ZaYa FF : Beintehaa... Nafrat Se Mohabat Tak(character sketch on pg 1)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone, I m Dhanya . I ' m here on with a ZaYa FF . This is my second work on Zaya . The first a collab between me and Tanya(Zaya15). This is completely my take and has no resemblence with the show . Here's the teaser :

TEASER


A beautiful garden covered with snow . A girl is seen in a beautiful wedding dress . A cute guy is standing beside her . The priest is seen near them .

"Do you take miss Sophia Elizabeth Spencer to be your lawfully wedded wife?" The priest asks the guy.

Before the guy could say "I do" a women jumped out of nowhere .

" No baby , you cant do this to me " She said hugging the groom .

The bride looks confused . " Who are you ??" The angry bride screams at the women.

"This is my husband your planning to get married to . I wont let you take away my husband ."The women yells back.

The poor groom is left dumbfounded as he has no idea about what is happening around him.

"What is going on " . The priests speaks. "Ma'm are you claiming the groom to be you husband??"

"I'm not claiming him to be my husband, he is my husband and the father of my child" the women said angrily.

Tears streaming from the bride's face.
'I don't know this women ', the groom stammered . He is confused.

"Liar , how can you do this to me ... look here ..., all these pictures ...him, me and our son ' she shows some photos to the bride and the priest 'How can a women lie about such things? ' . She starts crying and the bride consoles her .

"Cheater " the bride yells at the groom and slaps the groom right on his face.


So that was pretty much the teaser. How was it ? Who do you think the groom was? Do you want me to continue?? If yes please hit the like button and comment below .If not I'll stop writing. Both chocolates and chappals are welcome .Suggestions and criticism is dearly welcomed . Please feel free to pm . Should I keep on writing ????? Let me know and Thank you for bearing with me 😊

Scroll down for character sketch and let me know if you want pm s for future updates 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read your teaser ,it is beautifully written , is the groom Zain ???
Please continue fast and pm me for chapter one . Waiting for your update.
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Originally posted by: ammu808

Just read your teaser ,it is beautifully written , is the groom Zain ???

Please continue fast and pm me for chapter one . Waiting for your update.


Glad you liked it. To know if the groom is Zain you'll have to wait 😉

I 'll decide on continuing based on the response i get and if I write part 1 , I'll pm you.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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teaser s good, similar to rizwan's marriage, but next time please atleast name one character for us to have an idea of the upcoming story
update soon
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Originally posted by: divikash

teaser s good, similar to rizwan's marriage, but next time please atleast name one character for us to have an idea of the upcoming story

update soon


Thank you for the pointer . I wanted that to be a surprise . I ll clear them out in chapter one . Thanks again for commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm teaser
Looks interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm teaser😊
Looks interesting
Please Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all a big thank you to all those you liked and commented .
After a lukewarm response I decided to stop writing but the comments I saw forced me to pen down the character sketch covering the important characters 😊



Character Sketch

Aaliya Yasir Hussain

A 22 year old girl whose kind hearted yet strong headed. She was adopted by a widow Saleema Yasir Hussain when she was 7 years old.She loves dancing and is very beautiful.


Zain Usman Abdullah

The extremely good looking 23 year old immature son of businessman Usmaan Abdullah . Zain loves his family very much and respects his fathers decisions.Even tough he is brilliant he skips classes and misses exams .He became more spoilt when his mother divorced his father 5 years ago.He is found of his adopted sister Aisha whose almost 6 years .


Usman Abdullah

A very successful businessman who own a chain of hotels in Europe . Has two sons - Fahad and Zain, and a daughter called Barkat. His wife left the family 5 years ago when he adopted a 6 month old baby girl Aisha . He shares a wonderful bond with his sister Saleema.

Saleema Yasir Hussain

A widow and a powerful woman . She runs her own advertisement firm . She lives with her adopted daughter Aaliya and her own daughter Aayath .

Aayath Yasir Hussain

Saleema 's daughter . She is extremely close to her sister Aaliya. She is 18 years old and preparing for collage.

Kabir Rahim Khan

Zain s enemy . He would go to any extent to defeat Zain Abdullah .


Palak Trivedi

Aaliya s best friend . A cute and bubbly girl .



If you still think I should keep going please hit the like button and comment below .Criticism and suggestions are welcome .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dont think of stopping , you should keep going . Aaliya is an orphan. Usman is divorced , interesting twists , update soon.

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