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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Oh...that was a nice one...Kunal n Shamoi hav met...and seems they hav liked each other as well. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part...............kunal and shamoli met and they like each other too............now jai and bani are left....................cont soon.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

That moment Part 5






Rohit-Akshara,Jai-Bani and Kunal-Shamoli's wedding …
Rohit and Akshara are happy.Jai stares at Bani before tying the mangalsuthra.She gets nervous.His face seems to be rough with anger while tying the mangalsuthra.Her tears fall down.
Kunal smiles at Shamoli while tying the mangalsuthra.She is not at all cheerful.

They all enter their house.
Somebody tells Jigyasa:Your daughter in law Akshara is very beautiful.Your son is so lucky to have her.
J:Actually Akshara is lucky to get my son.Akshara is from a background where she can't dream of entering a rich family like our's.
Akshara who hears this feels sad.A middle aged lady and a young girl go near her.
The middleaged lady:Don't get upset Akshara.Be happy that you are with a good boy like Rohit.
Akshara smiles.
She:I'm Jigyasa's sister Veena.This is my daughter Mauli.
She smiles.

Their reception party…..

Rohit and Akshara are dancing.
Kunal goes near Shamoli:Shall we dance?
S:I'm sorry….
Kunal's face is dull:Why?
S:Ah!Ok…
He smiles.He holds her hand and dances.She feels uncomfortable.

Jai goes near Bani.She smiles.
J:I came here to tell you that I'm not interested to dance with you.
She feels sad.
Veena goes neat them:Jai..dance with Bani.
J:No…
V:I know that you are shy because of your age.But don't be shy.You are a newly wed guy.Dance…
J:Veena..
V:No excuse.
He dances with Bani.He is really irritated.

Akshara enters the bedroom.Rohit pours red petals on her.She is surprised:What is this Rohit?
R:Flower rain.I wanted to surprise you with flowers in a different way which no one ekse has done.
She smiles.She throws some petals on his face.He smiles.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
nice part...................
they all are married but only one jodi is happy..................rohit's mum is still rude............
cont soon...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part....so every1 is married....but none other than Rohit n Akshara r happy!! Anyways....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

That moment Part 6




Kunal goes near Shamoli:You know Shamoli..i did'nt know that you are my going to be wife when you were with me that night.But now when I think about it,I feel that I had fallen in love with you at that moment itself.
Shamoli feels uncomfortable standing close to Kunal.She moves away from him.
S:I want to sleep.Good night.
Kunal feels strange:Now itself?
S:I feel very tired after the ceremonies and the party.It's late night.
He smiles:Ok,carry on…
She pretens to be sleeping.

Jai enters the room and stares at Bani.
J:I feel like snatching your mangalsuthra.
Bani is shocked:What are you saying?
J:Jai Walia's mangalsuthra does'nt fit your neck.
He goes closer to her.She is nervous.She holds her mangalsuthra:Please don't do that.It's a wife's identity.
He laughs:That means your identity?Funny.Ok..let it be with you.You married me for my money.It's an expensive chain.Let it be with you.
B:Mangalsuthra is expensive.Not because its made of gold.Because it's given by the husband.
J:Funny girl..crazy…
He goes to sleep.

The next morning…
Bani goes to Jai with tea.Jai breaks the cup.She is shocked.
J:Don't try to be an ideal wife.I hate it.
Bani feels sad.Akshara overhears it and feels upset.

Puja time…Veena extends aarthi to everyone.She shows it to Akshara.She is not in this world.She is about to touch the fire.
Rohit:Akshara!
She takes her hand back.
A:Rohit!
R:Are you in this world?
Jigyasa:It's the honeymoon time.That's why.
Everyone laughs and leaves the room.Rohit is shocked to see tears in her eyes.
R:What happened suddenly?Who hurt you?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ohh....so its not very pleasant of course....lets c if Rohit n Akshara can do anything!! Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice fic just read it. cont
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Posted: 15 years ago
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jai is too rude and rohit and akshara do something...............cont soon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

That moment Part 7


Akshara:Rohit….my sister sacrificed her life for me.She hid her pain to see my wedding.
R:What are you saying?
A:Bani is not happy with Mr.Walia.
R:What?
A:I don't know if Shamoli's condition is also the same.
She weeps.Rohit is upset.

Bani gives the lunch box to Jai:Lunch..
J:No need.I will order from outside.
B:I cooked specially for you.
J:Really?
She smiles.
J:Then 100% sure..i won't have it.
He leaves the room.Bani keeps the lunch box in his bag.Jai comes back and takes the bag.

Jai is in the office.He calls his staff and shouts at him:Where is the lunch?
He:I'm sorry Sir.The hotel near by is closed.We will buy food from another hotel.
J:But no other hotel is in this location.All other hotels are far.Oh!
He:We will call and tell them to deliver.
He goes.
Jai opens the bag and is surprised to see the lunch box.
J:That stupid girl kept it inside my bag.How dare she?
Suddenly he realizes how hungry he is.So he opens it and tastes it.Then he eats it.

Jai goes home.He stares at Bani.Bani is scared.She thinks:Is it because I kept the lunch box inside his bag?
J:I had your lunch.It was nice.Very tasty food.
She is surprised.she smiles.
J:Tomorrow onwards I will have the lunch prepared by you.I'm fed up of hotel food.
She smiles.Rohit and Akshara see it and they smile.
Rohit tells her:Jai uncle is good at heart.Her anger is only a pretence.
Rohit goes to Akshara with bangles.
A:Wow!
R:Wear it.I want to see that.
She wears it.He smiles:Beautiful?
A:Really?
R:Yes,the bangles are beautiful.That's why I bought it.If I was a girl I would have worn it.since I can't wear it..i thought.. let you wear it.
A:What?
Rohit laughs:You are very beautiful now Akshara…these bangles look good on you.
She smiles:Bani loves bangles..
Jai overhears it.
A:Ok…I'm going..
R:So fast?
A:Ya…have work in the kitchen.Bye….

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