THE TWIST OF FATE- A LAAKHAM FANFICTON PART 3!! PAGE 3!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 1

red. all he could see was red. the white marble stairs of the thakur palace were stained with red. red liquid flowing down the stairs.
one look and anyone would assume it as blood...except that...it was blood.
poonam's blood.
it did not make any sense to laakhan though, it just did not.according to him, it was impossible.
laakhan thakur's wife was the joy of thakur family, well protected like a pearl.
how could anyone surpass that protection right under their nose and launch a deadly attack on her.
unless...anyone from the family...
laakhan went numb. the blood was flowing right from their room, where poonam was taking rest an hour ago...all alone in the house.
with shaky steps, mustering up whatever courage was left in him, climbed up the stairs, carefully so as not to step on the precious blood.
however, it was impossible. thick blood was continuously flowing.
he pushed open the door.
and collapsed on the floor, lips parted. he was shocked beyond life.
he felt as if someone was slicing his heart continuously with a sharp eged knife. he was bleeding inside, but no sound came from his mouth, not even a single drop of tear.
it was as if his brain had not registered the scene in front of him. a visual which would even shake the strongest heart made up of stone!
in front of laakan, was poonam's unconscious body, covered with her own blood. the floor was covered with her blood too!
it was as if time had stopped, he felt his life slipping away from him.various incidents flashed in his mind...time which he had spend with his beloved.
he had respected her and insulted her at the same time. although she was faultless.
loved her and frighted her at the same time. without her fault.
because 'laakhan thakur' was an image. he had to maintain it.
now, he realized that...without poonam, he was useless, incomplete, nonexistent.
he tried to wake her up, pestering her. but she gave no answer. she was like a lifeless body. like a doll which looked like an actual human.
his doze broke when the sounds of ambulance entered his ears.
a team od doctors arrived quickly along with phoolan thakur. there was a huge hullaboo in the house. doctors helping her up in the stretcher. the police arrived too...for the first time, investigating the attempt of murder.
it was all unrealistic to him...the family members started mourning which irked him, however he was silent.
he felt as if all his energy had drained out.
the doctors carefully shifted poonam inside the ambulance.
he was about to accompany her...although he could not.
someone jerked him out of the car.
guddi.
'you will stay away from her' guddi said to him softly. her voice was deadly cold, her eyes blazing with fire.
if looks could kill, he would be dead a thousand times.
he did not argue.
the ambulance went to its destination along with everyone.
he was left alone, no one bothered about him...according to the family members,he was the cause for her misfortune.
for the 1st time he wondered, weather they were true.
it started raining heavily.
along with the skies , his eyes were raining too.
he started crying like a baby, like a child who has lost his parents.
with great difficulty, he controlled himself.
anger flashed in his eyes.
he will find the culprit...and he will kill him with the same 'khanjar' with which poonam was attacked.
he will...

next update soon...
how was it?? reviews pls
lots of love!!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow!!goosebumps...please update soon.i hope poo ll b alright i dont want her to die for the sake of laakhan's redeemtion.awesome dear.waiting for next part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that line actually gave me goosebumps "loved her and frightened her at the same time" damn..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Freaking awsm 🤗 i enjoyed thoroughly...and waiting for next part.. Any precap?? 😆
Seriously all picture set in my mind according to ur story & it seems so awsm ...😳 hope she will survive & i said to my fenzz too that i wanna see Laakhan breakdown & laakhan in rain & lost ..i connect to this part ...waiting waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its god damn interesting & hell intriguingly amazing concept! Though, kinda distressful about Poonam's dead & waiting for Laakhan to realize his mistakes. But who killed her & this is a dark story of vengeance ? I guess may be & please do write some LaakhAm scenes as flashbacks too :)


Eagerly waiting to know how the story unfolds!


Bookmarked!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update update soon dear 😊& congrats lakhaam fans for first ff on laakham
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2

once poonam had asked laakhan,' do you ever get scared?'
'no' was his reply.
this was of course a blatant lie.

laakhan as a child was just like other children hailing from normal families. jolly, cheerful, innocent and full of funny pranks. he tried to make friends, quite unsuccessfully. parents were scared of the thakurs, and children were scared of their parents. they were taught like a parrot by their parents to stay away from the prodigy of the famous 'thakurs'!
cold stares and frightful looks was all what laakhan had received from his classmates.
thus, curiosity and ideas stayed hidden in him, suffocating him. overwhelming him.
this was the time he started turning into an introvert.
because being extrovert bore him no fruit. people were scared of him. sometimes they even ran away from him when he tried to approach them.
it was of no use.
the 'thakurs' were as expected unaware of his state. they were far busy counting guns and bullets.

then one fine a day, he received a ray of hope.
he was informed that when he will grow up, he will get married to poonam. the shy little angel like girl, who never used to talk to anyone except guddi.
he remembered once she had smiled meekly at him at diwali.
he liked it. it gave him a sense of importance.
when he asked about the meaning of wedding, his father replied,'she will become your companion for life'.
'like best friend?' he asked, eyes shining like stars.
'yes' he father replied.
wow! he thought, he never had any friend, and suddenly poonam will become his best friend.
he started jumping with joy and was about to meet poonam when his thoughts suddenly halted him.
'what if she runs away like other classmates do when i try to talk to them.' he feared,'i will again be alone...no i will not approach her...if i do she will definitely run away...she is too shy'.

siting on the front porch of the house, laakhan smiled remembering those innocent days of childhood. he wondered if he was right about not approaching her.
no, he was not right, he realized it now.
if he had talked to her as a friend in childhood, perhaps she would not be so afraid of him now. perhaps she could talk about her insecurities to him freely, without any hesitation.

perhaps he could be her best friend just like priyom.
speaking of priyom, where the hell was he? he was not even there when poonam was rushed to the hospital.
so much for being her best friend!!

this was all strange and mysterious. him...
he had to find out about it...
but first things first, he had to rush to the hospital.poonam's condition was critical, he had to be there for her...he could not leave her, his companion for life!
no matter what anyone said.

next update soon.
reviews pls
lots of love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update I really it lakhan's flashback part is really good
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Posted: 10 years ago
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O qow..jat lovwd part 2... Flashback scene was amazing.. Ohh gosh..i m really connecting it to main story..waiting for next part..what will happen in hospital... Amazing😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update! LaakhAm childhood flashbacks were cute as well as true. If he ever had approached towards her like a friend she wouldn't have never being so reluctant to him. Waiting for the next update anxiously! Let's see what happens in the hospital. Hope she will be out of from her critical condition :)


BTW, why do I feel that Priyom is kinda behind the attack on her?!


Update soon dear! :D

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