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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: hiralnehal

unres


Smooth. Bhery smooth..

As smooth as the brown liquid that Laakhanwa gulped down this throat.

Yeh jo isaqq ha nai.. bada shaukiyaa cheej hai.. kab kisko kya kar de...

totally totally loved the OS,

Two bullocks yoked together for life. Or may be not. Waise hi they are progressively walking on the path of breaking each other's hearts...sawaal wahi hai ki kaun pehel karen...

Have been thinking and thinking after reading your OS only to realize that if ever these two come together it is this silence which will bind them together.

I hope that Punmy finds her voice in Laakhan and he finally rests his head in her lap finding the elusive peace to his mind.. '

Ek secret batau: aap ki likhawat padh ne baad maine Vickysa ko bahot miss kiya... I PMed her asking her if she would like to travel to begusarai lekin koi jawab nahin aaya...

Separately, after seeing the E24 segment, I am a bit upset with the ill behavior of both Laakhan and Mithilesh. Ek ko gun nahin naa taaknaa chahiye thaa aur doosre ko lappad nahin naa maarna chahiye thaa.

I just wanted to hold Laakhan and phiraofy my hand in his hair and pacify him with Shaant Shaant...

PS: Apologies for a brief comment. Ideally res kar ke kuch dhaansu likhnaa chahiye thaa.. lekin itnaa hi kar payee aaj




Thank you for unresing Hiral-sa!

Yeh joh issq hai na, achche khaase insaan ko jaanwar kar de.

Pehel kya karni. Dil toh toote hue hi hai. Koi jodne ki koshish bhi nahi. Bas zindagi bematlab si kaat rahe hai.

Mai bhi Vicky jeeja ko miss kar rahi hu.. Where is she? Abhi kaun se forum pe dera daale hue hai?

Regarding the E24 segment, I have made peace with the fact that the Thakurs will never provide me any happiness waise bhi. So ummeed hi kya karni?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato


Catching up on epis. Samjha kar. Tera hi faida hai! 😉


unres-ed.

Epis ke baad, isse padh ke coherent reply dene mein bhi time laga naa!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_



I cannot really start an FF on these two as its too early, and also cuz I am working on an original fiction. But these sort of write ups have become necessary for me as I love this two and really don't want them to be misunderstood.

Thank you for loving my works already! Too kind you are!

fair enough, but do write an FF later on in the show, i would love to read it.
OMG i would love to real your original fiction, caus ei have hardly come across writer such as you whose writing style is captivating.
i think a reason for me to love this forum is caus ei get to read these write up of yours on eveyr laakhan scene, it truly makes my day

keep writing😃

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