ZaYa OS: KitKit Redefined. [16+]

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

lovely amazing
loved the all kitkit levels..

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow it was just awesome, sugar cube, hot

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iansomer

@iansomer

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

such a cute romantic os.i loved it. though i know its too soon to happen in the serial yet but i wish it did. but no worries i got to read ur awesome piece of work.thankyou.please pm me.

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Uditi

@-FreeSpirit-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing OS😳

Loved kit kit redefined 😆 And u wrote it really nicely

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Krushi

@mayur-arti.4eva

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Amazing one😳

Love your title 😆

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wonderfully written OS...though it had mature content, you captured the essence of Zaya nokh jhokh perfectly...

and eve after everything, you kept the zain character intact with this line..

Pyaar karta isska ye matlab nai hai ki naukar bana dogi!"

very well written...👏

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jazmeen
It was amazing lol
Kitkut redefined I would laugh now everyrimw I will hear them saying kitkit

Thank You❤️

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sweta...
What an Os truly romantic, cute, funny amazing :) I loved how zain was waiting for aliya to confess and how he looked after aliya while she was crying was such a cute moment... The love confession was sooo sweet and simple really cute :) the scenes where Barkat takes a secret photo was hilarious and scene with aayat embarrassing lol :) nice Os :)

Thank You❤️ love your detailed comment😳

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Mishika123
OMG ! So hot n romantic one ! ☺️
Though I'm 13 , but still I read the OS ! 😆
Sorry kya karu ! I can't stop myself from reading it ! 😳
U write so well plz write more on Zaya ! 🤗
I really love your writings now ! 👍🏼

Thank You❤️ 13?😆 Koi nai details mein nai gai😆