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Payal25 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww!! 😳 😳 😳
Cant wait to read more!! 👏 😃
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Sorry 4 the delays guy but here it is:

Vidya is getting ready. She has on a red lehnga. She fixes her hair in a bun and then shalu puts her dupatta over it.
Sha: Vidya you are looking outstaning today. Sagar ke to hosh arujaynge.
V: Shalu toh kya chinu bhai ke nai aurjayenge tumhe dek kar. Shalu was also wearing a less extaravagant lehnga that had a red shirt, and green lehnga and dupatta.
Sha; Who to tum tik ka re ho. They both laugh. Vidya's parents come in.
VM: Vidya beti tum toh aaj both his achi lag ri ho. Kash tum aaj na jati.
Vd: Par ise aik na aik din to jana hi hai. Aur jaise humne ise pehle iska pyar china ab nai chin sakte. Me janta hoon ke ye sagar ke saat both hi khush ray gi. Vidya becomes emotional.
Sha: Arrey maa vidya ko rolai to na. Us ka sara make up karab hojayga. Phir sagar ko kya jawab denge. Everyone laughs.
VD: Acha choro ye sab. Chalo jaldi se hall jaten hai.
Vm: Aur hain shalu chinu hamari taraf se ayga ye phir sagar ke.
Sha: Maan who bharat ke ssat ayga par phir wapas nai jayga. Mene ka to ke who bharat ke saat aye kyunki who pehle sagar ke dost aur phir bad mein mera… She blushes.
Sha: Ab choro ye sab baatein chalo. Shalu helps vidya up and they go to the hall. Shalu sits vidya on the stage. They all wait for the bharat to come. Then the dj announces that the bharat is here. He plays tene leke me from salam e ishq.
hey ya... hey ya...
(hey ya heeriye sehra baandh ke main toh aaya re
hey ya doli baarat bhi saath mein main toh laaya re) – 2… Chinu leads the bharat dancing.
ab toh no hota hai ek roz intezaar.. sagar comes.
soni aaj nahi toh kal hai tujhko toh bas meri honi re.. chinu signals sagar to dance.
tenu leke main javanga, dil deke main javanga – 2.. sagar dances.
hey ya... hey ya...
aa keh de zamane se, tu mere ishq ki hai daastaan
hey ya... hey ya... they all get closer to stage.
o jaaniya keh de bahaane se
main tera jism hoon, tu meri jaan
kuch na chupa
mushkilon se milta hai aisa sona pyar… sagar goes closer to vidya and shlu helps vidya up.
soni cheez tere jaisi na mujhko na mujhko khoni re
tenu leke main javanga, dil deke main javana – 2.. sagar picks vidya up and takes her to the middle of the hall.
jaan aise na tadpa ke dekh le madhbhare andaaz se
hey ya... hey ya...
o jaan tu awaaz ko apni aa mila ab meri awaaz se
are haan keh de haan … she tries to walk away but sagar grabs her hand. Her back is towards sagar and she sings…
kar diya hai tune mujhko yun bekaraar
maahi keh diya duniya se main teri main teri ho gayi re… she turns around and sings:
tere naal mein aavaangi, sasooral mein jaavaangi.. Sagar then dances.
hey tenu leke main javanga, dil deke main javanga
hey ya... hey ya..... both sagar and vidya walk back to the stage and sit down.
Ch: Vaa kya jalwa dikaya tune sagar. Waqt se pehle hi uta ke legya tu.
S: Woh kata hai na dilwale dulhaniye le kar jayenge.
Everyone: OHHHHH.
SD: Chalo kamas kam humari ghar ki khushi phir se aygay. Kyun bhai sab?
VD: AAp ke liye to khushi hai par humara liye dook ke humari beti hum se door ja re hai. Vidya looks down and get emotional. Sagar holds on to her hand without anyone notcing. He then gets up. He holds his hands together infront of vidya's parents.
S: Muhje maaf kardein. Mene apse apki beti cheni. Par me vidya se both pyar karta hon aur use ke behgar rana mere liye namum kin hai. Hosake toh muhje maaf karden. Vidya's eyes fill up with tears looking at how sweet he is.
VM: Arrey beta ye kaise baten kar ho.
VD: Humne be toh kisi se unke beti chine ti aik din. Koi bat nai hai. Muhje tum par naz ke tumne ye bat kai. Muhje ab yakeen hogya he ke meri beti ke liye tumhi aik tik insaan ho. Well done beta. They hug. Sagar goes to sit back with vidya. The marriage goes on, rituals,etc. It is time for the bharat to leave. The bharat leaves. Vidya cries slightly as saying bye to her parents. Sagar had got a limo. Chandra sits in the limo along with sagar's parents. Then shalu helps vidya get in and then sagar gets it. Sagar holds on to her hand which calms her down and all her tears go away. Soon they arrive at home. Chandra helps Vidya get out of the car. They walk in to the house. SM brings some keys to vidya.
SM: Vidya ye keys is ghar ke aik aik kamre ki hai aur ghar ke. Ab ye zimadari tumhari hai. Vidya hesitates at first but then takes them.
SD: Sagar vidya ko ghar me lao. Sagar holds out his hand. She holds his hand and steps into the house.
C: Aao vidya me tumhe tumhara kamre me la kar jao. Chandra takes vidya to her room. The bed has a red bedsheet matching vidya. There are strands of roses hanging over the bed. There are candles all over the room. Chandra helps vidya sit on the bed. Outside sagar is about to walk in. There are girls all around him who are his relatives. Chandra walks over to the door.
C: Tum larkyoon ko mene kya ka ta ke ise ye mat lana.
Girl: Sorri Chandra par ye bag kar agya.
C: Acha choro. Sagar is about to walk in.
C: Roko.
S: Kya matlab tumhara.
C: Jaeb kolo aur pase nikalo.
S: Pase?
C: Hain andar ane ki fees do.
S: Dang it. He takes some money out.
S: Ye lo.
C: Thank you. Enjoy ur first night with vidya. She leaves. SAgar enters and close the door behind him and……
Precap: SV's suhaag raat and valima.
i hope u enjoyed.
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Posted: 17 years ago
moomoo, dat was awesome yaar, how do u write so goood?? lol
plZ CONT SOON!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazinggggggg i loved it..cant wait for nex update cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg that was soooooo MINDBLOWING 😃
lol
plez plez plez update soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
awsome!! 👏 👏 👏
Cant wait to read the next part.. 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mindblowing.....u made me blush 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing update Moomoo!
Me loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cont soon!!!

- Charri 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow tht was a gr8 part!!!it was rilly good!!👏👏👏
Edited by sweet_dreams22 - 17 years ago
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Hey guys i am alll gald u liked my ff so far so here is today's update:

Sagar walks over to Vidya. She senses him coming closer and her heart beats faster and faster. He doesn't sit on the bed but just stands there.
S: Vidya. Me kya kaun tumse? Hm… Got it. Kya tum is shaadi se kush ho?
She nods her head.
S: Mein bi both khush hoon. Kya tum sach mein muhjse both pyar karti ho?
V: Sabse zyda.
S: Me bi tumse both both pyar karta hoon. Tumhara mere ab saat rayga humesha humesha ke liye. He bends down to her.
S: I love you, me tumse both pyar karta hoon. She looks at him.
V: I love you too, me bi aapse both both pyar karti hoon. He gets closer to her but she gets off the bed. He walks around to her and turns her around. Her holds her arms and she tingles inside. He gets closer and closer to her and kisses her for about ten seconds and lets go. She smiles at him and walks away to the vanity. She takes her duppata off and unties her hair. Then she begins taking her jewelry off. First she takes off her bangles and then her rings. Then she takes off her earrings. Then she comes to take off her necklace but can't. Sagar comes from the back and takes it off for her. He lets it drop to the floor. Meanwhile he strokes her bare back lightly making her feel like she's in another world. He sloly unites someof her straps. He then smoothly kisses her neck upto her shoulders. He embraces her waist and picks her up. He lies her on the bed. She closes her eyes and he lies on her side. He looks at her. She rests her head on his arm and hugs him. Her lips kiss his bare chest. Her holds her hand and then moves from her fingers to her arm and then her back. He lightl strokes it as he rubs his feet with hers. She does the same. As the night shines on their beautiful faces the candles go out and they sleep as if they have never slept b4.
The next morning vidya gets up. She slowly moves up and notices that sagar has his hand on her. She slowly moves it away. She then gets off the bed. She goes to take a shower and comes out after a while. She walks to the vanity to dry her hair. She steps on something. When she looks down it's the necklace she wore last night. As she picks it up she remembers last night and smiles. She begins drying her hair. AS she is drying her hair with her towel someone knocks on the door. She goes to open it. It is Chandra.
C: Good morning babhi jan.
V: Good morning.
C: Arrey ye kya sagar abi tak sora hai aur bar hume valime ki tayari karni hai. Jaldi se utao use.
V: Mein?
C: Hain to aur kya. Biwi ho tum uski. Ab jaldi se utao use. Aur hain ye juice be tum dono pele na.
V: Tik hai. Thank u. Chandra leaves and closes the door behind her. Vidya sets the juice on the table. She walks over to walk up sagar. She moves him gently but he doesn't get up. She deicides to let him sleep some more. As she walks away sagar grabs her hand. She turns around. She sits by him. He gets up and lays his head in her lap wrapping himself around her stomach. She lightly strokes his hair. He then moves his face looking at vidya.
S: Vidya…
V: Hm….
S: Tum aaj both achi lag ri ho. Very beautiful.
V: Aap bi both ache lag re hai.
S: Me?
V: Mhm.
S: Vidya me apne raat wale kapre me hoon to me acha kaise lagoon ga.
V: Aap to har waqt ache lagte hain.
S: Aur tum bi. Oh hain woh chandra kya ka ri ti.
V: Aap jag re te?
S: Hain woh chandra ne jab knock kia toh meri ank kol gai.
V: Oh… woh chandra ka ri ti ke me aapko uta doon take hum valima ke tayari kar sake.
S: Humari tayari sirf ye hai ke hum dono ache tarike se tayar hojai. Hana?
V: gee. Itne dino se to ye hi kare hum.
S: I know right.
V: Umm me aapke lapre nikaldoon?
S: Sure. He gets up and vidya goes to the closet. She turns around with black pants, black, coat, and a blue shirt. She was also wearing a blue sari.
V: Ye panegain?
S: OF course. He takes the clothes.
S: Me bas abhi ata hoon shower le kar.
V: Ok.
S: Aur hain… He kisses her on the cheek.,
S: I love you. He then goes to take a shower. She sits on the bed waiting for him. She gets a little tired so she closes her eyes as she rests her back on the backrest of the bed. After a while she feels someone's hand on her face. She opens her eyes and sagar was sitting infront of her with his hand on her face.
S: Tak gai ho?
V: Nai me bas asi hi. She gets sits next to Sagar. She is just about ready to leave when sagar stops her. She looks at him. They look into each other's eyes. After a while vidya feels embarrased so she looks down. Sagar holds her face up and smiles at her. She feels as if she wants to embrace him. So she puts her head on his chest and hugs him. He hugs her back. After a while they hear a knock on the door. They both look at the door.
S: Mein dek ta hoon. Vidya looks at door as sagar opens it. It was chandra.
C: Shukar hai tum dono ut gai. Ab chalo neeche bot tayari karni hai humne.
S: Humne?
C: Hain tum me, aur vidya.
S: Excuse me kal vidya ko tum logo ne itna takadiya use who itne heavy kapre pana kar aur phri teen chaar ganto ke liye use aik hi position me beta kar. Aur upar se woh itni late soi hai. I am sorry par vidya koi kam nai kari gi. Vidya walks up to him.
V: Sagar muhje koi itaraz nai kam karne se.
S: Par vidya…
C: Uf ho. Mene kab kaha ke ye kam kare. Me toh iske parlor jane ka ke ri ti. Idiot. Ise waqt par tayar hona hai. Aur tumhe bi. Ab chalo neeche aao aur nashta karo. Chandra leaves.
S: Chale…
V: Chale… It is night time and the valima is starting. Vidya is wearing a red sari and sagar is wearing black pants, a black shirt, and a red coat over it. They are standing next to each other as guests come and meet them. Soon the spotlight hits them. The song zara sa from jannat plays and sagar asks vidya if she wants to dance. She agrees:
zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
zara sa apna le banaa…
zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
zara sa yaadon mein basaa…
main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah.. sagar as his hand on her waist and his holding one of her hands while she has the other one on his shoulder.
wo-o-o … o-o-o….. they start slow dancing.
zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
zara sa apna le banaa…
zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
zara sa yaadon mein basaa… they continue dancing and have an eye lock.
main tere, main tere
kadmon mein rakh dun yeh jahaan
mera ishq dewaangi… he thriwls her around two times and brings her back to the same postion.
hai nahi, hai nahi
aashiq koi mujhsa tera
tu mere liye bandagi
main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah…. His grip on her waist becomes tighter.
wo-o-o … o-o-o….. he puls her out of his arms and then rolls her back into his arms where she his leaning on him.
zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
zara sa apna le banaa…
zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
zara sa yaadon mein basaa… he starts rocking her back and forth.
kehe bhi de, kehe bhi de
dil mein tere jo hai chhupaa
khwaahish hai jo teri.. turns her around.
rakh nahi, rakh nahi
parda koi mujhse eh jaan
karle tu mera yakeen
main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah.. begin dancing the same away again.
wo-ho… o-o-o-o…
wo-o-o … o-o-o….. they stop dacnign everyone claps. Chinu makes an announcement.
CH: Dosto, bhaio, aur bano. Aaj me apne dost ko aik asa tofa dena chata hoon jis se uske dil me woh hasa jag jai ke uska pehla pyar kab huwa. Sagar, Vidya, ye mere aur shalu ke taraf se. He gets up the stage and in the back a slide comes down. They show pictures of sagar and vidya when they were young and from the time they went to the farm house. After the slide show ends sagar goes and hugs chinu. Vidya hugs shalu. Sagar goes up to the stage.
Precap: Contuning of valima.

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