LaakhAm OS Drenched In Rain.....

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was raining heavily outside n poonam was standing near her room window watching the beautiful rain fall...she was in deep thoughts remembering the moment when Laakhan pointed the gun at her it has been 3 days since she was ignoring Laakhan n when today he apologized her n ask for forgiveness she don't know what to do her heart and mind was divided n she was struggling between her heart and her mind 'how can he do that what if I died , does a simple sorry is enough ' finally she gave up and to make her mind and heart calm she came outside to fully drenched in rain , feeling the water droplets made her calm n for some moments to forget everything around...she was standing all alone in the garden area when she feels the the touch on her waist how can she forget his touch which make her shiver , make her forget everything ... holding her from behind and keeping his head on her shoulder he finally spoke... ' u still haven't forgiven me , I know what I did is beyond a mistake what I did was a sin but u can't even imagine poonam what I have gone thru ' ' n its simply impossible for me to tell u what I was feeling that time' finally poonam spoke 'i want to forget everything , I wanna cherish this moment , lets drained everything in rain' laakhan: thts what am saying lets start a fresh' Then just don't control urself' and Laakhan immediately caught hold of hair and lifting her head upward, devoured her lips to the full. kissing passionately, laakhan hand caressing her waist after the kiss he moved to her neck his teeth penetrating her delicate skin it was hard for her to resist the feeling later his kisses turned more wild...They kissed her like no tomorrow... and the rainfall was the perfect moment for them to heat up their emotions...sorry for another torture but was feeling bored to jo dimag me aya likh diya...sorry for the mistakes...

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naina-ana thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ashu lovely oskas CV ye padh lete kitna romantic hai☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ashu...babu itna keher mujhe mat daahaa...haiii can't stop imagining it ...LT and poonam drenched in rain and kissing passionately...please CVS give us something like this ...

ashu good work ...likhti jaa ...u r getting better ...and we r LT fans ...perfect in the most imperfect way..good work dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ashu..👏. Dobara torture mat bolna...kaash Laakham patch up aisa hota.
Agar bore hoke aisa likhti ho. Toh please bore hoti raho aur likhti raho...
Likhti toh tum acha ho ek suggestion hai thodi spaces use karo...ll look attractive aur padhne mein easy hoga...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🥳 🤗 greattt ashuu...isko torture nhi bolte torture jo cvs kar rhe hai voh hai...good writinggg...thnks for short n sweet update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blue-Pearl

Ashu..👏. Dobara torture mat bolna...kaash Laakham patch up aisa hota.

Agar bore hoke aisa likhti ho. Toh please bore hoti raho aur likhti raho...
Likhti toh tum acha ho ek suggestion hai thodi spaces use karo...ll look attractive aur padhne mein easy hoga...😊

thnxxx khushi dear it feels so good n khushi actually m typing frm mobile space deti par pata nhi kyu correctly nhi ata...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina-ana

Ashu lovely oskas CV ye padh lete kitna romantic hai☺️

thank u naina for liking it muaaah
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mifc

ashu...babu itna keher mujhe mat daahaa...haiii can't stop imagining it ...LT and poonam drenched in rain and kissing passionately...please CVS give us something like this ...

ashu good work ...likhti jaa ...u r getting better ...and we r LT fans ...perfect in the most imperfect way..good work dear

thnxx a ton mitu love to see u commented m happy u like...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavi.k

🥳 🤗 greattt ashuu...isko torture nhi bolte torture jo cvs kar rhe hai voh hai...good writinggg...thnks for short n sweet update..

thnxx bhavi nxt tym or acha likhne ki koshish karungi... n off course more romantic...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆Nice beta, keep it up

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