Rudhita OS : You Bleed So We Exist - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Heyy.. This is such a special piece!! While the promo in itself has left me filled with intense anticipation, I think I have been filled with joy at the writings and discussion everyone is doing about menstruation and different variations of the birds and the bees. Coz even though this is set a century before, a lot of the things we deal with in our show are still relevant today. And the fact that we are all talking about it, thinking about it, reflecting, that in itself is a testament to the impact of our show. Don't mind me. I just feel filled with something like a fraction of ARC's krantigiri today.😆 Coming to your writing, I adored the creation story so much. And I definitely enjoyed Ani's chillam chillayi. I am missing it on the show! And only when it's gone do I remember the joy I got from him doing it at all the people standing in his way. And he for sure needs to bring it back for Bon in this scenario. Also, like the bittersweet thing in the talk is while it could have gone one way with Ani playing the sorta parental role in explaining what it all means, society dictates the backdrop of him being her husband and the wrong expectations that are thus thrust upon them. This whole thing is such a big conundrum in itself and I have so many strong emotions spilling over at the innate injustice that Bon will invariably have to face. I mean I know it's a fictional show at the end of the day but we have seen all these developmental milestones of Bon that this feels very close to my heart! I guess the fact that she has Ani who once he figures out a calm well thought plan on how to explain everything and gets over the initial hitch, will treat her like a princess during those times, not that he doesn't do that anyway. I think for the kids who don't get taught this the right way, what happens is a sort of alienation from your own body instead of treating it as a miracle of life. I think when I first learned about all of this and someone told me that it's a gift bestowed on me, I was a total brat and said either I want to return this gift or pass it onto a boy! When I calmed down, I told my Mom that if this is something only girls can do and if they owe their very own existence to us, then I want that the next time I get it, I want all the boys in my school to worship the ground I walk on and be like Dhanya ho aapka! Lol. 🤣And while I have come a long way since that early teen angst, it's nice to see and read all of these reminders of those times. Kudos to your pluck for writing this, thank you and apologies for the rant! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

RiMi!!!🤗🤗 I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS!!! ❤️

Kia likha hai yar. 👏👍🏼 Brilliant depiction of both their reactions, staying true to their characters, and the explanation was just WOW!!!👏👍🏼

Seriously man!!! Buht acha likkha tumne❤️

The words were awesome... you kept everything decent, and yet you were able to explain the whole matter with absolute clarity and much needed sensitivity.

I have also written on this topic, but mine was bakwas in comparison to yours. 😳 Mujhe itna accha laga hai tumhara.

Lastly, thank you so much buddy for coming up with brilliant write ups and blessing our eyes with them. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Rimi🤗

Please check my edited post 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: nims23

Rimi🤗❤️

I don’t know how to express my love for you ❤️🤗🤗

Nima you took time to write such a nice review for my OS, it is enough for me ❤️🤗


Why were you nervous? We readers should be nervous after reading this awesome piece work thinking how to review it !!


Awww Nima ❤️


I am speechless dear.. not able to find words which can describe what I am feeling after reading this wonderfully penned down piece of work👏👏👏


Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 🤗❤️


Truly speaking.. this is the same ARC I want to see in the most awaited menstrual track of our show!! Dam*.. .You have raised my expectations for the upcoming track!! If it would turned out a disasterous track then it’s your fault for writing this amazing os and raising our expectation bar 😆🤪


I know sab mujhe peetenge if Makers do anything stupid now 🤣 I'll beat my own self for writing this then 🤣


Ani and his restlessness of thinking about Bon!! He seemed very nervous about this whole thing !! He wanted to fight for Bon’s rights but he himself is new to all these things and was trying to find a way to help Bon .. this is why ARC is a different personality.. he gets whatever he wants .. even if he has to do all the chillam chillayi 😆


Yes that's correct. As per his character he is just a 22 year old boy, suddenly facing such a situation would be a bit uncomfortable and challenging for him as well. But he is ARC, always ready to take risks 😎


..He is so adamant for Bon not staying in that room alone!! He knew she needed lots care and love not abandon treatment! Even he himself was new to the whole situation he tried his best to help Bon. I loved how you portrayed their emotions Rimi ❤️ one side ani wanted to help her and on the other side Bon’s mind was filled up with all false beliefs.. how nicely he took care of Bon- tried to make her as comfortable as he could!! And then he started taking off all the curtains of false beliefs being told to Bon .. he knew Bon loved stories and he explained her the most important lesson for girls in a story form .. how you have explained Bon’s curious, innocent questions and ani’s calm, compose manner to answer them!! Finally he could able to explained her the most crucial and important topic of life!! Yes, it was still not over for him but he knew Bon would come to him with some more questions when time comes!😊 but the best thing was he could made her see things practically that periods is not a “shraap” but a “vardaan” for girls as well as for the whole nature 👏 soo nicely explained Rimi👏


Thanks a lot Nima... this is exactly what i wanted to convey 🤗


Not a single word or a sentence you used was uncomfortable 👍🏼 instead the selection of your words made this story more interesting.. !!


Yes that was the most difficult part of writing this OS Nima... I wanted to make it as decent as possible 😳


Good job girl🤗🤗

I am very proud of you for selecting this topic🤗

You and Ayesha are brave enough to touch this very sensitive topic and write it down in a story form ❤️

Hope makers show us something like this

Awesome job Rimi ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗


Thank you so much Nima.. Reviews like these always motivates me to write more 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Toto123

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Just to annoy you😎

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U r an amazing writer partner❤️

The way u depicted ani & bons emotions was so perfect👏

Coz everyone knows ani is incomplete without chillam chilli🤪

Ani's apprehension as well as his urge to help bon at d same time was so relatable👍🏼

And d way u framed entire explanation for menstruation cycle was amazing😳

The best part was ani giving bon d space and time to understand these things herself!!


P.S I hope tune munnu ko mana liya hai🤪

She should really read this one😆👍🏼

Partnerrrr.....🤗

Thank you so much 😳

You know how nervous I was 🤣 It was really tough to imagine how Ani would react, specially when he himself seems to PMSing every now and then 🤪


PS: usko mana liya hai kab ka but she is not reading 🤢 she hates me 😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Partnerrrr.....🤗

Thank you so much 😳

You know how nervous I was 🤣 It was really tough to imagine how Ani would react, specially when he himself seems to PMSing every now and then 🤪


PS: usko mana liya hai kab ka but she is not reading 🤢 she hates me 😭

B :Ani ne equality ko jyaada hi seriously le liya hai🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Arcturus_S

Beautifully written Rimi👍🏼👏 You are one of my favorite writers on Anirudh and Bondita. Handled the sensitive topic gracefully. How I wish the show would have shown this track like this without certain 'trio negative elements'😡 I am a silent member here. Sometimes I visit AT and EDT . Your gifs and caps are beautiful ❤️

P.S. Liked the initial warning to Ani's Sasuma😆

Awww thank you so much I feel honoured ❤️

I am so happy that you found it appropriate 🤗❤️

I wish show me bhi aisa kuchh ho 😳


Oh so sweet of you 🤗 you like my gif and caps toh commnet bhi kar diya karo 😳🤗❤️


Ani's sasuma is always skeptical about my writeups isiliye daala hai 🤣



PS: what's your name?😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Rim 🤗 You have written it sooooo beautifully in SIMPLE words 👏 That uncomfortable situation, their emotions and last but not the least the topic and it's message you have conveyed it all in the most decent way. Choices of words sooo appropriate 👍🏼 After reading this I am EVEN MORE PROUD of myself being a woman ❤️ All I can say is, THANK YOU 🤗

Arpi 🤗🤗🤗❤️

Thank you so much 😳 glad you took out time to read it behen 🤗 i miss u so much in forum 😭 Miss our Tumpa fun together 🤣😭


UL - that means a lot to me Arpi 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Rimi🤗

I won't praise much because my perception and knowledge of English or any other language for the matter,will fall short at enumerating the multiple emotions that were fluctuating through every single neuron in my body and brain while reading this!


Elation and ecstasy at Anirudh being headstrong and staying firm in his standpoint of fortifying her.

Disgust and exasperation at the way the RCs ostracized her and made her feel foreign and unwanted .

Sorrow and pity at Bondita's helplessness.

Rage against the baseless and classless opinion of the common multitude,who paved an incredibly obnoxious way of misleading her .

Gratitude and appreciation for Anirudh who himself was going through a tough time yet consoling and supporting her.

Awe, flabbergastion and speechlessness at the way the writer has poignantly and meticulously covered such a delicate yet indispensable topic.

If I have a daughter in future, I'd steal this okay,if you're okay with it😆!


P.S. What is RES?

Omg Koyal that was so overwhelming to read 🤗❤️ I am so honoured ❤️🤗

I dont have words to thank you enough for reviewing this OS so beautifully 😳 thank you so much 🤗❤️


RES stands for Reserved.. 😆 people reserve their comments so that they can read later and edit their post 😆

Tum matt karna aisa please 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Rimi🤗

I'm busy right now.....need to read in detail and give a good review to your story

Please be patient behen🤗

I'll be waiting Krish 🤗

I miss u 😭

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