'Ab Ghar Chale?'~ZaYa TS **LAST PART UP** 21/06

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Posted: 11 years ago
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--Completed--
Thank You all for your Love ❤️

INDEX

PREVIEW: Below

PART 1: Page 5

NOTE: Page 8

ZaYa's OUTFITS: Page 9

PART 2: Page 10

NOTE+PART 3: Page 13


***
I was waiting for someone to write an OS on the current track.
But I didn't get any.
So I decided to write my own.

This is just a Preview.
I want your Review.
Then I'll decide whether to continue or not.

***
She lay on the bed, Staring at the ceiling. The hole in her empty chest expanding.

She was in Bhopal. Her body was, anyways.

But she had left her heart, mind & soul somewhere else.

Infact, Mumbai mein ek Barkat Villa hai. Uske top floor pe ek kamra hai jisme ek Bhoot rehta hai. Usi Bhoot ke paas Aaliya ka dil hai.

She smiled. Amazed at the pace with which she was losing her sanity by being away from him.

But this was destiny. Allah Ki Marzi. And she had accepted it.

She closed her eyes and let the tears fall.

***
He sighed as he hauled up his bag from the conveyor belt.

Mamu Ki Bhanji.

This girl will be the death of him.

But how was he any better?

What had he done last night? What the hell was he thinking?

In his desperation to get an answer, he had hurt her.

Hurt her to the point that she left him.

He had broken her. And it was him who could repair her.

And he would.

Zain Abdullah had come.

To take her back.

And Nothing and No One would stop him now.

***

Should I continue? Reviews Please. Jaldi 😛

P.S.-- 500 posts Celebration!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plzzz do continue ... luvd it 😊
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please continue... 😳
its amazing...
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Originally posted by: zaya143

plzzz do continue ... luvd it 😊

SO sweet.
Writing then...
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Wow awsm preview
Please continue soon
It was very cute and sweet


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Sounds interesting 😉
Do continue!
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You better continue this Girl. I have a feeling that this won't be yet another cliched romance😆
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Please update soon I am waiting 😳
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I love it! Please continue! :D
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Originally posted by: ...Harmony...

please continue... 😳
its amazing...


ThankYou
Continuing.

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