Kabhi Na Hoga Juda Hum - Part 3 Pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update! I hope they get along! 😃



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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: LoveAmarDivya

😉 hey yaar...im new here..ur update awesome...
keep it up yaar...
btw well done...



waitin for another update 😊 😉



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nelly34

awsome job.. 👏
pls cont sonn
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yvaine

Arre.. Im late for the show!! Sapna... plss cont naa.. aur jaldi 😛 cant wait for the next "episode"



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: charri7878

Great update!
Can't wait for Vidya and Sagar to
beging flirting with eachother... 😳
Plz cont soon!

- Charri 😛



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for giving me so much love and support also I promise that I won't disappoint anyone. Anyways thank - you to everyone and mostly cutey55 (who helped me write Vidya and Sagar scene so the credit doesn't go to me, but her.

👏 Special Thanks to Cutey55 👏

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Part Three

Recap - Vidya goes running downstairs, hugs her father than takes his files and put them into his study room than join the rest for lunch. Everyone chatted away even Vidya got to know few things about Dev and his family, but the only question is who is Dev Juju's younger brother....
Vidya pulled Kaajal to the side and asked who is your loveable devar, who you been talking since you came....
Kaajal (smiled at Vidya) than points at Sagar, who was standing ten feet away from Kaajal and Vidya. Vidya was totally impressed by her Juju's younger brother Sagar, who was quiet handsome, dashing, and sexy even much better looking than Shiv and Abhi.
Kaajal: Vidya, what are you thinking?
Vidya: Nothing
Vidya goes running toward her father and asked for few malamaal; Sujal without saying anything he gave Vidya so much cash for her weekly spending or usually she would borrow money from Abhi or Samrat.

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Nearly in the afternoon, no-body was home except for Kashish (Vidya's Mother), who was papering for tonights dinner by making Kaajal, Robbie, and Vidya's favorite dish.

Kashish was busy making Vidya's favorite "Black Channa Malsa" and Robbie's favorite "Pasta with Cheddar Cheese Sauce" and for Kaajal "South Asian Dish - Dosa".

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[Sujal's Office]

Sujal (Vidya's Father) was proof-reading one of his file given by his employees. In-between he decides to call his daring wife Kashish since they kids aren't home. Sujal puts his file down, picks up his cell-phone, dial Kashish's number at home, and waits for her to pick up........

[Kashish in the Kitchen]

Kashish was in-between making Robbie and Kaajal's dish when her cell-phone rings. Kashish stops in-between, picks up her cell-phone and talks with her husband for 20mins than finish up inside the kitchen and decides to take a nice, relaxing shower.

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[Shopping Mall - Robbie helping Kasturi Shop and also Romancing at same time]

Robbie was sitting on a chair waitting for Kasturi, (who was trying on all the dress - she picked or Robbie picked).

[Inside Fitting Room]

Kasturi was trying on "Blueish - Pink Lehnga - same as this one - "

Kasturi tried her best in tyeing the dorin, but she couldn't so she called Robbie on his cell-phone and asked him to come inside and help her cause everyone else is busy in themselves.

[Robbie Inside the Fitting Room]

At first Robbie couldn't help himself from kissing Kasturi on her back than tickled her on the back. Afterwards he was helping her tie the dori while romancing at same time.

Underneath her breath she cursed herself for calling Robbie because now he won't leave her alone after finding out her weakness and she is trickles.

{Now we will leave Robbie and Kasturi romanicing with one another while our favorite jodi are finally going to meet and talk for the first time and this scene was written by "Cutey55" so the credit goes to her not me 😳}

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[Sagar and Vidya's Scene "thanks to Cutey55 for writing it"]

Vidya walks in a store, where it's full of a variety of clothes wiht many colors as possible. She enters the store with her elegant walk. She starts swaying her hand with clothes and looks for the perfect shirt for her father. SHe cant seem to find one and now is getting annoyed.

V- uffo, yaha tho kuch bhi nahin hai, main dusra dukaan pe chalthi hoon. She was about to exit the store when her glance was faced towards a guy holding a bright blure shirt. She looked at it curiously and then started to walk towards that guy.

V- excuse me? The guy then turned around and faced her.She gazed at him with amasement and curiposity flowing through her mind. She had stopped there for a while with no words coming out of her mouth. Sagar also started at her with wide eyes. SHe later on snapped out of it and he also snapped out of it.

S- gee apni ..kuch kaha?

V- haa umm kya aap mujhe yeh dikhasakthe hai, jo shirt aapka haath main hai? Sagar looked at her with a pleasant smile and handed the shirt to her. Vidya started to touch the shirt elegantly and was turning the shirt to chek whther it was of good quality or not. As she was touching the shirt, the shirt fell from her hans and fell on the tiled floor. Vidya was confused at how it fell from her hand. Sagar also thought of helping out. Both bent down to get the shirt and both hands touched. Vidya looked up first at him to see Sagar was still looking down. Then Sagar slowly brought up his gaze to Vidya. Both their eyes meet and both stay there for a minute or so.

S- umm yeh lijiye aapka shirt...Vidya suddenly snapped out of it and picked up the shirt from his hands and stood up. Sagar also stood up. Vidya wrapped her hair behind hr ear and started to talk to Sagar.

V- accha bhaisaab, mujhe woh shirt dikhana. She points to a light green shirt and Sagar hands it to her in confusion.

S-[thinks] yeh ladki mujhse order kyun karehe? Kya yeh kud nahin karsakthi yeh sub?

V- aur woh shirt bhi dikhana please.....

S- aap kud kijiye mujhe jaana hai

V- arrey yeh kya karehe?

S[stops his steps] huh? kya karahoon? Main tho bas jaaratha...

V- yeh kaise baath karehe aap, aap yaha ke salesman hai aur aap apni dukhaan se hi jaarehe? Sagar looks at her in confusion ad makes a weird look at her.

V- aise kyun dekhrehe aap hume?

S- ummm apko kya lagtha hai ki main salesman hoon?

V- haa, isme poonchne vaali kya baath hai?

S-[laughs] main tho yaha ki salesman nahin hoon....He puts on a pleasant smile on his lips.

V- hu? matlab aap yaha kaam nahin karthe----gets cut off by Sagar.

V- gee nahin---he skakes his head

V[embarassed] ooo sorry main samjha ki aap- she looks away in embarassement.

S- its ok, vaise main sagar hoon.

V- main Vidya

S- vaise aap shopping kiskilye karehe?

V- oo main apni papa kilye karehoon.

S- oo tho kya main aapka madat karsakthi hoon?

V- umm thik hai aap ka marzi

They both go the stands looking for shirts. Each person gets out a shirt and asks eachother how it looks. While this al happens,Sagar happenes to find a black shirt that seems perfect to the fit.

S- yeh kaisa lagega, color bhi bohoth accha hai.

V-[looks at the shirt and is shocked] umm actually-----Before Vidya could say anything he agrees to buying the shirt.

S- thik hai na? chalye ab karidthe hai. He walks towards the counter to buy it when Vidya feels dizzy and starts pressing her head with her fingers. As Sagar was walking by he noticed that Vidya wasn't there with him, he looks back and sees tat Vidya feels dizzy and was bout to faint. He quickly runs to her and Vidya unfortunately faints but in his arms.

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I think i'll stop right here cause I have to update my other fan-fics and many other things.

Also next few parts will be on Dev and Kaajal's wedding ceremony and during this someone else will also get married 😉.

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Sapna










Edited by Sapna_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hahahaha thnXX sapna for creditin it to me but honestly it was ur ideas!!!
plZ cotinue soooon<33333333
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Amasing update!
Beautiful scene Tahmina<33333
Cont soon!

- Charri
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Keep up the good work

Nisha

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