FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 42

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Thank you Laila. You are such a sweetheart...

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Aww Nelly I will update today...If I have time I will update the two more parts..Hope you will enjoy every parts...Congrats...I have two weeks left ...I mean one week and a half...The time is running like a cake is melting...

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Here guys the next part..Enjoy
Recap: Everyone took Shalu and the baby home.
Chapter 32

Vidya is asleep after what she thought. How she could take care her husband and her unborn baby. Vidya wakes up of pain in her stomach.
Vidya – Ouch!!!
Sagar wakes up of Vidya's screaming pain.
Sagar – Vidya kya hua? With a worried face. Vidya couldn't say anything because of the pain.
Sagar takes her in his arm. Everyone wakes up.
SV's mum – Kya hua beta?
Sagar – Lagta hai ke Vidya ko dard shoro hogaya.
SV's mum – Jaldi chalo hospital. Everyone goes to the hospital. This time SV's mum and Shalu was in the backseat. Vidya's head was on SV's mum's lab.
Sagar – Vidya kuch nahi hoga tumhe…
SV's mum – Sagar beta jaldi karo.
Sagar drive the car very fast. Finally they arrived. Sagar takes Vidya again on his arms.
Sagar – Vidya tumhe kuch nahi hoga, holding her hands.
Doctor – Operation theatre par leao.
Doctor comes out of the theatre with a sad face.
Doctor – Mr Singh aapko kisiko chunna hoga. Aapke bacche ya Vidya. We can just save one life.
Sagar – Doctor aap Vidya ko bachaiye.
SV's mum goes to Sagar and holds his shoulder. Sagar hugs her.
Sagar – Maa Vidya.
Suddenly Sagar heard two children's crying in the operation theatre. Doctor comes out with a happy face.
Doctor – Mubarak ho aapko judwaa hua hai. Ek larki aur ek larka. Aur Vidya bhi theek hai.
All is so happy. Sagar is happy happy and happy.
Sagar – Doctor kya main Vidya se mil saktaho.
Doctor – We are just going to move her to a room. Then you can go to her.
Sagar goes in the room there Vidya was. He sees his children. He takes first the baby girl and then very slowly and very careful the baby boy. Vidya was sleeping.
Sagar – Meri bacche. Tum dono aap meri paas ho. I missed you both so much.
Vidya slowly wakes up. She didn't know about she got twins.
Vidya – Aap!
Sagar – Vidya dekho humari bacche ko. Vidya careful holds the baby boy.
Sagar hugs Vidya – Thank you Vidya.
Vidya – Aap aisi kyun kehrahihe. Dekhiye yeh bacche humari dono ka hai toh yaha par thank you kisliye. Everyone comes to the room. Tushar is so happy.
Tushar – Bhabhi meri aab do batiji aur bateje hua hai. Wow Tushar tum toh aab teen bacche ko samhalna hoga aur ek aur bhi aane wale hai.
Everyone starts to laugh.
Doctor comes to the room.
Doctor – Everything is normal and fine. If you want to talk them home you can.
After they arrived at home.
Sagar takes Vidya to the room to rest. Everyone else is playing with the babies plus playing with Shalu & Chinu's daughter.
Bharat – Wow aab mujhe aab kisika saat toh khelna hoga.
Sindoora is angry and is just burning like she has eaten many kareles with fire.
Sindoora thinkng – Aab toh bacche hogaya hai. Mujhe kuch karna hoga jaldi varna yeh property yeh bacche ke haat me ajaege. Kya karo soch Sindoora.
Vidya is laying on the bed and is sleeping. Sagar is seeing that and feels so happy. He thought about another thing.
He goes to the house temple.
Sagar – Shamboonathji aaj aapne mujhe duniya ke sabse bari khush diya hai. Vidya yaha par haar waqt rehta hai aura apse baat kartehe. Kyun na aaj main bhi aapse baat karo. Shamboonathji aap meri dono bacche ki raksha kijiyega aur meri patni. Main yaha aye ho kyun ki mujhe aapke ashiwaad chaiye thi. Aap meri choti si pyari si parivaar ka raksha kijiye. Mujhe nahi maloom mujhe kyun bohut bechani si horahihe.
Vidya wakes up and saw that Sagar wasn't there. She goes downstairs and sees that Sagar isn't there. She saw that everyone was playing with the babies.
She then thought that she will go to the house temple for say thank you to her shamboonathji.
She was surprised to see Sagar was talking.
Vidya – Aap yaha hai aur hum aapko kaha kaha nahi dhunda.
Sagar – Vidya tumhe toh aab aaram karna hoga.bits his tongue.
Vidya – Maine sab kuch suliya. Aap hume itni pyar kartehe. She goes to Sagar and hugs him.
They hug for a long time. Sagar kisses Vidya's forehead – Ha Vidya main tumse bohut pyar kartiho.
Vidya's eyes are filled with tears.
Vidya – Aab aap hume itni rulayenge.
Sagar – Maine tumhe nahi rulaya ho meri pyarne tumhe rulaye hai.
Vidya – Aap aab baas bhi kijiye aap aab do bacche ke pita hai.
Sagar – Ha woh toh main ho aur main bhi ek besharam pati bhi.
Vidya – Aap kabhi aapka besharmi se jaenge nahi.

Hope you'll enjoy this boring part. I din't know what I wrote so I hope you understand the part!!! πŸ˜†

Espiecially Reena di, Charri di, Nelly, Narmz di jo comment nahi likrahihe πŸ˜† haha sorry I know that you are busy and Laila..
Edited by LoveBMTD - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Meri pyaari si choti si behan...
I like your new part...har kahani mein aise part hoti hai jho likhne wale ko inta achcha nahin lagta hai..par meri baath mano it was really nice...har kahani mein bahot achchi parts hota hai aur kabhi kabhi bhi kuch parts aise bhi hota hai jho likhne wale ko kuch zyada achcha nahin lagta hai...

Mein samajh sakti hoon kyon ki mein bhi ek Fanfic likh rahi hoon..aur mujhe bhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ke mera kuch part achcha nahin hai...

Lekhin mujhe tumhaara part bahot achcha lagta hai..continue soon because I can't wait for the next part...

Aap ki Di
Reena

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