ZAYA OS: JEALOUSY???

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ZAYA OS: JEALOUSY
zain was hardly being home... he was always out with his friends... sometimes was too busy in the office... but aaliya didnt mind as well she had found a new friend ankit... ankit was not new as a matter of fact... he was aaliya's friend in college... not boyfriend... aaliya used to be a very shy girl with only one friend... but ankit wanted more with aaliya... he wanted to marry her after college... but before that could happen and he could actually propose his love... aaliya's wedding got fixed with zeeshan... and all the hustle and bustle... but ankit didnt get married... he recently had come to mumbai from bhopal to meet his other friend... he had no idea that aaliya had been married in mumbai... accidently they just bumped into each other at a mall and then started their usual convo.. like how you are? but obviously starting from what are you doing here... they both loved to see each other... but most importantly ankit did...

AT BARKAT VILLA...
zain had come home and so did aaliya... aaliya had gotten a bit late as later she had gone to have a coffee with her long-lost friend... by the time aaliya was back zain was fuming with anger... she stepped into the room... zain blasted upon her... he started asking all kinds of questions... most because of worry and others because of ego... aaliya was trying to make zain calm down by keeping her hands on his shoulder..
zain: tum itna late kyun ho gyi thi? pta hai tumhe mujhe kitni tension ho gyi thi? 11:30 baje bhi koi aata hai kya?
aaliya: kyun kitkit tumhe tension kyun ho rhi thi?
zain: kyun mujhe tension nhi ho skti? ab tum seedhe seedhe batao... kahan thi tum?
aaliya understood that he was a bit jealous... he may have thought she was with a boy... which she probably was... so to tease him a bit more she went towards the dressing table... trying to look like its no big deal...
aaliya: mei ankit ke saath thi...
zain got angry... so he was right... she was with a boy... but who the hell is this ankit? he got jealous obviously... he walked up to her and stood behind her... trying not to show he was jealous... he tried to play cool...
zain: ye... ankit kon hai mkb?
aaliya knew by now that he was jealous...
aaliya: woh mera college ka boyfriend...
zain was shocked... she has a boyfriend...
dikhne mei toh badi seedhi si lgti hai... he thought..
zain: tumhara boyfriend (he said raising an eyebrow... then started to laugh)...
aaliya: haan... toh mera bf nhi ho skta? (she said turning around)..
zain: nhi ho toh skta hai... par itni ghatiya choice kisiki ho bhi skti hai kya? (he said again starting to laugh)...
aaliya: tumhe mei buri choice lgti hoon... theek hai mei ja rhi hoon phir...
zain knew that she got angry... he grabbed her hand and turned it around her waist...
zain: lekin tumhara shohar bhi toh hai na...
aaliya: ohhh... tum jealous ho isliye esi baate kr rhe ho?
zain: nhi mei kyun jealous hongu? meri toh biwi hai... uski hogi gf... like i care...
he said as he grabbed her closer... aaliya stuggled to get out of his hold but failed... he was too strong for her... it was neither like she wanted to get out of his hold... she liked being so close to him...
zain: toh ye tumhara ankit mumbai mei kya kar rha hai...
aaliya: apne pyaar ka peecha...
zain: ohh really...
then she nodded... he started tickling her... tickling so hard that pearls of laughter escaped her eyes...
aaliya: zain... zain pls mat karo... pls zain.. uhh.. stop...
she tried to speak...
zain: nt until you say you love me...
aaliya: no way zain abdullah..
zain: okay then...
he started tickling her more harder...
aaliya: accha ok... uhh... i love you kitkit...
zain stopped tickling... but was yet shocked...
zain: hey did you just say ankit?
aaliya burst out into laughter... later she saw him leaving... she grabbed his hand pulled him back... and put her hands on his either shoulder...
aaliya: no zain aaliya haider... i didnt say ankit... i said kitkit...
zain was shocked..
zain: zain ghulam haider?
aaliya: haan... like i changed my name from aaliya ghulam haider to aaliya zain abdullah... i changed yours as well from zain osman abdullah to zain aaliya haider...
zain let out a smile...
zain: wah... wah mkb... bda dimag aa gya hai tumme...
aaliya: woh toh hai..
zain: so zain aaliya haider... todha odd sound nhi kr rha...
after thinking for a while... they burst into laughter... then after a while of laughing... they started smiling and hugged each other... this was their life...

TO BE CONTINUED...
THANKS FOR READING...
NO PM'S FOR THIS...
NEXT PART WILL BE UP BY TONIGHT OR TOMMOROW..
THANKS...



INDEX: (srry the links are not clickable)
PART-1: ABOVE..
PART-2:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4025765&TPN=2
PART-3:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4025765&TPN=3

MY ZAYA WORKS INDEX:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4030357
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww such a cute aoS loved it.do continue😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part.jealous zain is teart to watch.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely adorable! Great writing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zain Aaliya Haider?! As in seriously?
ROFL.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HarshIkalicious

Zain Aaliya Haider?! As in seriously?

ROFL.


yeah the idea just popped into my head😛
but i also like it...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANK YOU SOO SOO MUCH FOR YOUR REPLIES...
HERE'S PART 2...
HOPE YOU LIKE IT..
PART-2
zain and aaliya were sleeping... suddenly the sunlight entered the room... it was morning... they tried to close the light but couldnt... then woke up at the same time...
zain: good morning mkb...(he said rubbing his eyes..)
aaliya: morning kitkit... (she said giving him a hug)
zain: bahaut laate maari kal raat ko tumne...
aaliya: haan haan... jaise tum toh bilkul chup chap soye rahe... puri raat kharathe maar rhe the... u didnt let me sleep properly...
zain: mkb... tumhe pta nhi hoga lekin kharathe tum bhi marti ho...
aaliya: shut up... mei kharathe nhi maarti... ab chalo otherwise we will be late...
zain: hm... yeh zaalim zindagi...
aaliya: chalo... zain aaliya haider..
zain: sure aaliya zain abdullah...
they both laughed and while zain went to the washroom... aaliya gathered his clothes...

BREAKFAST TABLE...
zain was already down but aaliya didnt come as she was getting dressed...
osman: arre zain bete... aaliya kahan hai...?
zain: dad... woh apna beauty bath le rhi hai...(he said with a giggle)...
osman: beauty bath...? arre dekho aa gyi...
aaliya stepped in wearing a orange suit... zain saw aaliya and smiled...
aaliya: aslam valekum mamu..
osman: valekum aslam aaliya...
aaliya: aslam valekum maami..
surraiya: valekum aslam aaliya..
aaliya came and sat beside zain... zain gave a smirk...
osman: accha bahi... chalo hum chalte hai surraiya begum...
surraiya: ji..
osman: zain tumne mere saath chalna hai ya baad mei aaoge?
zain: nahi dad mei aapke saath aa rha hoon...
zain turned to aaliya...
zain: bye...
aaliya: bye...

EVENING...
aaliya went to the grocery store to get some vegetables and fruits... coincidentally ankit had also came to the same grocery store.. there they again.. bumped... into each other...
ankit: hey... phirse same jagah... tum yaha kya kar rhi ho?
aaliya: tumhara peecha kr rhi hoon i guess..
ankit: aah.. at last...
aaliya: shut up... aaj zain ki favourite sabzi banani hai... par ghar pe kuch sabziyan nhi thi isliye mei yaha aa gyi..
ankit: zain... woh kon hai?
aaliya: mera shohar...
ankit: tumhari shaadi toh zeeshan se teh huyi thi na?
aaliya felt sad...
aaliya: haan huyi toh thi par... par meri nikaah zain se ho gaya... long story...
ankit: indeed...
aaliya: waise tum yaha kya kar rhe ho?
ankit: oh mei toh bas ese hi aaya tha.. apne dost ke ghar aaya tha.. socha kuch khane pine ke liye le jaoon..
aaliya: ohh... thts nice..
ankit: so... aaliya do you mind if i ask something?
aaliya: no not at all pucho na..
ankit: mujhe toh laga that ki tum zeeshan se pyaar krne lagi ho... what happened?
aaliya: nhi ankit... mei zain se zyaada pyaar krti hoon... hala ki humein ye nikaah ke 2 mahine baad pta chala hai... allah ne apni ladli ko apna uska pyaar de diya..
ankit: matlab?
aaliya: matlab... zain osman mamu ka beta hai...
ankit: ohh.. matlab ye tumhare wohi cousin hai jiski tum baat krti thi... wohi na jo tumhare baalo mei chewing gum phasa deta tha aur tum bahaut gussa ho jaati thi.. uski hi baje se tumhare baal katthe the.. u love him now?
aaliya: haan..(she said blushing)
ankit: chalo i think i should go... bye... (he felt angry..)
aaliya: ya bye ankita..
ankita: dont call me ankita!! (he said loosing his cool...)
aaliya giggled...

1 HOUR LATER...
aaliya was done with shopping and was at the billing counter when she saw someone outside the store... she went a little closer and saw that... it was zain... aww... he had come to pick her up? thts soo sweet... she thought... she saw zain waving towards her signaling her to hurry up... aaliya signalled him to wait for 2 seconds and turned back... a smile with blush ran up to her face... she quickly grabbed the bags and stepped out of the store...
zain: hi...
aaliya: hey...
zain then went to take the bags from aaliya's hands and then placed them at the back seat... then himself opened the front door like a gentleman and signalled her to get in with his hand... aaliya got in with a smile... he closed the door after her... and then came and sat on the driver's seat..
zain: waise tumhe itna time kyun lag gya...
aaliya: woh... (a thought ran up her mind) mei ankit ke saath thi...
zain got jealous..
zain: ankit.. tumhara wohi cheap sa friend?
aaliya: hey usse cheap mat bolo... he's soo sweet... aur especially woh hug...
she said with a dreamy sight to make him more jealous... and he did indeed...
zain: hug? (he said as he gulped)
he imagined him hugging her... although he didnt knew who he was... but he remembered that aaliya had once introduced him a party... he turned red in anger...
zain: uski himmat kese hui meri wife ko hug krne ki?
aaliya: aaww.. my shohar is jealous?
zain: pooh! what nonsense... jealous and me? no way...
aaliya: oh really then why are you angry?
zain: haan toh kyun na hoon mei jealous? usne meri wife ko hug...
before he could complete aaliya hugged him sideways...
aaliya: zain tumna ghusse mei bilkul tamatar jese lal ho jaate...
zain: accha?
aaliya: waise bhi meine ankit ko hug nhi kiya... i was kidding...
zain fumed with anger...
zain: yeh sab ek mazak tha?
aaliya: haan... tumhe kya laga... mei apne shohar ke allava kisiko mujhe hug krne nhi dungi...
zain smiled... aaliya hugged his arm.. together they reached barkat villa..

TO BE CONTINUED...
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THEY MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE MORE..
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Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first one to cmnt :) loving the angry wala zain 👍🏼 nice story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one shot
Love jealous Zain
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Freaking Amazing OS Tanya Di!Pls continue soon & pm Me!

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