ZaYa SS: Busted (Chapter 6, Page 11, Aug 22) [Complete]

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jazz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Totally loved it

Awosome part

Love jealous zain

Are aliya KO bhi jealous karvao plzz

Thank you for the pm

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aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Its really feel good type ...i love it

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katmaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

I loved how zain is so jealous ..how he touches her ...how he is so possessive ...

And u what should I tell u ...man u write awesome just keep on updating soon and ya do pm me

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Loved the possessive and jealous zain...
Continue soon... 😃

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Its really sweet part.love ZaYa part,its really cute and romantic.poor Zain he could express his feeling.waiting for next part,update soon.

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simran422

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

The update was really very nice! Very romantic and cute! Thnx for the pm and do cont soon!

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-Sajdey-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

love the possesiveness. amazing work

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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

As usual fabulous update👏
So beautifully written 👍🏼
totally loved it...❤️
Thanks a lot for PM .😊

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vinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

sab se pehle.. what do you even intend to do CF?

kill me?

or make me drool over zain without blinking?

or burn my brain imagining ZaYa?

i just don't get ur intensions!

Zalim ho aap! sacchi! *pouts*

first of all u give such cute long updates and that has the hotness quotient too

buti will not change ur name.. u r Candy floss urf CF only😛

now coming to the chapter.. i so want to quote the entire chapter but will look too odd! so i'll just refer in order

Uff! the way zain admires his MKB.. i so admire that... but his ego petting goes on na.. that he is hot too.. but itna hot hai toh utna build up banta hai😉😳

totally latoo he is over her!

i care less about the vanilla perfume but u are making me go crazy for sure

I said wrapping my arms around her waist, my hands resting on her bare stomach causing her to gasp. Damn, her skin was soft. I dragged my hands across her stomach, slowly, I felt her shiver in my arms and the goosebumps under my hand. I love how reactive she is to my touch.

isss...that was HOT!

and i love bakbak yaar... cho cute she is😳😳😳

and the tie part was also cute, hot, romantic all at the same time!

ur srsly killing me

I am so smooth that even butter would be jealous, I surprised myself sometimes...actually not really, I was born smooth, I charmed all the nurses in the maternity ward from the first day

that was a master piece.. esp the @purple part🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

and iss baar! Fahad bana KMH! abb yahi bacha tha

poor fahad and zain.. gotta bear the gossip queens!😵

and ha.. the jealous, posessive Zain! oh my i love him!

i thought shawn would defo have a broken nose😆😆😆

i enjoyed nafeesa and aliya's convo too.. cho cute

and mumma's boy ha zain? oye hoye.. accha i'll zip my mouth.. u have a reputation tohandle after all😛

Mein...kisiko nahi. Actually, sab mujhe ghoor ghoor kar dekhthai hai." I smirked causing the two of them to laugh. "Mein toh sab se baach kar reh-raha hoon, nahi toh saari raat mujhse tarah tarah ke sawal pooche jayenge." I covered.

ZAIN!!!!🤣🤣 OMG this fellow!

lovely chapter CF

about the writing, i'm tired of saying the same old thing...

the only old thing i will tell is

ILU and u noe it

bye

waiting for the next update

-vinu