ...Renu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
SURPRISE..!!!
muje iss time expect nahi kiya hogana tumlogne ne issliye dheko i'm here..LOL i have my own reason for this kal mei thodi busy hu issliye update kal ki update today only ..whatever it is i hope you like it ..my pc is on leave so there was neither proof reading nor typo correcting ..so please ignore all sorts of Typos..hope you guys will have a great time reading my update...Happi reading..!!!
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CH-6:She is mine..isn't she?


Aaliya's POV:

It had been two week since zain met junu since then i didn't get any glimpse of him neither in office nor in meetings..it's was a Sunday morning ..in other word junoon's day .. i promised her that ever Sunday i will give her my whole time..right now me and junu are on our dinning table having our break fast ..the calling bell rang disturbing our little breakfast chatter .. junu ran to open the door ..i was about to eat the piece of omelet on my fork but i forze in the mid way when i heard junu shouted
"Za-N"
zain was dressed in his plain white t-shirt with a straight cut jeans and he wore his black blazer in combination to his white tee..he was holding a shopping bag in his hand ...he kneed down near junu and hugged her
"Bright morning sweetie"
he looks so pale ..his eyes were in blood shot red indicating he lacks lots of sleep..seeing him so weak my heart argued me to go and give him atleast a side hug ..but my brain warned me reminding about all the deed he did to me in the past ..if he had done it in past he can even do in now..once again i can feel my old wound getting freshened up ..why is here now?? what do he want ?? doesn't he had a empire to run??he eye turned to me and he checked me out ..suddenly my cheeks took a red shade as i remember that i was in my pyjamas..a white tank top with a black shot which hardly reaches till middle of my thigh.he moved towards me

"Hey ner.. i mean Al-Ya hope you don't mind me in here.."

he trailed off

"Why are here ? to make my life hell again?"

i whispered angrily..he leaned into the crook of neck

"Don't try me nerdy ..!"

he whispered slight pressed his lip against my ear who the hell do he think he is? absence of a totally two weeks ..he baring into my house and makes demands???? even i badly wanted to fight and throw him out of my house but i can't because ..i sensed Mr.Zain Serious Abdullah not the loser flirts around me ..and no body dares to mess with him..if you do you are finished..thats why i calmly stepped aside watching him chatting with junu ..it was pretty obviously by the way he acting that he figured it out that junoon was his...by calling home and finding out about my pregnancy times or may be from any one around there..i saw junu checking the shopping bag zain had.
"Junu dear..that isn't your you shouldn't check others stuff..say sorr.."
i was cut off by zain
"no ..it's is for her..*he turned to junu* i think you told me that you are turning four ..so thought of gifting you something .."
he said smiling at her
"Ish it por me?"(Is it for me)
my angel's eyes twinkled..zain replied with a nod which made junu jump up and down in happiness..ended up hugging zain..she opened it finding herself a cutie little pink baby gown
"So you like?"
"Yessshhh"
junu yelled top of her voice..hugged zain then thanked him for the nth time and ran into her room to change
"so..Junoon huh??..so she is named after our tree house .."
by now the fact was crystal clear that zain came to that junu is his..and yes the tree house thing is ages back thing ...when me and zain were young we made a tree house with help of mamu for ourselfs..and named it junoon
"hmm yes"
i nervously replied him
"so when you were planning to tell me about her..or did you even think about it ?"
"Zain please.."
i try to back off from discussion ..and that was because i'm not ready to face him ..his questions and the feeling that i did wrong with him .. i really don't have any idea that what am i gonna say him..how am i going to mange him ...but i just have to do it
"no nerdy ..not today ..you aren't going to stop me today ..you hide my daughter from me??she is mine ..isn't she???"
he roared at me..pinning me to the wall
" yes ...and I'm sorry "
" sorry ?? i'm sorry to say your sorry isn' t going to get back all the time i have lost to see in my doll's life ..four year nerdy ...four year ..you kept her away from me .do you know how big were these four year ??? i missed out all the special moments of my little princess's life ..couldn't you just talk to me??or atleast leave a message about this to me?when you have so many option ..but no .what did you do ? run away??"
he sound hell emotional and a bit softened ..tear made their way from our eyes.. i was scared ..scared to make a eye contact with his eyes..i was scared because i have no answer for his question..i'm scared about what this gonna lead into ...he didn't speak after that .may be he was probably waiting for my answer ..me to say some thing ..the silence fill in between us ..none of us spoke.. my eye looked up into his..his eye were blood shot red.. red for pain ..red for agony ..red for angry red for all the thing he had on me..our eye had some unknown battle of word with each others ..they exchanged the pain the other had ..our eye battle was broken by junu's voice
"Mi..lo"(ammi look)
junu yelled and come out of here room in that little pink gown look like a really princess ..i wiped off my tears ...and i saw zain moving away doing the same..!!
"MR.Za-n huw du i lo?"(Mr.zain how do i look)
"KHUBSURAT"
he kneed down to her level and pecked her cheek ..started talking to her..seeing em both together like this made my eyes moist with tear .. i think i atleast picture this moment some thousands of time in my head ..my heart started melting for him but thats when my brain became alert and started warning by flash the memory of the morning he disowned me..told me that i was a mistake ...then declared that he hated me..and thrown me out of the house.."NO i can't trust him "i thought to myself..at the same time i can't keep him away from junu ..he is her father he has right over her.. but i promised to myself that i will never let this man entry my life again..never..with a capital "N"..!!

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PRECAP:

The real confrontation

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i'm sorry that ye update bohat chota hai and it's does contain the real confrontation..this was kinda of filler.. but i promise next wali romantic aur passionate update hogi .. okay now as you guys know my rule..comments do ..updates lo...so do like and comment .. .it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed..!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by ...Renu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc chapter !!!
But will aliya accept zain with his son ahil ?
She would be more broken to learn about zain and sanam's son i think ..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry latecomer,you are wonderful writer i just read all parts in one go.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope ur planning to update soon!
Cant wait for the real confrontation!

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