As Your Wife : ZaYa OS

Awesome update

wow very nice well written..loved it to the core👏

really nice and emotional os.love the way u portray both zaya pov.keep writing more on zaya.

nice OS... beautifully written... liked the usman-zain scene... if only we got to see something like that onscreen... m missing those usman-zain scenes onscreen that we used to see..it seems the marriage has changed their relationship too...😔

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Amazing job! :)

I really wish this had happened!

Thank You, means a lot ! 🤗 I wasn't expecting u would unres so soon ! Had a big smile on ma face

You penned down her inner feelings beautifully when she was taken out and left in the open.

But that prayer part of it left me transfixed. Not being a Muslim myself, I found it serene and calming in the turmoil that was going on. It was hands down my favorite part of the OS. <3

Oh I am glad you managed to connect nevertheless :) I am a Muslim, So I wrote from my heart :) <3

And then Zain's part. WOW. It was amazing! It was something I want him to do.

I want him to face himself.

And also, to see his character now, the 'ruthless' Zain, as you put it.

Exactly, I want that to happen too ! 😳

The fight was intense and a very ZaYa thing to do.

It wasn't sugarcoated, nor was it a nok-jhok.

It was a hardcore fight, just like it is supposed to be. They needed to get it all out.

After all, one doesn't get married every day to the person they dislike.

I think of them as hard now in face off's, given the episodes. When Aliya is not looking, Zain is soft, I noticed 😳

Then came the Aliya-Osman scene.

I love this Maamu-Bhanji duo.

They are so sweet and caring <3

And this OS did them complete justice.

I want more of their scenes honestly ! 😳

The Osman outburst felt so real! :O

It was as if I was watching it.

Very-well written 👏

I remember him as Chand of PKYEK, and I tried to build on the mamu and best friend Osman is 😳

Fir the Dad-Son convo.

His disappointment regarding Zain and Zain feeling ashamed was amazing!

For him, his hero was disappointed and he didn't want that and all that frustration came out on Aliya.

For Zain, Dad comes first. ⭐️

'Happy now, Aren't you?' she began. 'I have never seen Mamu this upset; it's all because of you.'

I found this line so ironic. I don't know why but I always imagined Zain saying a line like this.

I wanted to show Aliya's concern for her Mamu and Best friend too, added he is the only true support atm. <3 Aliya Zain strongly feel for Osman :)

And then Zain's outburst.

I never understood in the show about Zain's hatred. I always thought it's because of the vaada so I tend to forget that he DOESN'T want to get married AT ALL.
Your OS did an amazing job of telling me!

Geez, Thanks ! :) I have a keeda for details ! 😆 I have been even noticing how at times there's a lot of orange light in the room, and then at times white which makes the room look beautiful :P

The ending line was perfect. :')

THANK YOU !! <3

Also, brilliant stuff!

Awaiting you works. :D

Means a lot ya ! 🤗 Love, ZJ 😳

Love,
Ananya :)

Originally posted by: rohini973794

too gud...continuee soon

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

really nice and emotional os.love the way u portray both zaya pov.keep writing more on zaya.

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

nice OS... beautifully written... liked the usman-zain scene... if only we got to see something like that onscreen... m missing those usman-zain scenes onscreen that we used to see..it seems the marriage has changed their relationship too...😔