ZaYa SS: 'You are driving me crazy' [Part 2 : Pg 11] - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
This is Awesome...It is well written...Please continue soon.

You are a very nice writer...'Second Aliya in my life' was also very nice.
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
You write Beautifullyyy! waiting fo the next update! update sooon dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: katmaan

First to comment awesome update do pm me


Thanks! :')
Sorry to burst your bubble but you are second πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
I Love this Concept.. Amazing πŸ‘πŸΌ
Love your Writing Style..It's Wonderful.
Update Soon..!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Interesting start.

The mysterious girl eyes has captivated Zain. Now he is gone.
Looking forward to read the story.


Thankyou :)
I'll continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written..πŸ‘πŸΌ


Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome start.after only saw aliya eyes zain became crazy for her.waiting for next part.


Originally posted by: ipsitaritu

πŸ‘Really awesome πŸ‘πŸΌ



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Rahma11

Great work looking forward to the next part!


Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story. Like both versions


Originally posted by: Humzy

Awsm start. Loved it. Continue soon


Originally posted by: Rasa23

nyc start..looking forward to the nxt part..pls add me..thnxx:)



Thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
it was amazing, I loved it
Edited by masaf57 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: ZaYaFan1

Reserved!

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Thanks for the PM πŸ˜‰ No problem πŸ˜›

I'm the most vaila... πŸ˜† "any ways in the end of the day he still remains the most adorable father one could ever get and I love him endlessly" ❀️ Amazing line! Babar shair πŸ˜› Hahah! This was TOO good! πŸ‘ Really? Thanks 😊


Chand jaan ko date pe 🀣 Wow! Imagine Zain dating Chand Jaan πŸ˜†
I can actually imagine that 🀣 Zain smiling naughtily at Chaand Jaan and Chaand Jaan shying while fixing her dupatta again and again πŸ˜†


"Haye aise mausam mein mai hun, wo ho aur bas tanhayi" 😳 at this point i thought he already has a girlfriend πŸ˜› lekin becharay ka naseeb πŸ˜‰ Ab tak koi mili nahi πŸ˜† Originally this is my dialogue 😳 I say this whenever the weather is good here πŸ˜† Apnay dil per pathar rakh ker maine yeh dialgue Zain ko de diya πŸ˜­πŸ˜† Btw coincidence check karo 'Zain ko bhi ab tak koi nahi milli or mujhe bhi koi nahi milla' 🀣


Ahaaa... romantic songs πŸ˜› I wish they would show Aaliya in a black abaya soon in the show itself 😳 "Her personality screamed innocence" .. WOW! This is brilliant, Emaan πŸ‘πŸΌ This is my fav line from the part 😊


Aww! zain wants to see that abaya girl again 😳 I hope you give him a chance πŸ˜› Awwiee, he just can't stop thinking abut her ❀️ Esi kya ankhein hain yar? πŸ˜† Nasheeli aankhein hain yaar πŸ˜‰


Emaan this was superb! Very well written, I must say πŸ˜ƒ i'm already loving itt ❀️ And the best thing in your update is its length! Quite longg πŸ˜› Ab holidays hain na, so you better update quickly πŸ˜‰ I love Zain's character 😳 Ab bas aaliya ka bhi charatcer jaldi se agey barhay 😳 I wanna read moreee πŸ˜ƒYou write so well! πŸ‘πŸΌ PM me whenever you update! 😊


This is the longest and the best comment I've got on this thread πŸ˜ƒ Thankyou Jaan πŸ˜‰ Thankyou so much πŸ€—

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: madhuxyz

How adorabale 😊 Very well written loved it 😊
Goddd zain became romeo 😳
Loved it thanks for wonderfull update
Do pm me


Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

Zain had turned into a roadside romeo Wonderfully written,plz continue !



Thankyou very much both of you 😊
Yeah. Zain turned into a Romeo πŸ˜ƒ
Will PM you both the next update.

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