COLLEGE GET TOGETHER: zaya, sajan and arshi ss (part-2 updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow lovely cs
excited to read first chap now
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks people...
i am here to tell you that since i have not seen ipkknd at all... i dont know their surnames, how they were, etc... so if i write something wrong pls dont feel offended... i would try to keep it as simple as i can and concentrate on zaya only...
here's the teaser for chapter 1:
aaliya gets a call from the principal... the principal informs that she has decided that there will be a college renewal in bhopal... aaliya requests zain... actually forces zain to accompany her... zain accompanies her even after his protest... on the other side gunjan and khushi are also very excited for the renewal... and have requested their respective husbands to accompany her... unaware that they are gonna meet each other and aaliya at the renewal...
here's the teaser... so i guess the story of this ff is quite clear with u... in case of any doubts related to the story... u cn pm me or leave a reply... but i am sure that the story is quite clear with u... and since the character of khushi and gunjan is played by the same person i.e. sanya irani... u cn imagine either of them someone else... i am glad that i didnt add rangrasiya also... then there would be three characters played by the same person... hope you like the story...
thanks...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
lovely teaser
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will surely...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEYA PEOPLE..
HOPE I AM NOT THAT LATE...
AND EVEN I AM I AM NOT GONNA APOLOGIZE...😆
BECAUSE GOOD THINGS TAKE TO TIME TO HAPPEN...😆
HERE I AM WITH PART-1...
ZAYA FF
COLLEGE GET TOGETHER
PART-1

zain and aaliya were sleeping... it was around 8:30 am... both were late but sleeping cozily on the bed... suddenly aaliya's phone started ringing... it was getting louder and louder as she had set her phone on 'increasing melody' mode... yesterday they had went to a crowded place and there they hardly knew when they got osman's 7 missed calls... osman was fuming with anger as they went back home for the irresponsibility they had shown today... if it was a emergency then? so since then she had not shut the phone either on the silent mode or on normal... zain stirred in sleep... then woke up aaliya who was sleeping peacefully... he was surprised that how this girl not wake even after such a huge noise... then finally decided to pick the phone himself as aaliya wasnt waking up... he picked the phone and saw its an unknown number...
zain: hello?
person: hello am i talking to aaliya ghulam haider?
zain: i am her husband speaking... who are you?
person: ohh mr. ahmed... i am her college's principal...
zain fumed with anger...
zain: no i am zain abdullah...
principal: ohh my apologies mr. abdullah... can i talk to aaliya?
zain: well she's sleeping... any message?
principal: sleeping till 8:30 am? well thats late...
zain looked up and saw the time... it was 8:30...
princi: give my message that there is a college renewal at her college... if she wishes to come it would be a great honour...
zain: yeah i will ask her... thank you...
princi: thank you mr. abdullah... have a nice day...

zain then woke aaliya...
zain: aaliya?
aaliya: hhmmm?
zain: that was a call from your principal...
aaliya: principal? (she said half-awaken)
zain: yeah there is a college renewal at bhopal... she is asking if you wnna go?
aaliya shot up...
aaliya: of course i wanna go... what did you tell her?
zain was surprised...
zain: that i will ask you and tell...
aaliya: ohh zain... u know those were the best days in my life...
zain made a face...
aaliya: next to these...
she pecked on his cheeks...
aaliya: zain?
zain caught the voice... she usually talks to him like that when she wants something...
zain: what?
aaliya: my sweet sweet hubby! my shonu... my monu...
zain: kya chahiye tumhe mkb?
aaliya: u hrt my feelings zain... mei toh bas aise hi pyaar jata rhi thi...
zain: kya chahiye aaliya?
aaliya: tum mere saath bhopal chaloge na...
zain: no no no... no way!
aaliya: pls pls pls pls pls... pretty pls... pretty pls...
zain: no aaliya... mei bhopal nhi jaunga...
aaliya: accha ab kaha gya woh tumhara pyaar... bade shohar bante ho... hmph...
zain: accha? theek hai phir... i am going...
aaliya: pls pls pls chalo na zain...
zain: hmph... theek hai...
aaliya: yay!
she quickly hugs zain tightly and lightly pecks on his lips...
aaliya: you r the best husband in the world...
zain: oh really?
aaliya nodded...

TO BE CONTINUED...
IN THE NEXT SAJAN WILL BE INTRODUCED...
AND IN THE LAST ARSHI...
HOPE YOU LIKED IT...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
THANKS...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
wow awsm update
loved it
zaya were so sweet and cute
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEYA PEOPLE...
THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS...
HERE IS THE TEASER FOR PART-2...
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...
zain and aaliya reach bhopal... there at the college renewal ceremony the principal welcomes aaliya personally and praises her at the stage in front of everyone... zain feels as if he is being praised... next aaliya gets a major shock as she sees gunjan at the party... they both hug each other... just then samrat walks in and is shocked to see zain in bhopal... after the shock is over they start chatting and gossiping... both the boys and girls had been best of friends...
thats it for the teaser...
hope you all liked it...
pls give ur suggestions to make the story even better...
and do leave ur comments and likes...
thanks...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
wow lovely teaser
love it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEYA PEOPLE...
I AM SOOO SORRY FOR THE DELAY...
RECENTLY HAVE BEEN A BIT BUSY...
HERE'S THE NEXT PART...
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...
ZAYA SS
COLLEGE GET TOGETHER
PART-2

zain and aaliya reached bhopal...
zain: aslam valekum phups...
aaliya: aslam valekum ammi...
shabana: valekum aslam... tum dono yaha?
zain: yeh toh aap apni beti se hi puch li jiye... (he looked towards aaliya)
shabana: aaliya?
aaliya: ammi mere college ka renewal hai... meine socha ki mei zain ke saath chali jaoon.
shabana: toh theek hai... arre andhar toh aao...
aaliya: ji...

AT NIGHT...
they were getting ready for the renewal... aaliya was wearing jeans and a stylish kurti... to zain's surprise... he had never seen her this way...
zain: tumne jeans pehni hai...
aaliya: haan kyun nhi pehn skti?
zain burst out into laughing... aaliya got angry and began to walk out of the room... zain held her hand and pulled her hard against his chest... and wrapped his arm around her waist...
zain: acchi lag rhi ho...
aaliya: hamesha se...
zain: accha?
aaliya: hmmm... ab chale?
zain tightened her hold on her...
zain: kya krna hai jaake... yahi rehte hai na...
he kept grabbing her more and more closer... she got out of his grip...
aaliya: chup chap chalo zain abdullah... and btw i am driving...
zain: what??? no way!
aaliya: yes way... now come...

AT THE VENUE...
music was blasting out of the speakers... everyone was seeming to be enjoying the party... aaliya held zain's hand and walked up to everyone... suddenly she spotted her principal talking to some students...
aaliya: aslam valekum ma'am...
principal: hay aaliya meri bacchi... valekum aslam...
she kissed on aaliya's forehead... zain just smiled...
principal: hayy... itne dino se tumhe nhi dekha...
just then she spotted zain...
principal: (to zain) aslam valekum...
zain: valekum aslam...
principal: aap wohi hai na jinse meine aaj subah baat ki thi...
zain nodded...
principal: aur aaliya meine suna hai ki tum 8:30 baje tak so rhi thi... bad habit...
aaliya hid her face in embarassment...
principal: chalo mere saath stage pe chalo...
aaliya: par kyun?
prinicipal: arre tum chalo toh sahi...
aaliya: ok...

AT THE STAGE...
principal: excuse me ladies and gentlemen... this is aaliya ghulam haider... oh my apologies... aaliya zain abdullah...
a smile lit up aaliya face as she saw zain smiling... he winked at he
r😉... she blushed...
principal: she topped the college for 5 continuous years... so don't you people think she deserves a huge round of applause?
everyone clapped... including zain... aaliya blushed...
principal: she won all the debate competitions... excelled in kathak... and then won us the intercollege dancing competition... another huge round of applause children...
everyone clapped... again... she blushed again...
principal: thank you...
they both walked down the stage...

30 MINUTES LATER...
zain: mei bahaut bore ho rha hoon...
aaliya: zain humein yaha aaye huye 1 ghanta bhi nhi hua hai... aur tumne bore hona bhi shuru kr diya? kitkit...
zain: mei yeh keh rha tha ki-
aaliya: GUNJAN!
zain: hain?
he saw aaliya run towards her friend gunjan... he had never seen her this happy... they hugged each other... and started with tum kesi ho? itne saalo baad? shaadi ho gyi? gunjan spotted zain and smiled... he smiled back... gunjan whispered to aaliya "woh kaun hai?"... aaliya looked towards zain and took gunjan's hand and pulled her to zain...
aaliya: zain-gunjan... gunjan-zain...
zain: hi...
gunjan: hi...
aaliya: oyye tera pati kaha hai?
samrat: i am here...
samrat walked up to gunjan and kept his hand on her shoulder... but there was someone who was surprised to see samrat.. and that would be zain abdullah...
zain: SAMRAT?
samrat: ZAIN?
they both hugged each other... aaliya and gunjan got confused but yet smiled...
zain: tu yaha?
samrat: haan gunjan ke saath aaya hoon... tu?
zain: mei aaliya ke saath... what a coincidence...
samrat: really... i can't believe it...
they both saw aaliya and gunjan looking towards them... with a confused expression...
aaliya: tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho?
zain: of course... samrat mere london mei best buddy tha...
aaliya's mouth fall open...
zain: itna kyun shock ho rhi ho mamu ki bhanji?
samrat: mamu ki bhanji? whats that?
zain: kuch nhi yeh mere dad ki bhanji hai...
samrat and gunjan burst out into laugh...
samrat: accha yeh bta osman uncle aur surraiya aunti kese hai?
zain: theek hai...
aaliya: haan gunjan mei toh puchna hi bhul gyi... nupur kesi hai? aur mayank?
gunjan: dono theek hai aaliya... tumhare ammi abbu kese hai?
aaliya: bilkul theek hai...
samrat: gunjan zara aana toh...
gunjan: (to aaliya) mei abhi aayi...
she walked away with samrat... zain neared aaliya...
zain: kya hua mkb?
aaliya: tum mujhe mkb bulana band kroge?
zain: nahi...
he placed his hand around her waist...
aaliya: kya kr rhe ho zain abdullah...
zain: apni wife pe chance maar rha hoon...
she got out of zain's grip and ran away to her other friends...
zain: mamu ki bhanji...

THE END...
HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT...
PLS COMMENT AND LIKE PEOPLE...
HAVEN'T RECEIVED MUCH OF COMMENTS LATELY...
PLS COMMENT PEOPLE...
AND SUGGEST ME ABOUT THE NEXT PART...
DO LEAVE UR COMMENTS N LIKES...
THANK YOU SOO MUCH...😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
wow lovely update
it was very beautifully written
loved it
zaya and samjun meeting was fab
continue soon

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