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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww Moomoo it was great..I mean it was fantastic..
Please continue soon when you have time..
I can't wait please update..
Love you

Love S.Rina
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey moomoo!
It was a great update!
I really loved it!
Cont soon!

Love Charri<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh dear, another mess in the way of their love story! aww! great update, keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry guys i cudnt update again yesterday as my computer got messed up but now im back with another update for all u wonderful fans. Enjoy:
Part 27:

Recap: sAgar and vidya go to a park. Vidya is about to hug sagar.
Vidya and sagar look up and see a girl standing by them.
Girl: Tum iske gale kyun lag ri ho? Tum nai janti ke ye kitna bara fraud hai.
Vidya and sagar stand up.
S: Tum kahne kya chati ho?
Girl: Just shut up ok! Tum is masoom larki ko apne chunjal me mat paso.
V: Kaise chunjal? What are you saying?
Girl: Is is larke ne muhje muhje rape kia hai! Sagar and vidya's eyes grow wide.
S: Who are you! Aur tum kaun hoti ho ye kane wale.
Girl: Bhool ge ke me who larki hoon jise tum ne us raat zabar dasti ki ti.
S: Kaunsi raat! Kaunsi larki! Mene to tumhe kabi deka bi nai hai. Agar tum ye claim karti ho ke tum muhje janti ho to phir mere naam kya hai? Vidya knows that sagar didn't do anything so she helps him.
V: Gee. Please agar aap ine janti hai to patai ke inka naam kya hai?
Girl: Naam.. woh naam…
S: Exactly! Aye kai ke fraud. Chalo. Sagar takes vidya's hand and they leave. They go to the hotel room. Both sit on the sofa.
V: Kaun ti who?
S: Pata nai par ye larki sirf logo ko dook me hi dek sakti hain. Anyways tum tension mat lo.
V: Gee.
S: Vidya muhje toh bohut book lagi hai par bar jane ko dil nai kara.
V: Toh hum ya hi kana mangwale te hain.
S: Yes! Sagar takes the phone and as he dials vidya was about to walk away when he grabbed her. She just put her head on his chest as he rubbed his hand on her arm and ordered the food. Once the food was here they were sitting on the small table. Vidya was about to eat when sagar took the spoon out of her hand and fed her. Vidya fed him too. They continued feeding each other until they were done. Sagar called up room service to pick up the stuff.
Later vidya came out of the bathroom wearing a bath robe again. Sagar was sitting on the bed. He was reading a magazine when he saw vidya come out. He walked over to her. He wrapped his hands around her waist. She jumped but knew that it was only her sweet sagar. Sagar kissed her neck until he reached the ends of her shoulders. Vidya turned around still in his arm looking straight into his eyes. She moved closer and closer to his body until their lips met. As they separated one minute later sagar picked her up and took her to the bed. He lay on top of her looking into her eyes. He kissed her body till there was nothing left to kiss and……. The next morning vidya wakes up. She sees sagar's phone ringing. Vidya doesn't want to pick it up so she tries to wake up sagar. She sits by him and shakes him.
V: Sagar…
S: Mhm… still has his eyes closed.
V: Sagar… uten….
S: Kya huwa vidya sone do. Wraps himself around her waist.
V: Sojan par phone to uta len. Sagar takes the phone from vidya still in her lap. He answers it and then starts explaining something. Then he shuts it.
S: Business ki call ti.
V: Sab tik hai?
S: Yes.
V: Acha aap soja me ja kar shower lati hoon.
S: Nai abi mat jao. Muhje tumhare god me sona hai.
V: Tik hai. Vidya strokes his hair as he sleeps. An hour later he wakes up. He just jumps out of her lap.
S: Aah sari jitna soa ta who itna acha nai toh jo is aik gante me soa ta. Vidya laughs.
V: Ab me ja kar shower le loon?
S: Jao. Vidya gets off and takes a shower. She comes back and sees sagar watching tv.
S: Vidya?
V: Gee.
S: Aaj ka jain?
V: Pata nai.
S: You want to go to an amusement park.
V: Amusement park? Sagar walks up to her.
S: You know jaise hum pehle jate te. And don't worry no roller coasters. Vidya laughs.
V: Ok.
S: Ok then get ready. Sagar turns around but vidya calls out to him. He walks back.
S: Kya huwa vidya?
V: Who amusement park mein me sari to nai pansakti to kya aap muhje koi achi se shalwar kameez pick kar ke desakte hain. Sagar looks through her clothes. He picks out a read shalwar kameez.
S: Yeh pano.
V: Thank you. Later on they are in the amusement park. They are walking when a guy stops right infront of vidya. Her eyes grow wide.
Precap: Sagar is mad at vidya. He won't look at her or talk to her.
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Posted: 17 years ago
nnoooooooo SAGAR U CANT BE MAD AT VIDYA!!!! NOOOOOO 😔 lol
welll awsome update hun 😃
i loved it 😊
yay Vidya believed Sagar!! WOO HOO 😛
anyways continue soon hun 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
^ thank u very much. i will try to continue soon. like tomorrow. oh yea sagar... lets see what i have up my sleeves about tht issue. lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol great update!! PLZ CONT SOON<<<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderfull update. 👏 i loved it again.. plaeasee updtae soooon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey plz continue karo na!

i read your fan fiction all in once and i loved it! cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey plz continue karo na!

i read your fan fiction all in once and i loved it! cant wait to read more!

thank u. galad to u know u liked it.

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