FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Hi Dimple and thanks for the comment. I promise that I'm going to update one more part...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rina...
It was awesome!
I really loved it!
Cont soon!

- Charri 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Sagar and Vidya's marriage is fixed. Both are tensed.
Chapter 6

Vidya wakes up with noises. Everyone is decorating the house because today is the mehndi rasamh and shaadi. Vidya goes downstairs. The girls take her same with Shalu, they take Shalu too. They are putting mehndi on Vidya's and Shalu's hands. After putting mehndi.
Girl – Vidya tumhari mehndi bohut gheri hai matlab tumhari pati tumko bohut pyaar karenge.
Vidya didn't take their attention. She was lost in her thoughts. One girl snaps her finger.
Girl – Kaha khogayho tum. Unki bareme sochrahiho na!
Vidya – Kya?!
All start laughing. Shalu was laughing too. They were enjoying. Vidya and Shalu goes up to change clothes. Vidya's mum came to hers room.
Vidya's mum and Shalu's mum – Meri Vidya bohut bare hogaya. Aaj uski shaadi bhi hai. Both gets teary eyes and hugs.
Vidya – Maa aap aisi kyun bholrahihe?
Vidya's mum – Tumhari shaadi hai aaj aur tum mujhe chorkar jarahiho.
Vidya hug her mum very tight and cries.
Vidya – Nahi maa..
Vidya's mum – Vidya yeh lo shaadi ka jhora.
It was a red gorgeous lehnga with heavy design and jewellery. Then Vidya and Shalu's mum goes to Shalu's room.
Shalu's mum – Shalu beta yeh lo.
It was a red and pink gorgeous lehnga and jewellery.
Shalu and hers mother hugs tight and cries too. Now theirs mum goes out and is going to be ready too. Vidya is now ready. She is taking her jewellery on and she is little nervous same with Shalu, she is nervous too but exited. Shalu is now taking on her jewellery when Vidya caomes to her room. Shalu couldn't take her eyes of Vidya. She was extremely gorgeous.
Vidya – Shalu di aap hume aisi kyun dekrahihe?
Shalu – Wow Vidya you're looking very beautiful. Aaj toh meri devar ki nazre sirf tumhari par rehnga..!
Vidya get little shy.
Vidya – Shalu di aap bhi kaam nahi lagrahihe. Meri jijaji ki nazre aap par bhi rehnge. Both laugh.
Now theirs mum enters. She couldn't take her eyes of Vidya and Shalu.
Shalu's Vidya's mum – Aaj toh meri phool jaise betiyaan bohut khubsoorat lagrahihe. Kisika nazar na lagjae. Both feel very shy. They hugs theirs mother.
Outside the groom's family have arrived. After hugging theirs mum goes outside and welcome the groom's family. Both dulhe raja sits on the mandap and waiting for theirs dulhans. Vidya and Shalu comes. Sagar couldn't take his eyes of Vidya, and same with Chinu he couldn't take his eyes of Shalu. They were staring at them while they were doing the riti rivaz. Now Vidya and Shalu both cries and hugs their mum. Then they sits in the car with theirs husband. They arrived. Sagar's mum does the aarti on Vidya and Shalu and takes them to their room. Vidya was waiting for Sagar to come. On other hand the girls outside don't give Sagar the permission to go in because he must give them MONEY. Sagar gives money and enters.
Suhaag Raat
Vidya is very nervous and feel very uncomfortable. Sagar takes of the dupatta on her. He is thinking Vidya is very beautiful.He takes her hand.
Sagar – Vidya mein tumhe kuch kehna chatiho. Vidya is little confused. She feels uncomfortable. She takes her hand of Sagar. Sagar notice that but he didn't feel bad.
Sagar – Vidya mein tumko waqt dongi. I know what you feel. Humari shaadi itni jaldi hogaya, we don't know so much about each other. Vidya is quiet. She can't say anything. But she wants to tell him what she feels. But he didn't give her chance because he was talking. After Sagar was done. Vidya was thinking.
Vidya – He is very nice and kind person. He isn't like that she thought, saying to herself. After talking both slept.

Hope you'll enjoy!!!
Rina ❤️
Edited by LoveBMTD - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: charri7878

Rina...
It was awesome!
I really loved it!
Cont soon!

- Charri 😳

Thank you Charri. I have updated the next..Hope you enjoy this part too like you're enjoying my ff..

Love Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
omg that was awesome...please countinue asap...please ur ff is too good...and btw my name is Narmeen but u can call me Narmz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

omg that was awesome...please countinue asap...please ur ff is too good...and btw my name is Narmeen but u can call me Narmz

Hi Narmeen. Thank you for the comments. I'm going to update soon as possible. I promise I'm going too.

Love Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
that was awsome 👏 👏
see vidya sagar isnt soo bad ryte? 😛
lol
anyways update soon plez 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki4life

that was awsome 👏 👏
see vidya sagar isnt soo bad ryte? 😛
lol
anyways update soon plez 😃 😃

Haha Ankita. No Sagar and Vidya isn't bad. I will update very soon.

Love Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was fantactic update Rina!
I enjoyed reading it!
Cont soon!

- Charri<33
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Sagar and Vidya were talking in theirs suhaag raat.
Chapter 7

Next morning Vidya wakes up. She takes a shower and takes a beautiful saree. Sagar is sleeping peaceful. Vidya goes to the house temple and prays and does the aarti. Shalu is now going very fast down the stairs and goes to Vidya. They both does the aarti. Everyone comes down and goes to the temple. Sagar wakes up and goes to the house temple too. They are done with the aarti and goes to everybody and gives Prasad. Shalu goes with her husband to the living room and Sagar's mum and dad just follow them. Vidya and Sagar is alone in the house temple. Vidya goes to Sagar and gives him Prasad.
Sagar – Vidya tum itne jaldi yaha par.
Vidya – Mein har subha mandir par aarti she gets cut.
Sagar – Tum itne jaldi..
Vidya – Ha ha aap aab sabh ke saat bethye aur hum breakfast jakar banatiho.
Sagar smiled.
Sagar – Vidya do I must go.
Vidya – Ha ha. He goes and sits with everybody. Shalu and Vidya is preparing the breakfast.
Shalu & Vidya – Brekfast ready hain.
Everyone goes to the dining table. Vidya serves to everyone and Shalu is sitting with her husband and eating.
Sagar's mum – Vidya Shalu tum donone aaj kuch mitha bhi banaya aur yeh hai tum donoki inaam. Sagar's mum gives them kangan.
Sagar's mum and dad – Aaj raat humne tum donoke liye ek party rakha hai. Tum sab tayar rehna. Everyone smiles.
Sagar is just staring at Vidya while Vidya is smiling with everyone. Vidya has her hands under the table. Sagar takes Vidya's hand and holding while Chinu and Shalu notice that.
Chinu – Dadda bhabhi ka haat chodijiye.
Shalu – Ha Vidya tum bhi Sagar ki haat choro.
Vidya just look at Sagar. Vidya and Sagar was embarrass of this. They didn't think that some one will notice that. Chinu and Shalu are laughing much lowed with everyone. After having breakfast everyone leaves and leaving Sagar and Vidya alone again. Sagar goes to Vidya. Vidya didn't notice that. When he was so close to her she gets very scared.
Vidya – Aap!
Sagar – Ha mein aur kaun.
Vidya – Sab log kaha gay?
Sagar – Sab log chalegay.
Vidya push Sagar.
Vidya – Aur aab aap bhi chalejay ready honekeliye.
Vidya – Mujhe kyun accha lagta hai jab voh mujhe chote (touch) hai.
Sagar goes to his room and take a shower. Vidya comes to the room. Sagar was drying his hair when some water drops came to Vidya's face.
Sagar – Vidya I'm sorry. Vidya mein aaj kya pehno. Can you please help me?
Vidya pick up a black coat with jeans.
He goes downstairs and Chinu is going downstairs too. Everyone congrats them.
Vidya is wearing a golden saree with some matching jewellery and curly hair.
Tushar (Sagar's friend) – Sagar where is your wife? We have seen you so much now we want to see your wife. Sagar is little angry and happy too. Vidya and Shalu comes downstairs. Tushar couldn't take his eyes of both his bhabhis. Sagar on other hand always stared at Vidya. Sagar and Chinu goes to theirs wife and hand in hand come to Tushar.
Chinu – Tushar isse milo yeh meri biwi hai Shalu.
Sagar – Tushar aur isse milo yeh meri biwi hai Vidya.
Tushar – Namaste and goes from there. He is little scared because now isn't two peoples now is four peroples. Bye
Sagar takes Vidya to the dance floor.
Sagar – Vidya do you want to dance with me?
Vidya just nodds.
Sagar takes his hand on Vidya's waist and Vidya takes her hands on Sagar's shoulder.
Vidya feels something in her heart. When Sagar touch her she feels good.
She was thinking while the song was finished. Sagar snaps his finger. Vidya came to her sense.
She goes back to Shalu. After the party was over and everyone was going home. Vidya was going to her room. She was taking of the jewellery when a bangle breaks and one piece goes in.
Vidya – Ouch.
Sagar – Vidya kya hua? Oh my god. He takes the piece. Vidya didn't feel hurt. When Sagar touch her she doesn't feel hurt or something.

That was all today.
Hope you'll enjoy..!!

Love Rina
Narmz hope you'll enjoy this part!!!

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