not all relations are defined in life of a woman??- barrister babu ss

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Posted: 5 years ago
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hiiii guys , I am thinking to start writing fan fictions and I am starting something with an unexpected and rare twist win rudhita's life. it will first be from bon point of view and her changing way of seeing things in this transition and later how ani feels and deals with it

it is about a teenage bon of 14-15 years , she is the beloved daughter in law of her kaka sasurji , she respects her sasur ji though he has never shown an ounce of affection to her, she is beloved boudi of her som dada with whom she shares a brotherly relation , batuk who teases her but yet they are partners in crime , beloved bahuraniji of her bhari babu and koeli didi. and last but not the least her pati babu , the ideal man she has seen in his life who played all role in her life from childhood be it her Rakshak babu, her mentor, her shikshak babu , sometimes her rakshas babu but mostly the only man she expects from and she fulfils his each and every expectations and never can disappoint and always tries to make him proud of her .

bondita from her childhood has been an innocent , bubbly ,chirpy and pure hearted girl. her smile brings bliss to everyone faces, her never ending talks though irritates others but her chatterbox also is adored by many people, her tarks and questions leaves everyone speechless especially her signature kutark with kakasasur ji , amazes her patibabu ,her selfless care for each and every person around her fills everyone heart with love and last but not least her mesmerising beauty with deep eyes full of chirpiness, hopes, dreams but there is something else too an inexplicable pain which no one has seen till now not even her pati babu , something that is amiss with her which she tries to hide from others by masking her bubbly nature, her fears due to harsh experiences she faced and her surge of emotions she is going through .something that is introvert behind her extrovert nature which she is hiding from others and even her pati babu as she knows what has her pati babu gone through for her , whatever he has done for her, how he had fought for her from whole world and over the years she has realised that she has to make him proud of her at any cost and she thinks she is not worthy of his care for her and thus she has decided she will never let her inner turmoil and pain reach to him and cause any problems to him from here on.

amidst all this she has forgotten life always takes unexpected turn, sometimes what we think does not happen and a new twist in life changes our life for good maybe?? what happens when an unexpected person arrives in bondita 's life who sees through her soul and inner personality and is connected to her d norelation ,who does not consider her someone wife or someone bahu but an individual , a girl ,a bondita , a person who teaches her true meaning of friendship which is the purest form of feeling felt for a person who is nothing to you , how she is gonna deal with this feeling amidst growing up, this man helps her in her day to day turmoils , brings out her pains and makes her feel good about herself and especially to make her love herself and finally understand her relation with her pati babu , her family her kaka sasurji notions that married girls cant have talks and relation with any other man, how she is gonna explain her home full of men with various relations about an undefined relation and connect she has with a man which fills her heart with a never ending care for him. and will her patibabu support her in this venture where it is not about any atrocities with woman , not a social work but something related to her personal turmoil where her tarks are not working but her inner heart supports it??

ps this story is not about bon falling in love with another man , it is about if bon finds her best friend in a male person in future , how the possessive rc men and ani is gonna deal with it, I am trying to set a theme girls and boys can have a strong deep bond of friendship between them which is contradicted by society and how without romance and love people are bound to be soulmates , how a woman has different notions and feelings for her husband and her close friend . in that era especially for a free spirited , independent ,strong and wise girl , I will deal with bon denial,conflict , her kakasasur , her mother opinions and society outlook, bon and her friend genuine and pure bond , bon breakdown on her harsh experiences like hira mandi , her insecurities regarding Saudamini as she will realise mini was not just a friend after she herself faces qualms of friendship and her patibabu did not have same pure friendship with mini and then I will deal with ani emotions , insecurities as why bon is finding solace in some other person apart from him , his jealousy and his conflicting emotions and him realising his true relation with bon , will he support her life this decision and choice? let us see

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Liked the concept 👍🏼 I am always ready for Jealous Ani so 😆 Update soon 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Plz go for with thought and love to read it..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hii bondita-stan

My self soniA

Team anirudh

Tum mat bolna ki tum barabar fan ho dono k.. jhut bole bon baby kaate 😆

Or han plz mere bhaiya ko jada mat jalana ff mein *request* ek vse hi biwi se bahut judai sahi h zindagi bhar plz rehem karna.. nok jhok chahia. Like khatti mithi..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is going to be a interesting 🧐 story and how the topic will be dealt with all concern, how Bondita will overcome the problems and also realise her feelings along the way especially her pati Babu.

please translate any Hindi if used into English so that the story can be understood.


please continue soon🥳


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice concept katy👍🏼

Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold❤️

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