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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I have a lot to say...

Saani I havent read you much but the little i have i could never percieve you to write something of this sort. It was good! really.

Oh Zain is again Lattoo over her only after meeting her once. Bechara.. Sahi kit lag gai!

These lines...

Aage badhoge bhi ki tumhare liye phool bhichau?" Said a gruff voice.
"Phool bhicha lejiye. Aage badhne ki koi gunjaish nai hai." He retroted.

I would be doing the same if in that car wala's place.

Btw what does the title mean?

Update soon! And sorry hun have been a lil busy lately so have missed quite a few works from you.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome start 😳
beautifully penned down dear
waiting for the next part

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

What's the meaning of malhar? 😳

And man kutthe? 😆 conductor kis language mein baat kar raha tha? hindi?? 😛

I SO want to see Aaliya, or at least Pree, in that look. Mann she would look so damn cute with glasses!! Bechara ko aunty ne khara kar diya 😛 This is not good, respect ke chakkar mein you can't make anyone stand throughout the travel.. and that too in bus 😛 Haina? 😆😆

Amazing! Update soon and pm me.. i'll try to comment asap! 😉

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

^even suri had the same doubt.
malhar actually is a raga. Used in shruti(music)
U might have heard bout the story of akbar asking tansen to sing deepak raag- and that raag is for fire.
so when he sang, the lamps lit up. But he sang so well that his body started getting hot.
So he set out to search for someone who could sing malhar properly.
it is a raga when sung perfectly, causes thunde and rainstorm.
it is quintessentially substituted for the word "fresh"
And the also the biggest inter-colligiate fest of india is Malhar- hosted by Xaviers.
And kutthe means kidhar.
it is marathi.
respect k chakkar mein nai, in busses yaha ke, they write specific seats are reserved for women, handicapped and old people.
stri means lady, sathi means sitting in marathi :P
thanks fr commenting :)

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
^even suri had the same doubt.
malhar actually is a raga. Used in shruti(music)
U might have heard bout the story of akbar asking tansen to sing deepak raag- and that raag is for fire.
so when he sang, the lamps lit up. But he sang so well that his body started getting hot.
So he set out to search for someone who could sing malhar properly.
it is a raga when sung perfectly, causes thunde and rainstorm.
it is quintessentially substituted for the word "fresh"
And the also the biggest inter-colligiate fest of india is Malhar- hosted by Xaviers.
And kutthe means kidhar.
it is marathi.
respect k chakkar mein nai, in busses yaha ke, they write specific seats are reserved for women, handicapped and old people.
stri means lady, sathi means sitting in marathi :P
thanks fr commenting :)

Long explanation dude.. 😛 And yes i forgot to ask what's Xaviers? Its a college no? 😉

ahh okay.. 😉 you are marathi, haina? 😛

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Avii

@4bottlevodka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

WTH?I did not comment?😲

2 Minutes!

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"Aage badhoge bhi ki tumhare liye phool bhichau?" Said a gruff voice.
"Phool bhicha lejiye. Aage badhne ki koi gunjaish nai hai." He retroted.

^^😆😆 Awesome Sanika!

That Chai Wala! 😆😆

"Kutthe?" The conductor asked.
"Kya?"
Was he cursing him?
"Kutthe? Kidhar jana hai?"
"Uh, Xaviers"

^^Conductor sahab bhi bohot hilarious hain?😆😆

Yeaaahh!Sanika! 👏

Amazing! Please continue!

BTW,Dont hesitate to PM me.I Love Your Works and You Too!🤗

Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago

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Avii

@4bottlevodka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Oye - Hermain -Shes a keralite

And that raaga is 'Malahari' nuh?😕

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Lolyeah i got carried away 😆
but the word Malhar is beautiful. I love uska story 😊
Yup, Xaviers a college
and no, I am not maharashtrian, i am a malayali.
I know five languages though 😎
although three of themis very tutta phutta 😆