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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: preeharsh

plz continue soon
plz plz plz plz plz


I will surely continue it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey friends ..
I could not resist myself from writing thus chappy...I would lyk to thanks all who lyked and commented on my works and also to the silent readers...
I hope u all lyk it...
PART 3A...

Everything was getting normal in barkat villa...Shazia and nafessa had stopped fighting over small issues and became friends...They now don't treat each other as enemies and accepted Aliya ...Aliya too accepted Rizwan and Aayat marriage..Gauhar married Rehan because he felt in love with her and also took responsibility of her child...It was over a month since Aliya had returned from hoapital...Zain and Aliya night always passed sleepless(u know what i mean to say)... Both were teased by the family members because of the swollen lips and lovebite around their neck..
All the ladies used to go for shopping and had fun together but Aayat was not included because she was in her final year of college and her exams were near...Rizwan and Aayat had decided not to consummate their marriage till one year...
On one fine day...
Barkat villa hall...
Aayat was angry with rizwan because he forget to took her to watch the movie..
Rizwan was following her saying sorry when they entered BV hall where everyone was chitchatting ...
Aliya:kya hua aayat ?
Aayat:dekho na appi apke devar ko ,promise Kiya tha movie dikhane le jayega par bhul gaya...
(Rizwan made a guilty face )
Aliya:aayat ab maaf bhi kar do..kam ke chalte bhul gaya hoga...
Rizwan:haan aayat bhabhi sahi keh rahi hai...
Aayat :aapi aap keh rahi hai toh main ise maaf kar dungi par ise murga banna padega 😆
Rizwan:mujhe nahi banna murga vurga..
Aliya:(bitted her lower lip to control her laughter) Rizwan ban jao name..mere liye...
(Every one was trying to control their laughter)
Rizwan:OK bhabhi aapke liye..
(And gave a glare to Aayat while Aliya chuckled)
Rizwan was going to sit down when they all heard sound of something being torn..
Rizwan placed his hand on his back and now his face was showing expressions of shock, shyness and little bit of laughter...
Now everyone eyes were on rizwan back and every body bursted out into laughter...
Usman was the most happiest because all the happiness was back...
Controlling his laughter za in announced why should not they have a family picnic..
Everybody became super happy hearing this...
Usman booked a mini-bus so that they could all travel together...
Nafessa and Shazia sat together leaving a shocking fahad behind...
Fahad with usman ,rizwan with Aayat and zaya sat on their seats while kids occupied last seat where they finally dozed off..
Za in and aaliya were too much busy romancing with each other that they did not know when they reached their picnic spot...This too happened with rizwan and aayat...everyone was chukling while the couples were embarrassed..
After getting out of the bus..
Usman declared to play hide and seek...
Fahad volunteered to be a dinar...
Zaya were running together suddenly aaliya fainted...
Za in:Aaliyaaa...
Everybody gathered and soon was taken to a nearby hospital...
Za in:doctor kya hua aaliya ko?sab kuch thik toh hai na..
Doctor:Ji Mr.Abdullah woh Mrs.Abdullah...

Sorry for leaving it here ...
Was tired because of so much homework I got...
Will continue till tomorrow...
Tomatoes are welcome but don't forget to lyk and comment...
PMS will be send in a while...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Lovely update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Lets guess wats for tomm...ahem ahem
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: princess5253

Lets guess wats for tomm...ahem ahem


Guess I have given a clue already in my previous update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Very nice part..so cute and zaya having sleepless nights..EVERY NIGHT!! Woaaahh ;) hehe.. update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhavimanish32

Very nicely written
Continue soon


👍🏼 thanks..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Very nice part..so cute and zaya having sleepless nights..EVERY NIGHT!! Woaaahh ;) hehe.. update soon and thanks for the pm


I will and wlcum...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
tremendous brilliant excellent update
desperately waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Wow...it was awesome
Do continue
Thxx for the pm n continue sending with the hyperlink😳
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