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Anaya Ali

@khisher

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

u wrote it beautifully
well managed 👏

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Neha

@Neha07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

A beautiful piece of writing that made me speechless.Loved it to the core.Please give us an opportunity to read more from you.

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: kushi9999
if u are a guy... iam ready 2 marry you.😉
it was splendid and beautifully written inner self.

Lmao, sadly I am not a guy. Ahahahahaha.

But there are guys out there that are all sappy and cuteee ;)

It's usually the really shy ones or the ones that pretend to be tough!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

OMG this made my weekend joyous.

This is the sweetest and loveliest one shot i have read on this forum today.

I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!!

love the way you penned down every emotion Zain went through when he started falling in love with Aliya.

Can we have Aliya POV too? Preety please. You write wonderfully.

The meteor shower scene was fabolous and the kiss, it end the night perfectly. Love that scene.

Aliya is so sweet and lovely and they both deserve each other.

Their kids were adorable. Laughed out loud on reading rehan first word. zaya is her daddy princess.

I love it that even after a long time their relationship is as lovely and full of love as it was.

Love the ending.

Wonderful one shot.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

AHHH IT'S ANJALI AND SHE IS WRITING AGAIN! Where did you disappear to?

I love Beintehaa, omg, but I havent watched it for a while BUT THIS STORY IS SO CUTE. You are so talented man! I love this, you managed to tell a story people take chapters and chapters to tell in like one post, can you stop.

PLEASE TELL ME YOU WATCH RANGRASIYA AND ARE GOING TO WRITE FOR IT TOO? PLEASE?

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Gulafsa Saiyed

@BlossomingRose

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Woww, this is just...AMAZING! I am speechless! 👏
Well written, loved it! ❤️

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Oh my god, anjali... you here? It has been days since i had read anything of yours.. and as usual, it has been a treat.. it is so wonderful.. it was as if my heart melted.. keep writing :-)

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kmh2lover
AHHH IT'S ANJALI AND SHE IS WRITING AGAIN! Where did you disappear to?
I love Beintehaa, omg, but I havent watched it for a while BUT THIS STORY IS SO CUTE. You are so talented man! I love this, you managed to tell a story people take chapters and chapters to tell in like one post, can you stop.

PLEASE TELL ME YOU WATCH RANGRASIYA AND ARE GOING TO WRITE FOR IT TOO? PLEASE?

HEYYY GIRL HEYYY! Lmao, I was drowning in a sea of work? OMG, watch it again! I forward all of Bak-Bak's crap but Zain and Aaliya are in loveee! Aw thank youuu!

I actually don't watch Rangrasiya but my mom does so I kinda follow of it. Apparently the guy is mellowing out a bit? He manhandles Sanaya way too much for my liking but that was ages ago! Maybe I'll give it a try if I have time! :)

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
Oh my god, anjali... you here? It has been days since i had read anything of yours.. and as usual, it has been a treat.. it is so wonderful.. it was as if my heart melted.. keep writing :-)

HEYYY! It is meee! I see you've moved from the QH forum! Aw THANK YOU BBY! <3

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: astonm

HEYYY GIRL HEYYY! Lmao, I was drowning in a sea of work? OMG, watch it again! I forward all of Bak-Bak's crap but Zain and Aaliya are in loveee! Aw thank youuu!

I actually don't watch Rangrasiya but my mom does so I kinda follow of it. Apparently the guy is mellowing out a bit? He manhandles Sanaya way too much for my liking but that was ages ago! Maybe I'll give it a try if I have time! :)

I did, I have been watching all day today lol. Zaya are so cute! WATCH RANGRASIYA. It's so good, he was like that in the beginning but he is falling in love with her now (:

I just re-read this OS again, it makes a lot more sense after catchng up ahahaha