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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Awesomely done....

Continue soon or later

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: narmz

ur update was awesome....nice ff...they are secretly married kwell its summin diffrent please countinue soon 😃



Thank you, so much "narmz" - you don't know....how much it means to me 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki4life

awesome start 😃
i love the characters 😊
plez continue soon 😊 😊 😊



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutey55

wow<<3 i jus got online and i saw ur FFF, i gotta say itS awEsOOmE<<<3
plZ cont sooon
btw> im tahmina



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sayara

Awsome start.Love it 😳
plzz coon soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushtari

amazingly done, please conitnue soon hunn



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtd11

i really like this plz continue



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: AmarDivya

Same here....I like this fan-fic; continue soon.....

Krishna Patel



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sapna_23

Awesomely done....

Continue soon or later

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Firstly....first....I would like to thank you all for supporting me and also encouraging me. And here is next part, but I'm not kinda happy with it...but I hope you guys like it and sorry for making you guys wait....😃


Part Two

Recap - Amar has a surprise for his family even Divya has a surprise for her family too…

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"Di, how many things are we taking since we are going there for couple of days?" Said by Kaajal, who was confused in what to pack…since her sister is going to stay with her in-laws and she is going to stay with her Nani

Divya: Pack whatever you like

~ Scene Shift to Amar and Dev's college ~

Soon as Amar arrives at his college, many girls came running toward him so he started running and bumps into Janki Ma'am, (who is more like a mother figure to him after his Mom)

"Amar, why are you in a rush?" Said by Janki Ma'am, who is holding his ear

Amar: Ma'am…it hurts (Janki lets go of Amar's ear and says "Next time I catch you running in the building than you will get detection with me…. Understood!") Yes Ma'am

Soon as Janki let's go of Amar; Amar goes running into his class saying "thank god Janki Ma'am caught me or else those girls won't leave me alone… I hope this semester goes fast so Divya can join here – than nobody will come near me ex-specially Bindya"

***

~ Scene Shifts to…Dev, who is fighting with Rahul for calling Kaajal a item ~

"Rahul, how many times I have to tell you to stop calling Kaajal an item?" Said by Dev, who punches Rahul in his stomach

Rahul gets up in 20seconds and punches Dev on his face (and Dev starts to bleed from his nose) than Rahul says "it's my mouth and I can say anything about anyone…even Kaajal"

Dev gets, more mad at Rahul and punches Rahul and knocks him down saying "think twice before you mess with Dev Rajeev Kapoor or Kaajal, who is my brother's wif…" (Dev stops halfway and leaves from there to his class but he was sent home)…

~ Scene Shift to Amar, who was taking notes in class for his upcoming assessment in three days, but he gets to submitted after he comes back from Delhi ~

Middle of note taking Amar falls asleep and is caught by Mrs. Garewal.

"Mr. Kapoor, is this a place to sleep?" said by Mrs. Garewal

Amar: No Ma'am

Mrs. Garewal leaves and Amar sits down and starts taking his notes again, but each time he starts to write down something he ends up finishing with Amar loves Divya and Divya loves Amar.

Soon as class was over; Amar leaves for home while Divya was cleaning up Dev's cuts and bruises…

***

"Bhabhi…it hurts" Said by Dev, who was making funny faces while Amar is driving…

"Dev, who told you to get into a fight and does your brother know about it?" said by Divya, who was cleaning up his deep cut

Dev made weird faces while Kaajal opens the door…

"Bhaiyya aap?" said by Dev, who is hiding behind Divya Bhabhi

Amar walks up to Dev and asks him what happened, but Dev didn't say anything cause Kaajal was around and he didn't want her to know that he is starting to have feelings for her so he just hugged his brother saying he got into a small fight at college…nothing else (and leaves from there while Divya watches him leave)…

~ Scene shifts to Delhi ~

"Mahua, why are you so excited?" said by Mahua's elder Sister Sindoora

Mahua: because my sons are coming in two days with a surprise

Sindoora made weird faces…because she hates seeing Amar's face because he reminds her of Sagar – her worthless brother, who was born to take away her property

Mahua: Di, aren't you happy?

Sindoora just nods her head than leaves while Divya was papering dinner for her family

While Divya was making food; Kaajal went into Dev's room and watched him sleep than leaves his room after putting the blanket over him while Mahua was cleaning up her sons' room…

"Mahua, what are you doing?" said by her husband Rajeev, who was standing behind her

Mahua: Cleaning up my sons' room…because they are coming in two days…

Afterwards entire Singh Family and plus Kapoor Family are having dinner when Divya was cleaning up the table with her sister Kaajal, who made weird faces in name of housework…

Soon as Divya was done; she checks on Dev than Amar; afterwards goes to bed with her sister because she and Amar made a promise that they aren't going to live as "man and wife" until their family excepts their relationship…than goes to bed with Kaajal and didn't realizes when two days have passed…

Next day, Amar, Dev, Divya and Kaajal a-board the flight to Delhi and according to his chat with Kamma…he told her to send a car for him and Dev because he gave the wrong information to his family so he can surprise them with Divya…

Entire Singh family and Kapoor family are getting ready to pick up Amar and Dev, but they are on their way home…

Soon as Sindoora opens the door….and says "Vidya" 😲

Guys I am going to end it right here so let me know how I did…

Thank you!

Kaajal - Sabbki Aankhon Mein Basi Hai




Edited by kajal_arjun - 17 years ago

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