A ZaYa OS : Just a Kiss

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The.Targaryen

@The.Targaryen

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: tareyforever333
Amazing and awesome os!!!
Zain tying the dori of Aliya's suit was hot and romantic!!
The way Zain respected her feelings was so cute!!
The classic fall was portrayed beautifully!!
Loved the kiss that ZaYa shared!!
It was hot, passionate, sexy, and romantic!!
Please write more works!!
Love,
Ash

Thanks Ash <3<3

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divikash

@divikash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

i really loved the os

pls yaar write more of such os

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Richa

@sarcastic_teen

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Res
likes aur comment se lagta h acha hoga
will comment after reading when I m in mood 😛
unres
a very short but lovely OS
Their kiss ☺️
"Could u please kiss me?" 🤣

Edited by sarcastic_teen - 11 years ago

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

"Could you please KISS me?"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

That was hilarious!! I would love it if the show incorporates this kind of a dialogue!! Aaliya would go tamatar red! 🤣

The transition from this super soft, shy wordings to this awkwardness and blush-worthy effect to this epic dialogue was amazing!
Even I missed a beat when they kissed. I was all smiley smiley 😆
It was much more than just the kiss!

😃
Don't go hiding behind the sofa for this! 😳

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Anaya Ali

@khisher

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

That was sooo romantic and soothing...reading it in this middle of night has made me go nuts

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The.Targaryen

@The.Targaryen

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: sarcastic_teen
comment updated 😆

Finally

You have two more stories to unres. 😆

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The.Targaryen

@The.Targaryen

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover
Amazing os
Best os on ZaYa
Plzzz keep writing

Shezu thank you :)

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The.Targaryen

@The.Targaryen

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: arshi.zoha
this was amazing !!
a humble request can u pls chnge it into a short story !! .. i mean this ws beautifulll pls cont. .. and PM me for sure .. if u really do this , i will be the happiest person on this earth if u really change it into a short story or a ff

I m sorry but this was supoposed to be an OS. Sorery.

I m glad you loved it.