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Posted: 17 years ago
Moomoo the two parts were awesome. Great job and sorry for comment late. But you have to continue soon as possible. Sagar knows the truth 😃 I will be waiting for your next update. You are doing a great job. Keep it up and continue when you have time.
Love you

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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww..OMG vidya commiting SUICIDE?!?!?!?! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...moomoo i know ull make it GREATER sooo conitinue soon babe...loved it A LOT 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mushtari

awwwwwwwwwwww..OMG vidya commiting SUICIDE?!?!?!?! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...moomoo i know ull make it GREATER sooo conitinue soon babe...loved it A LOT 👏

aww glad u liked it. and yes ill try my best to make it better of course. btw when r u updating?

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Posted: 17 years ago
moomoo ur update was awesome....please please update agen i beg u i really want to noe wat happens next please please 😳 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update, why would Vidya commit suicide?
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg bmtd11 that was amazin!! what did i tell u? nobody can be a better writer than u are!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!!
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Originally posted by: BMTDlvr8

omg bmtd11 that was amazin!! what did i tell u? nobody can be a better writer than u are!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!!

aww thank u soo much. umm i dont think i can update right now but defintaly tom! i promise!

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg omg great update.love it so much.plz coon soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guys glad u liked my updates so far. There r just a few ppl id like to a give a shout out too and remember order doesnt matter im just ranodmly writing the names:
Tahmina
Narmeen
Ankita
Muhstari
Charri
Saniya
Rina
Adventure_gurl
Sayara. Sorry if i missed anyone! Well back to today's update. Enjoy:
Part 35:

Recap: Chandra, Chinu, and Shalu go to Vidya. Sagar stands by a tree while Asher tells his friends the truth.
Sagar's eyes grow wide because he sees a dog by his foot. He quickly runs away from there. He heard nothing Asher said. Meanwhile back in Switzerland Chandra and Vidya come back after getting her REAL blood report and they recorded what the doctor said.
Ch: Ye toh acha huwa. Ab hum kal hi ja ke Sagar ko ye report dekain ge.
V: Nai.
Sh: Par kyun vidya?
V: Kyun ki…
C: Kyun ki ye bat toh sabat hojaigi ke vidya pregnant nai hai par ye bat to sabit nai hogi ke woh tasveeren jooti hain.
Ch: Right. Bas kisi taran woh tasveeren humara hat ajain.
C: Who ab humara hat nai ayenge.
V: Kyun?
C: Kyunki mama aur papa ne unhe jalade. Vidya looks down in disappointment.
Sh: Vidya itni jaldi har mat mano. Hum koi hal nikal te hain.
C: Hain vidya. Hum sub agar aik sat sochen ge to koi na koi hal nikle ga. They begin thinking hard but vidya can only think of Sagar. Sagar meanwhile is in his room.
S: Muhje aik bat samaj me nai ari. Agar viyda ahser ki bache ki maa toh who asher ke saat kyun nai hai. Asher zaroor apne bache ki katar use apne pas toh rakta. Kai phir sach me ye Asher ki chal to nai hai? Sagar continuously thinks when something spots his eye. He walks towards it and picks it up. It's vidya's necklace. He looks at it and remembers his suhaag raat. Thinking about being that close to vidya gets him mad so he throws the necklace outside. Vidya grabs onto her neck.
V:Sagar!
C: Kya huwa vidya?
V: Sagar .. Sagar… Vidya faints on to the sofa.
Sh: Vidya! Chinu pani lain. Chinu runs and gets water. He gives it to Chandra who sprays it on Vidya's face. Vidya wakes up.
C: Kya hogya hai tumhe vidya? Kyun tum istara himit ha ri ho.
V: Nai bardash hota muhjse. Nai rasakti me asi. I can't! Vidya runs to her room and locks the door behind her. They run after her. Chandra and Shalu knock on the door.
C: vidya! Vidya! Darwaza kolo! Vidya asa kuch mat karna jo tumhe nooksan ponchaiga!
SH: Vidya please meri katar darwaza kolo.
CH: Vidya asi stupid harkaten mat karo. Hum tume guarantee karten hai ke hum tumhe pir sagar ki dil me la ke raken ge. Please vidya darwza kolo! Please!
V: Aap log please chale jain. Na rena muhje aab. Muhjse sagar ki nafrat bardash nai hoti. Marne dein muge! Vidya goes through the medicines in her room but finds nothing that will kil her. Then she spots something a knife in a bowl of fruit. She walks up to it and takes it out. She looks at the picture of her and sagar on top of her bed.
V: Aapne kaha ke aapko sharam a re hai ke apne muhjse pyar kia hai. Me aapko itna badnam hota we nai deksakti. I love you sagar! She stabs herself.
Precap: Chinu and Rajeev confront Asher.
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG OMG...Moomoo that was fantastic mindblowing..
I really get teary eyes you wrote it so good that I'm speechless. Please continuw when you have time!
and thanks for the dedication...
Love you

Love S.Rina

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