Unexpected Surprises - A Rudhita OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Replies in underline 🤗

Love you Sana 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: nims23

Very lovely os Sana 🤗❤️

And a beautiful gift for our birthday girl :))
Is it possible for you to write some more parts?? 😆

😳 ekdum unexpected

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Thank you so much dear🤗❤️❤️

❤️😳

Originally posted by: nims23

Very lovely os Sana 🤗❤️

And a beautiful gift for our birthday girl :))
Is it possible for you to write some more parts?? 😆

Thank you so much Nims🤗❤️❤️

Yess😳

It was just a os so I can't continue it.. But will try to write more stories🤗👍🏼

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Woooowwww!!!🤗🤗 Just too good buddy.... ❤️❤️ Loved it...

Very well crafted👍🏼 Keep it up. I just loved how beautifully you created the ambiance in the scene at the terrace... 👍🏼

P.S. I have written an Os but i dont know why I keep getting the warning "Abusive Words" jab ke bilkul innocent OS hai mera...😕 I have asked at the Help desk... dekho shayad kuch pata lagay. 😒

Thank you so much Ayesha🤗❤️❤️

Glad you liked it 😳

Your os was too beautiful dear

Originally posted by: AARIAAL_432

Amazing story

And the naive feelings that you penned were amazing too

Aur cake wala part bhi bohot cute laagi mujhse

Arey nehi puraa OS hii bohot cute thaa

Best of luck

Aesehi hum sabko aesi yummy yummy treats dete rehna

Thank you so much Arial🤗❤️

And thanks for the compliment😳

I will write as soon as I get some new ideas.. 😳

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

😳 ekdum unexpected

🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Thank you so much Nims🤗❤️❤️

Yess😳

It was just a os so I can't continue it.. But will try to write more stories🤗👍🏼

You are welcome dear🤗🤗

P.S. I was just trying my luck 😆😆 anyways will wait for your next story :)

Sana.... 😳❤️

Tumhare haat mein aur dimaag mein jaadu hain yaar.. Chote chote emotions bhi itne beautifully kaise describe kar leti ho.. 😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏

As usual you nailed it dear..

My Appu

Chalo Finally mahurat aa hi gaya.. (Main sabke story par comment karne se pehle yahi likhti hoon)..Samjha karo I'm always late lateef

Appu thank you ki kya baat hai, I only gave you a simple chotu sa idea behen...You are the one wo penned down such a beautifull OS..

I'm a huge fan of your writings Appu

The way you describe any situation acts like a magnet which pulls me into a different world where everything seems to be pure magical..

I could literally visualize it and was secretly hoping it to never come to an end..This is the definition of lalach

Ani to yahan bhi mujhe pagal laga..Who brings Roshogullas as a cake on someone's b'day? He should have planned something beforehand instead of the last minute rush..He's a featherhead

Their romance under the moonlight was quite captivating...Their actions were enough to convey their feelings to each other..Lovesick hai dono (tu bechare ko kyun roki aage badhne se) Both are also an amiable lunatic🤪

In a nutshell, it was a wonderfully rich and highly engaging OS..👏

Ps: Tujhe yaad hai na maine ek story likhne ko kaha tha tujhe..You can take your time but I want you to come up with that without fail..(Nahi to teri story ko sirf like karke chod dungi😆)