Stupidity - ZaYa OS (On the current Pregnancy Track)

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Maneesha Reddy

@Maneesha_Shanak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow superb...Loved it!!

Finally baccha paida karne ki soch rahe hai dunno 😆 😆

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Freaking Amazing OS Jyo!Thanks for pm!& thank U for sending Me a friend request!Pls do write more OS's on Zaya & pm Me!

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

OH MY GOD! Jyo🤗 That was cuteness overload, alright! I was smiling like an idiot the whole time. It's super duper cute. Zain saying besharam Zain ne kiya hoga🤣 His stupidity made me laugh in a cute way!😆 I like the way you played it Jyo. It was adorable and their romance was HOT with capital H! That neck kiss!☺️ I like the nice touch you added therein the end with her watching him getting dressed and then taking her hand walking to the car while smiles adorned on both their faces. Super cute Jyo. You're such an amazing writer. LOVED IT!<333

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vishruta

@vishruta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Adorable
Is what thsi os was
Wow
Zain is... Dumb...
He took commerce in college
He was simply lost in front of the family
Hillarious
Good stuff
Keep it up will u
Simply loved it

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Fantastic and very cute one shot.

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

just awesome it was... So loved phattoo Zain's stupidity, which later modified the same phattoo but after merged with besharam one... He is so jealous of his own alter ego... Loved the romance, loved it that Aaliya first kissed him... and he kissed her neck ☺️ but Aaliya ko to ulti aa gayi 🤣 aww Zain saying is he so bad that he made her vomit... keep writing more n do pm me... Thanks for the pm though