DOUBLE DHAMAL - Pg 22 Part 10 Pls Read. - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok, no problem! 😉
Wish you good luck on your exams! 😳

- Charri 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^ thanks charri .. i m so glad ...all r so concerned abt my exams 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus



thanks for understanding narmz😃

its okkie....😳btw my name is Narmeen i thought i'd jus tell u...and ur name is....?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

its okkie....😳btw my name is Narmeen i thought i'd jus tell u...and ur name is....?



i m Affy 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh okkie...my mates name is Affy....nice to meet u 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

oh okkie...my mates name is Affy....nice to meet u 😳



oh is it? nice to meet u too narmeen 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Before proceeding further i wud just like to tell u guys that there is going to be a new entry soon in the fanfic. Actually there are 2 new entries out of which one is going to happen really later.. almost at the time of the story's end. So held ur breath and keep waiting😉

Part 3

Vidya cudnt believe her eyes when she saw Sagar in front of her. Suddenly someone snapped his fingers.

Sagar : (snapping the fingers) Excuse me..(Vidya still didnt pay attention...) Excuse me Miss ur papers...(Sagar shakes her a little)

Vidya gets back to her senses.

Vidya : Oh thanks. I m sorry for everything.. i m really sorry .. so sorry .. (she keeps going on..)

Sagar : its ok ... 😕 shes a little weird (he thinks)

They both get up and Sagar starts moving forward and went down the stairs .He has this confused face... Vidya who still cudnt believe she saw Sagar starts moving for her class but still lking behind to see Sagar when again she bams on someone.

Vidya : Ouuuuuuuuuch! Whose this?

Kirti: Ouch... Vidya whats this? always dreaming.... Sameer calls u right, Ms Dreamy!

Vidya : Oh come on nw u dont start... u knw what happened just now? i saw Sa...

Before she cud say Kirti interrupts.

Kirti : What? By the way , even i have something to shw u but lets do tht later... we r getting late for the class.

Vidya : huh ... i m damned bored with these classes ... lets go anyway...

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After the classes:

Vidya : I think i cud have taken a nap easily .... Mrs Desai gives such a boring lecture .... anyway leave it ... by the way what were u going to shw me ?

Kirti : first u tell me ... u had something to say...

Vidya : well i was abt to say it then only .... but u didnt let me ... u knw what, i met Sagar in the morning ..

Kirti : what?! u mean tht singer ? dont tell me u r crazy on him...

Vidya : umm ..well .... 😃

Kirti : even if u r ... hes least bothered .... he already has many behind him and hes behind only ONE.... so better forget him..

Vidya : well yeh i knw .... that fool, idiot😡 .... the only hurdle in my way ... 😡 anyway nw ur turn ...

Kirti : oh yeh .. lk this ( kirti removes a big plastic bag which had something special for Vidya)

Sagar already has a girfriend who is Vidya's No.1 enemy in the university and therefore a hurdle for her. She will enter soon as the first entry as said above😊
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In the evening:

While Divya and Kimi start walking towards the restaurant Divya lks at the pani poori wala and the kids surrounded by him.

Divya : hey Kimi lk over there, a pani poori stall.. lets go and eat.

Kimi : Divya, r u mad?

Divya : whats the problem?

Kimi : eeew... u r going to eat tht stall stuff .. all unhygeinic and uncovered stuff .... i m not at all going to participate with u.. and what if aunt comes to know?... she is sure gonna kill you.

Divya : Oh come on... nothing is going to happen.... (she holds Kimi's hand) come with me.. Bhaiyya pani poori banaa kar dena ...

Bhaiyya : jee memsaab.

one of the kids lk at Divya and whispers to his buddy ..

friend1 : ey woh dekh.... kaun hai ...

friend2 : kaun hai re ... pani poori khane de na..

friend1 :Divya Nanda ... arey woh Star hai na jiski photo ghar ke bahar chipki hui hai woh hai ....

Divya listens to their talk silently and smiles.

friend2 : kya baat kar raha hai...woh yaha pani poori wale ke paas kya kar rahi hai ...

friend1 : chal uska autograph lete hai ...

friend1&2 : madam autograph dedo na ...

Divya : (smiles and gives them the autograph) aap dono ka naam kya hai.

friend2 : main chinku aur ye pinku.

Kimi : naam bhi apne jaise hi hai "unhygeinic"

Divya : come on Kimi ... (to kids) bohat acche naam hai ...

kids : thank u madam .... waise aap yaha kya kar rahi hai aap ko to badi hotel me khana chahiye na...

Kimi : lk the kids are smarter than u!

Divya : ssshhh Kimi ... (to kids) kyu main yahaan nahi khaa sakti?

friend1 : nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai madam ...

Divya : phir aise kyu bol rahe ho ..

kids : kyunki aap to bohat badi star ho na ... to aap yahan kyu aai ...

Divya : maze lene 😃

friend1 : accha.. chal chinku jate hai ...madam taataa ..

Divya : bye bye baccho😊

Later tht evening Divya enjoys eating pani poori where as Kimi feels it unhygeinic to have it but cudnt resist it for long due to temptation.😉😆

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I hope u all enjoyed the part. The story is progressing slowly. Please leave comments . Thanks.😊

Edited by talkativetaurus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awesome Affy plz countinue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

that was awesome Affy plz countinue soon 👏 👏



thanks narmeen ... i ll do it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Really awesome update Affy!!! 😛 😉

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