Rudhita OS (Beginning of historical journey) - Page 4

Originally posted by: SONAMM3110

one of my fev os.... Pls aur bhi stories likhiye... BB writers ko new idea aapse lene chahiye

Thanks for liking my work.

Welcome to the forum. BTW, what can I call you behen?

Regards,

Shaheen❤️

Originally posted by: Home786

Thanks for the valuable comment friend .. Will write more.

Thanks for liking my work.

Welcome to the forum. BTW, what can I call you behen?

Regards,

Shaheen❤️

Originally posted by: SONAMM3110

SONAMM😊............ AAPKA NAME BAHUT PYARA HAI

Waise yeh mera asli naam nahi hai.. Yeh mera nickname hai behen.

Originally posted by: Home786

Thank you Sonam...❤️🤗

Waise yeh mera asli naam nahi hai.. Yeh mera nickname hai behen.

OMG Di this was so lovely. The way you described the situation was lovely. I loved reading it, but err, the part 1 and part 2 was a bit disconnecting. I'm so sorry. But it was a lovely read. And can I suggest you something? Hope you won't mind.

We use : scripted text for dialogue writing, (I mean many times in Wattpad I discontinued reading because they become bland and feels like reading a script) and while writing a story we use "" double quotations. But apart from that you have an amazing vision, can't wait to read the conclusion. I truly enjoyed reading it. 👏🤗

Originally posted by: Briti1107

OMG Di this was so lovely. The way you described the situation was lovely. I loved reading it, but err, the part 1 and part 2 was a bit disconnecting. I'm so sorry. But it was a lovely read. And can I suggest you something? Hope you won't mind.

We use : scripted text for dialogue writing, (I mean many times in Wattpad I discontinued reading because they become bland and feels like reading a script) and while writing a story we use "" double quotations. But apart from that you have an amazing vision, can't wait to read the conclusion. I truly enjoyed reading it. 👏🤗

I loved your suggestions... May follow this next time..

Originally posted by: Home786

Thank you Britu for your valuable comments...

I loved your suggestions... May follow this next time..

🤗🤗

Beautiful OS Shaheen😳

Specially the questions Bondita asked to Sailor , I can already imagine her asking those in cute voice of Aurra . Ani undoorstood her state of mind , the fear created by his actions in her and his way of removing it was so cute. Overall awesome👍🏼

It's just amazing 💜💜

The part where anirudh tried to do something which makes bondita happy & comfortable was very cuteee🧡🧡🧡

Your writings are becoming my favourites Shaheen. Thanks for writing such unique shots and make me read more ❤️❤️❤️🤗