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Neha

@Neha07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Heyya Jyo!!Nice build-up of the story. Beautifully written. The part which I liked in part3 is that evryone knows that now both are gonna ignore each other😃😆. What is Zain's mystery?My only complaint is why was this update so short??? abhi to shuru hua tha bbhi khatam bhi ho gaya!!!. I know it takes a lot of time to write even a small chappy.Looking forward2 d nxt update.Update soon!!

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Fatima

@.infinite.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

YOUR SUSPENCE

WILL BE THE END OF ME🤬 jk😆

The beach scene got me all excited, i was like oh sugars, he's gonna tell her what happen to him but no🥺 my achy breaky heart.

LOVING the build up though!

oh why, why are they ignoring eachother, there goes my achy breaky heart again🥺

anyways, loved each and every bit of it <333

update soon <3333

PS. LOLs at Zain for getting his butt wet🤣

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Wow! Your story still remains a mystery and I'm not just liking it but loving it 😉 All writers are just so amazing by making Zain's character so damn amazing!! 😛 I love him in very story lol... Well the way you sum up their emotions and feelings is just fantastic !! Your words are always upto the mark !! And now you know what to do whenever you update the next part, right? 😛 Still reminding you, do PM me 😉 I'm too lazy for search for new updates that's why lol ! I'm waiting eagerly for the next part 😃

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

amazing update.now Aliya made test Zain his own medicin.feel bad to see them like that but its help to make them realise their feeling.can't wait for next part.update soon.

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

oh god this was sooo good(ok! disclaimer-i m not promoting KFC😉)

it was just so adorable to read Zain getting so restless about the fact that his aliya is ignoring him!

as i already said, n will say again... ur updates r making me fall in love with zain over n over n over n over again...

lovely one...

will be waiting for ur next update...

thanq for the pm

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* Unnati *

@* Unnati *

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Lovely update Jyo! Thank you, for the PM. kitna ignore maarte hai, dono ek doosre ko!🤣

I liked how you ended it, leaving us in a cliffhanger. Aaliya seriously is quite affected by Zain & happy Zain notices the same & responds to her, keeping that on mind.

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Yuks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Nice update. I really like the pace of your fic.

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Bas itna sa? Pehle zain was ignoring aliyah, now aliyah ignored zain and he was trying to pacify her. ANd now it seems both will ignore each other. Thanks alot Fahad. Love the fact that everyone knows what's up.
But what happened to Zain in the first instance. Why was he like that, so much so that his parents don't want to talk about it. Ufff! I so wanna know.

Awww! And he gifts her the complete season of Friends. Just perfect.
Can't wait for the next update. And thanks again for the PM/