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Aniruddh was sitting in his study staring at a file with blurry vision, the kind of blurry-ness when you stare at something for too long, mindlessly. He wasn't reading the file. He was in a deep, deep thought. That's when there was a knock at the door that brought him to reality. He looked around and then at the person on the door. His vision was still not clear. There were tears in his eyes. "Aap ro rahe the kya Pati Babu?" Bondita came with a tray full of snacks and some tea and sat opposite to him while keeping the tray on the table after making some space on it. "Nahi, main Kahan ro raha tha?" Aniruddh quicky checked for his eyes and indeed they were wet. Bondita gave him a nod and served him tea. "Aap case ki tension mat lijiye, aap hi jeetenge." Bondita said. "Par kaise? Na koi saboot, na gawah, kaise jeetunga main case Bondita?" He said, frustrated at his situation. "Aap sach ka saath de rahe hain aur sach kabhi nahi haarta, ye aap hi nein kaha tha na mujhe, jab main London jaa rahi thi Barristery ki padhai karne, aur aap hi bhool gaye?" Bondita said. "Par koi saath nahi Bondita. Koi bhi nahi. Baba, Kaka, Som aur poore gaanv wale, sab samjhte hain ki main galat ka saath de raha." Aniruddh was sad. His eyes brimmed with fresh tears. "Main hoon aapke saath Pati Babu. Main hoon." Bondita said while she kept her hand on his. He looked at her in awe. Her eyes shone with hope. He felt immense faith in himself. He knew even if the whole world would be against him, his wife, his Bondita would stand by him, rock solid, staring right into the eyes of the world. In that very moment, he knew he won.






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Kaisi third class cheezein likhne lagi hoon main. Sorry. Was Super bored so I wrote this. Itni azeehat pahunchane ke liye I'm really sorry. 😞

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Posted: 5 years ago
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"Main hoon aapke saath Pati Babu. Main hoon." Bondita said while she kept her hand on his. He looked at her in awe. Her eyes shone with hope. He felt immense faith in himself. "

This . You have my heart here. They are there for and witheach other inspite of a lot odds. This is the base if any relationship.

Loved this! Waiting for more. ❤️❤️❤️😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Third class kisko bol rahi hai Octo 🤔 Kitna aacha hai yeh 👍🏼 Describes exactly how Ani would feel later on in the show.


Reminds of the line “Ladna pada toh duniya se lad jaoungi saath dega voh” but like for Ani.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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First of all, I don't think its third class at all!


Its a very sweet, little piece of work. Very short but it hides infinite meanings and depth in it. It is a kind of reflection we are getting, of the little Bondita who is leaving no room to support her Pati Babu, no matter she herself has to fall sick for it. It feels like, the recent episodes is a major foreshadowing of what I just read, and you know what does that mean? It means you were utterly perfect with the slightest nuances of the characters portrayed that we started feeling they are indeed, the older versions of what we are seeing today. The way Bondita supports her Pati Babu, it was written so beautifully.


Very little words, hiding an infinity of stories inside it. That's this piece of work for me. 👏

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This drabble is very blissful to my eyes. I'm totally in love with this beauty. Aniruddh needed the assurance which he got from his wife. My heart is a puddle pls. Please bless us with more of your write-ups.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Octo 😳

Wish it wasn't drabble.... It ended quickly...I want to read more Loved the way how Bon being Ani's pillar of support

If this is your third class writing..? Damn I want to read your first class writing then 😳

Hoping to read more from you..! Thank you for this amazing one ☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Khabardar aisi Sundar writing Ko third class bola toh 😡

I won't talk to you then.

Res.



This wasn't great, I know



Unres soon. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Third class kisko bol rahi hai Octo 🤔 Kitna aacha hai yeh 👍🏼 Describes exactly how Ani would feel later on in the show. I'm glad you liked it but it's true it isn't the best of me😒


Reminds of the line “Ladna pada toh duniya se lad jaoungi saath dega voh” but like for Ani.



Thank you for reading and liking it Shrishti🤗

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Unres soon Sujz! I don't let anyone put res and run away😈

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Originally posted by: Briti1107

This drabble is very blissful to my eyes. I'm totally in love with this beauty. Aniruddh needed the assurance which he got from his wife. My heart is a puddle pls. Please bless us with more of your write-ups.



Aww, thank you for your kind words Briti. 🤗

I have written few Drabbles and an OS. You may check that out 😆. New ones would take time. 😭

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