SERIAL WRITING (PARTICIPANTS PEEP IN PG. 1) UPDATED STORY🎬 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aacha theek hai Maa. Jab tumne sab decide kar hi liya hai toh hum sab se kyun pucha? Aapka toh alag hi chal raha hai, Mazaak kar rahi thi...


Ab zyada tension mat lo... Hum chalegein theek hai.. Leikin Ragini ko bhi saath le chalte hai na maa... Please na mat kahena.. Please.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I was wondering about Bhai. What will be his reaction to this?

Gosh! I can already imagine his reaction! God be merciful!

By the way I want my Bhabhi to be somewhat like this. I wishe for a sister in law who can love, care and lead our dynasty with good etiquettes and morals.i want her to love my brother and take care of him always. Also I want her as my sister. I always wanted a sister. Finally my dreams will come true. I also want her to support me when I come home from parties or do Masti. You see, my bhai is a very serious person, So...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Home786

Aacha theek hai Maa. Jab tumne sab decide kar hi liya hai toh hum sab se kyun pucha? Aapka toh alag hi chal raha hai, Mazaak kar rahi thi...


Ab zyada tension mat lo... Hum chalegein theek hai.. Leikin Ragini ko bhi saath le chalte hai na maa... Please na mat kahena.. Please.


Naina kam thi kya jo tum bhi shuru hogayi? Tum toh aise bol rahi ho jaise shaadi tai kardi hai maine. Bass unse milne jaa rahe hain. Aur maine keh dia na Ragini hamare saath nahi jaegi toh nahi jaegi. Dost ko kaun rishta dekhne ke liye leke jata hai? Mujhe vaise bhi tumhari voh dost thik nahi lagti

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Posted: 5 years ago
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What? Four Bhabhis? I mean four women? Oh my god! Today only they are coming! Bhai hasn't arrived yet but these people will be here! Gosh! Have decided now to do party ING or bury myself in the files in office! At least I will be spared from this shaadi shaadi drama today!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Naina kam thi kya jo tum bhi shuru hogayi? Tum toh aise bol rahi ho jaise shaadi tai kardi hai maine. Bass unse milne jaa rahe hain. Aur maine keh dia na Ragini hamare saath nahi jaegi toh nahi jaegi. Dost ko kaun rishta dekhne ke liye leke jata hai? Mujhe vaise bhi tumhari voh dost thik nahi lagti

Maa...shant ho jao. Ab tumne hi toh Naina didi se kahan ke kya pata ki wahan kya hone wala hai? Kuch aacha hi hojaye. Ab hamaare aache bure mein kisika ka saath hona matlab gawaah banna lazmi hai na Maa... Le chalte hai na Ragini ko... Maa please... Raazi ho jao...


Aacha mein school chalti hoon.. Laut teh waqt Ragini ko leke chalte hai... Theek hai.. Mujhe pata hai aap maan jaungi.. 😛

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I left my parents house after talking to them for a while and started heading straight to my school. Then I met Sapna during the break time for lunch.


She started to tell me about her rishta thing and I was beyond shocked. She was talking about the rajputs. They were one of the richest family in India


I can’t deny that I did feel a bit jealous if her when I heard that news but decided to ignore that feeling for NOW.


She asked me to come with them in the evening to the rajput mansion and I was more shocked. Of course I knew that her mom would not allow me to go so I had a plan to if her mom didn’t let me go.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Home786

Maa...shant ho jao. Ab tumne hi toh Naina didi se kahan ke kya pata ki wahan kya hone wala hai? Kuch aacha hi hojaye. Ab hamaare aache bure mein kisika ka saath hona matlab gawaah banna lazmi hai na Maa... Le chalte hai na Ragini ko... Maa please... Raazi ho jao...


Aacha mein school chalti hoon.. Laut teh waqt Ragini ko leke chalte hai... Theek hai.. Mujhe pata hai aap maan jaungi.. 😛


Main mana kar rahi hun phir bhi tum zidd pe adi ho. Ye kya baat hui? Meri baat ki koi kadar hai ki nahi? Arre suno tho.... Naina...

Ye bacche bhi na, meri baat sunte hi nahi hain. Swara, ek tum hi ho jo meri baat maanti ho. Apni beheno ko phone karke kehdo ki shaam ko jaldi aayen

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I arrived at the doors. The gatekeepers saw me and got surprised at my early arrival but nonetheless let me in

But the house unfortunately silent.

Eerily silent if I can say that

Where was Chotte, Maa and Mother?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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With the brothers emotional and aesthetic thoughts longing to their Mothers trap and the other hand the Wadhwa's girls notching up with typical and statistical mythology progressing towards an Entangled cave....


Btw, the Ragini Evilious nature, what are the thorns she would lie in this entagled story... Let's wait and see...

End of episode 2....

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Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Precap of Episode 3 :

  • Arrival of Yudhishthir finally.
  • Padmavati's Intention
  • Brother's cute and argumentative talks on marriage proposal.
  • Journey of Wadhwa's to Rajput palace.

End of Episode 3.....

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