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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
cute and romantic update.zain realise that he care for aliya,but still yet to realise that it is love.i love the kitchen scene.i wish we get same scene in show.keep writing more on zaya.

Thank you! :) Well, we did get other scenes jahan Zain ne to Surraiya ki puri chop kar di 😆 So glad you like it!

Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN
Thats cute n romantic! Very nyc! Keep writing 😳

Originally posted by: -Spriha-
That was sooo beautiful...!!
Really amazingly written...loved their cute nok-jhok and romance as well...!!👍🏼

Thank you guys! 🤗

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: shafy_MN
superb..

Originally posted by: daisydee425
lovely

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: divikash
how cute,sorry oly read it rite now
u sure are stirring lots of feelings through the story

love it on whole

Aww that's okay. At least you read it! :D Thanks a lot!!! 🤗

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: nancy97
Lovely update the bext part soin

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Beautiful :) Loved It.. Try to continue please!

Thanks guys! Unfortunately this is all that I am writing for this particular story. Maybe I'll write more later? :)

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
Beautifulll <3
Aliyas accpetance n Zains confusion👏

Special mention to Mommy dearest getting a reality check😆 kya karu sadist hu.. in sab me mazaa ata hai😈

Thank youu! :) Ahahaha, we all are sadist in that case 🤣 Mommy dearest got a reality check in the freaking show too, ah so good! :D Thanks again :)

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: preity_d
Jyo read the two parts in one go. U r a very good writer. You have some awesome sense of humour when writing dialogues...
In the first part, u wrote Zain saying, "tumhare pair{leg) pakad ke bula ne to raha" ha ha so quirky. loved it...

In the second part "the tap's broken" OMG hilarious... 😆

loved how Zain was being serious, he stood up in front of Suraiya for Aliya, appreciate it. So in one sentence loved it... Do come up with many write ups soon and plz PM me

Thank you so much Preity. This means a lot to me since I haven't even written much in the past year 😆 So glad you liked the dialogues. I definitely will PM you as and when I do write more. Thanks again 😳

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: zillionaire
very nice! :)

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
Wow! That was so cute! Just loved it! 😊

Originally posted by: fijiana
this was in the words of Shilpa shetty "super se upar " really enjoyed reading it hope you write some more on ZaYa

Ahh thank you so much guys! Means a lot to me 🤗

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -Ammie-
the second part yesss!🤪
ahaha, i actually read it last night but i was dozing off so i decided to come back and comment! *so that my comment could make a little sense*🤣
anyhow coming to the update! It was F L A W L E S S!
so cute! you have written it down so well!
the best thing about it is that its so subtle, like i can totally imagine this on Zaya!
This has been a truly enjoyable read Jyo, i'm looking forward to more from you my love 🤗

LOLLL Ammie, you crack me up! 😆 Hope you slept well :) Thanks a lot. I was actually going to do all of the dialogues in english and then I was like, "Nahhh, Zaya need to be quirky and stuff, so angreji nahi chalegi" 😆 But thank youuu and I shall hopefully write more soon 😳

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Sruuu.
No how is this so perfect. How. 😭
Right from the kitchen scene, to both of them snuggling under the covers. Oh good heavens, I would like to see this right now.
Cuteness was just oozing from every bit.
And the way Zain acted towards the end, awww you little cutiepatootie. ☺️

I LOVE YOUUU JYOOO 😆

Please write more for me okay? 😳

Shruuu! This is not perfect. What you write is perfect gurl! :D But I am so glad you liked this and thought it was cute. Zaya are cuteee so yeah [if you haven't noticed then I am high atm 😆]

LOVE YOU TOOO! <3 And hopefully I'll get time to write more :)

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Mariaa.RD
And this was again one BRILLIANT SHOT BB 🤗you're gonna get me addicted :P !
Part 3 Please 😳 😎 You're such a BEAUTIFULL WRITER ohh & That needs to happen :DDD !

ZAYA DREAMLAND ❤️ LY INFINITYYY <3

ALFKSHCLIEARUGV THANKS BB! <3 SOOO Glad you like it. Sadly, no part 3 :( I don't have anything else in mind for this particular OS but who knows, I might just write more later when I get the time to :D LOVE YOU TOO <333

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Tanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Wow!! I just loved this story...Jo TV mein dekhne nahi milta voh yaha toh mile :P

Now continue jaldi naa! Eagerly waiting fdor some more cute romance..one thing though..no more crying Aliya :P Ab thoda cute n hot romance ho jaaye xP

Chal continue ASAP! Very intriguing plot :)