Zaya: Picture abhi baki hai ... *Chapter 4(pg9)* 15| Nov

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys,
Im really into writing and reading and decided to write for zaya since I love them from the bottom of my heart

Should I give it a shot?

Will upload the concept quiet soon till then


Love,
Secret

INDEX
1. INTRO (above)

2. Sneak Peak (below)

3. Chapter 1 I'd come for you( below)

4. Chapter 2 Please maan jao(pg 2)

5. Note (pg 4)

6. Chalo toh phir (pg 6)

7. Kuch na kaho (pg 9)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all, WELCOME TO THE FORUM!
Seems u r new here.
And second, PLEASE DO!
Would love to read it.
And give the concept soon.
Waiting for the ff eagerly.

Lots of love,
-Tanya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey:-D
And welcome to the forum!!
I'm sure you'll make loads of friends here:-P
And yes please do give it a shot..
I'm looking forward to reading it and when u update,could u please pm me?!:-P
Look forward to hearing from u again soon!!

Lots of love..
- Shiri.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really appreciate the response and motivation...😊😆😃
My concept will be according to the spoilers of a divorce and I will start with a short story thn will create the Fanfiction and guys my updates will be short since im a young fan...😉


A sneak peak...😳

He crept in the room and saw her lying on the bed. She looked so angelic he couldn't believe how and what he had done...she was in a very bad condition all broken and today he saw her in a different state she was a strong girl but nowhe realized that he had shattered her from the inside and crumbled her positiveness to a piece of paper.

He walked towards the angel of his life and saw 2 kids riht beside her. He did not panic or wasn't in a state of shock he knew who they were... he sat beside her and caressed her hair and opened her bun she slept in a really uncomfortable way leaning against he bed frame and wait...

She held something a black and golden photo frame, she held it right near her chest he sat there smiled at her and slowly slid the frame.

Just as he took the frame she shrugged in her sleep and opened her eyes all worried about where her loved and only treasure went

And she could not believe her eyes her eyes pooled up and tears rushed down her eyes he couldnt bear her tears as he already had hurt her, broke her and shattered her enough he had completely changed her,he had killed her soul and heart again and again but yet she kept faith in him and was still waiting for him then he wiped her tears and said one line she was dying to hear from ages... 😭

''Hey Mamu ki bhanji...dont worry I'm hear once again it's not a drem it's really me.''⭐️


So how is it would love to hear comments and plz dont mind my grammar though I love to write i hate this grammar concept. Wish to kill the person who invented it anyways would love suggestions and comments😛

Love,
Secret
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can someone tell me how to edit and create a index and keep updating it along with that how can I change the name and add notes?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all, REALLY LOVE THE SNEAK PEAK...
pls continue soon.
waiting eagerly for that.
thanks a lot:-))

lots of love,
-Tanya.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

first of all, REALLY LOVE THE SNEAK PEAK...

pls continue soon.
waiting eagerly for that.
thanks a lot:-))

lots of love,
-Tanya.



Hey got use to the fourm quiet easy and I'm glad u LOVED it ! And i got 214 views on day one Im truly honoured...
Edited by princess5253 - 11 years ago
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I have come for you...

Recap: Zain comes to take his Mamu ki bhanji back after the divorce.

He wiped his tears but she just moved his hands away

"why have you come back to interfere in my life and since we are not one, I don't know who you are so can you please leave? Ki mein apne shauhar ko bolavu?"

"Toh aapka nikaah ho gaya hai? Toh please zara hame batengi ki aap ke shauhar kaun hai aur unse milayegi?" he asked her.

"woh... 2 hafto ke liye bahar gaye hai... lawyer hai na Rehaan Khan..."

"Accha toh unho ne kisi gair mard ki tasveer ko aapke paas rakhne ki ijazat di?" he asked looking at the picture she broke eye contact and looked everywhere but at him.

Tears again started to rush from her eyes... " yaha kyu aaye ho? Aur yeh tasveer ek firishte ki hai jise mane 6 mahine pehle kho diya..."

"arrey wah agar aapke shauhar bahar gaye hai who mujhe milne kaise aaye?"

He cupped her face and smirked at her... she still was the same the way he left her she still didn't know how to lie...

"Rehaan office aaya tha kal Aliya...usne bataya ki tum...and looked at her stomach...tumne mujhe batana sahi nahi samjha?"

She picked a pillow and threw it right at him!

"Maine phone iya tha tumne nahi uthaya aur mujhse kit kit kar rahe ho...aur waise bhi yeh maire aur maire shauhar ki beech ki baat hai aap kaun hote hai beech mein parne wale..?"

"Iss bache ka baap aur tumhara shauhar... tumhe kya laga ki maine talaaq ke paper pe assli dastakhat kiye hai... aur kya mujhe nahi pata ki tum yaha sirf Rehaan ka ehsaan chukka rahi ho uske baache ka khayal rakh...look at urself unka khayal rakhte rakhte apne aap ko bhul gayi ho... tum abhi mere liye rooti ho aur raat bhar iss bache se baat kar ke use sukoon dilati ho ke mein ek din phir aaunga..."

"Tumhe... kisne kaha yeh jhoot hai!" she said wiping her tears "aur iss baat ka kya proof hai ki tumne jhoote dastakhat kiye hai...?"

"Maine nahi tu mne bhi kiye hai yeh toh tumhe pata hai aur shareat law ke hisaab se mein abhi bhi tumhara shauhar hoon...aur agar tumne dusra nikaah kiya bhi hai toh it's not acceptable..." he said keeping his hand on her stomach. And then he removed those papers and showed her... In her sign she had signed as Atiya' instead of Aliya' and in his it was Zaim' instead of Zain' they couldn't help but smile but...

Just then she realized that it's not fair... and told him "Bhale hi kyu na ho par maine Rehaan se vada kiya hai ki mein uske bacho ka dhayaan rakh ungi;"

"Ha par mujhse kiye vado ka kya? Aur hamari mohabbat ki nishani ka kya Aliya? Uske saath mein toh maar ja.."

Just then she kept her hand on his mouth and stopped him and bursted out in a pool of tears... "Kabhi aisa maat kehna... dekho Zain iss baat ki gaurntee kya hai ki tum phir mujhe dard nahi doge aur who choro mami...kya who vishvas kaengi key eh baccha hamara hai?" she said caressing her stomach. And got out of bed and walked to the window where her her was getting hit by some cool breeze and she left Zain in guilt and deep thought...

Then she turned back to him and said bringing her hands close together

"Mein haath jorti hoon yaha se chale jao..."

"Par..."

"Chale jao!" she screamed with complete power and broke down to the floor and Zain came rushing to her and grabbed her by her shoulders which made her shiver. and she just couldn't look into his eyes knowing she could not escape them...and he looked down at her with alot of concern,care and Beintehaa mohabbat and told her...

"Calm down and take care of urself and this child who is the witness of our mohabbat...I can afford to lose anyone but the two of you"😭


How was it...? Please leave love, comments and likes...😛😉


Love,

Secret

Edited by princess5253 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Wow that was sooo emotional and heartbreaking...
Update soon as u can please
Loved it
Really looking forward to the next part!
And well done also..
Ur really good at writing
And very talented...
Next chapter jaldi update karna!
I look forward to reading all of ur future work:)
And its a pleasure to have you here!!:*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was really a very emotional one ...
Loved it...
Continue soon dear... 😊 😊

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