ZaYa Drabble: Good Days. **NEW PART 6 UPDATED 28/06** PLZZZ SEE PAGE 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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do continue liked it😛
Edited by Meghapaim - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello people. Thank you all for your lovely comments. Will update after today's episode. And will pkka make it a nice one. And long one. And hope you will all like them. If cant update today will for sure update tomorrow. Thanks a lot.
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hi ppl i am bck wid d nxt part...
hope you all like it...l

it was another peaceful morning zain woke up to see that aaliya wasnt there. but there was a note left with a red rose.
it read-
good morning jaanu. sorry mei tumhare saath nhi hoon bt mami ne mujhe kuch zaruri kaam ke liye barkat mei jaana pda. kitchen mei tumhare liye breakfast pda hai. kha lena. aur mamu ka phone aaya tha woh keh rhe the ki tumhe aaj office jaane ki zarurat nhi hai. so enjoy yourself hubby! mei jald hi laut aoongi. aur yeh woh chitti nhi hai jisme mei likh ke jaati hoon ki mei ammi abbu kr ghar jaa rhi hoon. ab itni asaani se peecha nhi chtega mujhse. tke care.
-tumhari malike-e-zain.

zain kept down the note and went towards the closet and saw another note there.
it read-
dont worry. meine tumhare kapde bathroom mei ready kr rkhe hai. jao pehn lo. ;-)
he smiled and went towards bathroom. after 10 minutes he came out and wnt towards the kitchen to hv breakfast.

he went back to the room and roamed around waiting for aaliya to come.
zain- kahan reh gyi ho malika-e-zain?
he called her up but her phone was on voice msg. he waited and waited then finally heard spme footsteps. he knew it was aaliya. he hid behind the door. aaliya came in in a back and red anarkali looking beautiful as ever. zain smirked seeing aaliya's confused face.
aaliya- zain? zain tum kaho ho?
she looked everywhere but behind the door. finally she called up zain. the phone rang nearby she could hepar it. suddenly she felt a pull towards the wall. she landed upon him. his arms around her waist while hers rested on his chest.

to be continued.
hope you all liked it.
will update next tomorrow.
love you all.

lots of love,
-tanya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!!⭐️
Lovely update tanya ❤️
waiting for the next part 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U nailed it Tanya...
Update soon...
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Hey people. Todays ep was mindblowing and hence I don't think my drabble would sound romantic anymore. But I am still going to try. Hope you all like it:

Zain: Can I ask where are were you malika-e-Zain?
Aaliya: No!
Zain: Oh really?
Aaliya nodded.
Zain: Okay then.
He picked her up and laid her on the bed. He pinned her beneath her.
Zain: So Malika-E-Zain. What should we do now?
He said as he eyed her lips.
Aaliya: Zain Abdullah I have other work too other than your romance!
Zain: Better than this?
He said as he pecked on her lips. Aaliya smiled.
Aaliya: No, but better than this.
She said as he rolled him over and kissed him. This time he smiled.
Aaliya: Did you have breakfast?
Zain: Yes ma'am. I did!
Aaliya: Good.
He got up and pulled her on his lap and wrapped his arms around her bare waist under her saree. Her back facing him.
Zain: I was thinking how about we plan a honeymoon trip?
Aaliya: Zain you spend each and everyday like its honeymoon time.
Zain: Uff Aaliya. Why do you have to be so unromantic.
Aaliya: Well I had to. Because someone here needs to.
She said as she turned around still sitting on his lap. She cupped his face as he smiled.
Zain: So Malika-E-Zain is the adult here I guess.
He said wrapping his arms around her again pulled her towards his stomach.
Aaliya: Yes I am!
Zain smiled.
Aaliya: Okay now let me go. I have other work to do.
Zain: I don't think I want to though.
Aaliya: Zain!
Zain: Aaliya!
Both smiled. Zain pulled her closer as he pressed his lips upon hers.

After a while, both in same position.
Aaliya: Now may I go husband of mine?
Zain: I don't want to let you go. I love you.
Aaliya: Aww baby I love you too. But I can sit here with you all day.
Zain: Why not?
Aaliya: Because...
She said nearing their lips. Making him lay back on the bed with her on top of him.
Zain: hmm?
Aaliya: Because...
She said cupping his face bringing it closer.
Aaliya: Because..
Zain: hmm?
Aaliya: I LOVE YOU!
She said as she ran away. He stood up.
Zain: You messed with the wrong person.
He smirked and started following her.
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Next would be a new day.
Hope you all liked it.
Do leave your comments and likes.
Tried to make this one romantic.
Hope it DID turn out to be it.
Thanks a lot for reading. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update...
Update soon... 😊 😃
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itne kam comments?:^-(
phir bhi update kr rhi hoon.
hope you all like it.

DAY 4

zain came from office. he heard someone lauing amd talking. he went into his room and saw aaliya standing their talking on the phone. he grabbed her hand and she hard on his chest. still holding the phone. sje cut the phone by saying shr would call later on. she wrapped her arms arpund his neck while he pulled her closer.
zain- who were you talking to?
he said brushing his lips upon hers.
aaliya- what is it to you?
she said as she pecked on his lips.
zain- so its nthng to me?
he said walking towards the wall with her.
aaliya- you got that right.
they reached the wall as he pushed her against it.
zain- i have to get another thing right.
he said as he kissed her lips. suddenly both smelled something burning.
zain- aaliya can you smell something burning?
aaliya- yeah i can..OH CRAP!
she said as she ran towards the kitchen followed by zain. she opened the oven and out came a fully burned chocolate cake. aaliya frowned seeing it. zain came and saw this.
aaliya- i baked a chocolate cake for you... and look now.
she said as she put tdown the burnt cake into the sink and took of her gloves. zain hugged her from back and said.
zain- nothin is sweeter than you.
he said as he kissed her cheek. she turned around and smiled.
aaliya- you really know how to lift my mood zain!
zan- probably somehting that i hv learnt from my malika-e-zain.
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hope you all liked it.
next new day.
do leave ur comments and likes bcoz as i said earlier as your comments decrease i will stop writing.
thanks a lot for reading.

lots of love,
-tanya.

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